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Virman FF: Tale of two people:*Note pg 140* (Page 46)

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Its an amazing update anjii! :D
Jeeman scene Heart
jiju sali bonding time
Continue soon!

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:21am | IP Logged
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SORRY FOR THE LATE COMMENT.
THANK YOU FOR THE PM.

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 1:09pm | IP Logged

omg omg omg omg
i read ur whole ss at once its so freaking good
i dont even know where to begin from im not even kidding
omg the beginnnign was so sad...
y are virman separating..nooo
okay im pretty sure maya has to do with this
poor virat hes so heart broken omg i felt so bad
the way jeevika shouted at manvi...
the bros bonding
virat and manvis feelings
everything is just portrayed so perfectly omg
every charaters emotions or personality is conveyed so perfectly
the reader reading would understand right away
i dont know but the way you write it
just makes the reader wanna read on and read im not even kidding seriously
ur such a great writer...
 every update has its own essence to it
or something that the reader cant help but fall in
love with it
 aww devar-bhabhi bond was very well writtenClapClap
 virat's break downn infront of jeevika touched my heart.
they way she consoled virat and viraat gives her place of his mother
its just all so emotionally perfect.
dude and ur song selection for each scnes are so perfect
ur so descriptive in wrting or creating an image for the reader
but the song just helps get rid of all the blurs in the readers
mind if there are any
perfect song selection for the perfect scene
nd the last four lines of this update was mind blowing

                          Another Love gone wrong'

                         Another heart to Shattar'

                        Welcome to Reality'

                       Where feelings doesn't matters'

it was also wonderful and made me cry

i feel very bad for manvi when jeevika yelled at her

also feel sorry for jeevika b'coz she didn't do that purposly.

love the viren manvi's talk.

omg hopefully manvi tells him everything
im in love with ur story...dude please do update fast
nd add me in ur pm list
nd do pm me wen u update
pleaseee updateee sooon


Edited by littles12 - 08 April 2013 at 6:03pm

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
omg what an update Anjie!!!!
This was just fabulous and you left it at such a point that I'm going crazy
I loved the beginning part where you showed Viren's emotions
I could totally picture that scene of him crying an Jeevika being there
great job and thank you for the pm always
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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
wow cutie the update is getting more and more emotional.

i think i should buy many tissue boxes.i hate u for making me cry 

but love u for giving us such a wonderful story.

first the story started with virman  emotion.den virika's concern for 

their siblings den VV bros emotional turmoil den devar bhabhi bond 

and jeeman fight now jeeju saali secret.u have portrayed all the 

emotions.hatts off girl.continue soon and plz reveal the truth.
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by naina927

first of all i am sorry anji... alley meli angel mujhse gussa mat ho na... please...!!!!
 
here goes my sorry gift for u...
 
part 3
 
it was fab but there was something that bothered me... the excuse manvi gave for breaking virat's heart... cmon she was being unreasonable... and virat who loves her like anything would never believe it so easily but he did... then i felt like knocking my sense into him n telling him to go n confront manvi... forget confrontation, i wanted virat to go n make manvi tell him the truth herself... ignoring manvi was the only option he felt was right... n i was like cmon dude.. go n win her... but the dinng table scene that followed was nice... i liked it...
ps : hope i didnt sound harsh n rude...
 
 
part 4
 
virat's dream was perfect n it clearly showed the pain n agony one goes through when he separates from his love. i loved these part very much...

Virat: (expressionless face)... Azad kiya tumhe,, apni life se,, apne dil se,, apne pyaar ki dor se... Ab na tum meri kuch aur na me tumhara... Ooh sorry.. me tou tumhara kabhi kuch tha hi nahi... But u know what.. me tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga.. Chah kar b nahi..
 
Virat was standing by the window of his room looking at the stars.. He was in deep thought.. he was thinking that y all this happened always with him...Y no one loves him... He gave his all attention n love to her.. but what she did?? just broke her heart...
Its a truth that when u start to give so much importance to sumone.. u tend to lose your value in their lives.. The same happened with him.. Did a loving soul,, a pure soul deseves this?? The greater ur capacity of love.. the greater your capacity is to feel the pain... Was virat use to of it?? His heart broke into million pieces two times... will he able to over come the same pain second time???
 
Virat: Pyaar ka gehra samandar jo sirf paani ki ek boond ko tarasta raha.. jise kabhi apni pyaas bujhane ka moqa na mila,, vo badnaseeb hun me.. jis ne chaha apna banaya.. jis ne chaha chor diya...
 
this was just perfect...!!!!
 
 
TO BE CONT...
 


As it was my first piece of writting so i didn't knew what to write n in my stupidity i wrote such unreasonable thing.. n u r talking about virat so he never believed it but when maanvi was continuosly hurting him so his mind took over his heart n than he thought from his mind... n sumtimes we believe what is in-front of our eyes rather than what we feels... hope it helps u...
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Wooow again an emotional update
Truely awwsum..cant wait for d shock
plz update asap

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
hey anjali,  lovely update and let me tell u one thing , the title suits the story very well...
thanks for the pm 
pm me when u update...continue soonSmile

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