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cutiepie2244

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Artii159

Awesome update Anjali, as usual..I luvd it...Haaye kya hoga in dono ka...Maanvi luvs him so much dat she can't c him in pain...but she's da 1 who causing more pain 4 him...n she's leaving him, Vadhera house..YYY???OuchCry

Viraat's dialogue yaar...awesome, it touched my hrt,,,wen he said..

Tum jab b mjhse puchti thi k kya me tumhara hun.. me humesha tumhara chehra haaton mein le kar kehta tha k "ha me tumhara hi hun"... Par kaash mene us waqt tumse b puch liya hota k "kya tum b meri ho"... Aaj apne aap par sharam aati hai mjhe k kya mera pyaar itna kamzor tha k me tumhen apna bana hi nahi paya... I hate myself...
 
OMG I luvd Devar-Bhabhi's scene it was so emotional, he luvs her as his mother...dat was so touching...dere dialogue was awesome..eps Viraat's...

Viraat:
aap mere liye meri dusri maa ho.. Mom k baad mene aap hi ko apni maa mana hai'(Aww...dat was so sad yet cute...he respects her da way he respects his mother...Confused)

I really luvd da way she was consoling him, even though, she herself is a very emotionaly type of person, n da person who hurted her Devar is none other den her own lil Sister...luvd Jeevika here a lotz...

Jeevika: Virat tum bilkul b un-lucky nahi ho' Tumhare paas maa hai,, virenji hain,, bua,, dadaji me hum sub hain

Virat: Par pyaar'.. Vo kyun nahi hai??? ( I felt bad 4 him here as well, sure he has evry1 wid him, but he doesn't hve da person who he loves more den his lyf beside him, de person who he luvs more den anythng)

Virat: (turned) ' Sub yahi kehte hain' bhai b yehi keh rahe the.. lekin koi mere dil ka haal kyun nahi samajhta.. Apne aap ko takleef mein dekh dekh kar tou ab me b thak gaya hun' Me tou apne aap ko ek kitaab ka vo safaa samjhta hun jise sub ne parha,, parkha.. phir na samjhte hue use hans kar jala daala' Meri b zindagi hai,, sapne hain,, armaan hain.. par me unhe kyun pura nahi kar skta..Ab tou gham sehne ki itni aadat hogae hai k har gham ab kam hi lagta hai'(Ishhh...can't c dis hurt Viraat,,,CryCryCry he is so damn hurt, Maanvi is rite, she hurt him more den Maya...Broken Heart)

Ok so wat surprise is Viraat talking bout, dat eventually evry1 will b happy...???

LOLLOLLuvd it wen Viren said..

Viren: Are aaj virat ki train itni khamosh kyun hai??

Viren: Matlab yeh k wese tou humesha express train ki tarha bolti rehti ho.. aaj kya hogaya?? (Heheh, Viraat's train,,nyc name Anjali..Tongue)

Aww, Shilpa is sho cute, luvd da way she convinced Maanvi 2 sing...hw cute...

I really luvd da song, it was sad, with lots of luv visible in their eyes 4 each other, Awesome choice as usual Anjali...

The last part wen Viraat was crying along wid Viren was really very sad, poor dem..CryOuch

                          Another Love gone wrong'

                         Another heart to Shattar'

                        Welcome to Reality'

                       Where feelings doesn't matters'

Awesome quote Anjali...its true, n amazing...juz luvd it along wid ur update as well...Really an amazing update, thnks a ton 4 dis wonderfull update, plz plz plz continue soon, but get well soon 1st...thnks a lot 4 da pm plz do pm me wen u'll update...thnks once again..SmileSmileSmile




Thank u...

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:06am | IP Logged
It's an amazing update
really loved it...
continue soon! :D

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima06

hey anjali...
faboulus update dear
loved the dialouges to the core
 Apne aap ko takleef mein dekh dekh kar tou ab me b thak gaya hun' Me tou apne aap ko ek kitaab ka vo safaa samjhta hun jise sub ne parha,, parkha.. phir na samjhte hue use hans kar jala daala' Meri b zindagi hai,, sapne hain,, armaan hain.. par me unhe kyun pura nahi kar skta..Ab tou gham sehne ki itni aadat hogae hai k har gham ab kam hi lagta hai'
these dialouges were awesome...
virat still love her.he won't be able to hate her no matter what happens...even she said her by herself that she was faking this love thing but still he knows her...
and these were heart piercing words that i wish i might have done that
Tum jab b mjhse puchti thi k kya me tumhara hun.. me humesha tumhara chehra haaton mein le kar kehta tha k "ha me tumhara hi hun"... Par kaash mene us waqt tumse b puch liya hota k "kya tum b meri ho"... Aaj apne aap par sharam aati hai mjhe k kya mera pyaar itna kamzor tha k me tumhen apna bana hi nahi paya... I hate myself... 
u are amazing writer dear Smile
nd the song was great...
i hope mystery would be solved soon Smile
n virman will solve their problemxx soonWink
loved ur update..*clappingxxxClapClap*
continue soon dear...
thanks for the pm


Thank u dear.. Glad that u liked it...

cutiepie2244

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by naina927

Originally posted by cutiepie2244

NOTE...

Hi guys.. how r u all??? Fine na???

I know that u all r losing interest from this story,, i know that m stretching this story too much.. But plz try n understand if i will make this story fast than kuch samajh nahi aaega kisi ko b... Its that type of story.. But plz plz dun lose interest from it... I promise not in next but after that it will b above ur expectations... N i will try to make it not to stretch...

N people who did "RES" .. R u going to "UNRES" or i should consider it as ur comment... n if u dun have the intension to "UNRES" it.. i totally understand.. I will consider it as ur comment 4 sure.. I will b happy that atleast u made up ur mind to comment...

N m way too buzi these days.. my mind had been damaged 4 sum reasons..but i will update next part soon...As soon as i can.. n will not diss-appoint u.. I hope u all will understand my situation...

                  Bye To All...
 
 
alley anji... people will read it... dnt wrry... its ur story n it will go the way u want it to be so just follow ur heart n write whatever u feel is ryt... and no one can understand the plot more than u as u are writer so have confidence in urself swthrt... Big smile n i think i too have to unres my comment... i am running away... else u will beat me up... bye...Tongue by the way take care Big smile


M waiting 4 ur comment since part 2.. n it reach at Part 6... But i will wait 4 ur comment till the end.. N waiitng when u r ready to UNRES...

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sapphhire

at times things stretched out are nice. I love your story because everthing is explained in such amazing detail. please don't make the story fast. okay it's true that I am very impatient to tknow the reason between manvi's behaviour but I want to enjoy the story. I about being busy totally understand thousands things in life to handel so only when you are free and feel like updating the update. love your story.



THANK U SO MUCH DEAR.. U TRUELY UNDERSTOOD THANXX  4 IT...

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
It was a very nice long update AnjaliClapClap
Hope Virman will solve their problems soon Big smile
The song was also brilliant ClapClap
Continue soonTongue 
Thanks for the pmSmile


Edited by Duggukede - 04 April 2013 at 8:34am

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Duggukede

Even though it was a short update it was sooo great that I cant express myself Clap
Hope Virman will solve their problems soon Big smile
The song was also brilliant ClapClap
Continue soonTongue 
Thanks for the pmSmile


Was it a short update?????

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 8:31am | IP Logged
wow amazing just loved it yaar and anjali thanks fr the pm and pls update soon :)

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