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Ariya OS: Apology

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Hello everyone, well here I am with a Ariy OS after a long time.

I started this OS as part of challenge given to me by Kashish for WOTW thread and I always wanted to finish it but never got a chance to, but now I have finished it.
 
It started out as something completely differen but turned into something else altogehter. I don't think its that good but I am posting it anyway.
 
This one is dedicated to all my choti, choti, besharam behnas of AT Droolers thread. Girls per your request here it is, hope its upto the standards.
 
 

OS: Apology

 

 

"Riya!" Arjun shouted but it did him no good since Riya refused to stop let alone listen to him. He had been trying to apologize to her since this morning but she refused to even be in the same room with him. Each time he entered the room she would leave and if she couldn't leave then she kept her face turned away from him.

Arjun was quickly losing patience, in fact, he was no longer in the mood to pacify her and be calm when saying he is sorry for the harsh words he spoke to her the day before. He saw her enter her cabin, then glanced at his teammates who were trying hard not to laugh at his predicament.

Arjun saw Rathore hide his amusement and glared at him. "What is so funny Rathore?"

Rathore stopped pretending and grinned at his friend openly. "You," he said to Arjun. "It is great to see the great Arjun Raute brought down notch or two." Chottu and Shree snickered but the smiles were wiped off of their faces when Arjun turned his glare on them.

By this time Arjun was fuming and left the conference room without saying another word. He marched straight to Riya's cabin and barged in without knocking on the door. His anger melted instantly when he saw Riya standing by the window, silent tears rolling down her cheeks. He turned to close and lock the door then walked towards her.

Riya heard the door close and lock and wiped her tears quickly. "What do you want Arjun sir? Leave me alone, I don't want to hear anything you have to say." She tried to walk past him but he grabbed her arm to stop her.

Riya instantly struggled to get out of his grip, "Let me go sir, I told you I don't want to hear anything you have to say."

Arjun ignored her and kept gazing into her eyes, he knew he had hurt her badly this time; the pain in her eyes was hard to miss. He felt ashamed for hurting her so badly. He wrapped his other arm around her to halt her struggles then slowly walked her backward until her back was against the wall and there was no way for her to escape.

He leaned forward and kissed her forehead, "I am sorry Riya I am an idiot." He then kissed both of her eyelids close, "Please forgive me for being so arrogant and rude," he moved to her left cheek to give her a lingering kiss before moving to her right cheek to do the same, "Please give me one more chance to make up for my stupidity."

By this time Riya had melted but she continued to hold back and not acknowledge his apology.

 Arjun cupped her face with both of his hands and gave her the gentlest kiss on her lips; once he felt her lips under his he couldn't help but deepen the kiss. That's all it took for both Arjun and Riya to forget everything but the feelings the kiss aroused in each.

 Arjun pulled back reluctantly, waited for Riya to open her eyes then smiled at her gently, "I love you Riya Arjun Suryakant Raute and I am so, so sorry for hurting you like I did."

Riya finally gave him her signature dimpled smile and Arjun's heart skipped a beat seeing the smile he so loved on her.

Riya couldn't help but forgive him; he may be an idiot, arrogant and rude sometimes but she loves him to distractions. He lashes out when he is angry and he is quick to lose his temper but underneath the tough man is heart of gold that she fell in love with instantly. "I forgive you Arjun Suryakant Raute, only because I love you too and I know you didn't mean the harsh words you threw at me."

Riya moved away from him to walk toward the door but turned and grinned at him. "By the way I forgave you with the first kiss but just wanted to see if you would actually break your own rule of no romance at work." She said with a wide grin and a wink then walked out of the office quickly.

Arjun grinned and shook his head as he watched his wife run out of her own office. Life with his Riya is never dull he thought to himself and followed her to the conference room. Oh I am not yet finished with you yet Mrs. Raute, I have lot more to make up for and by the time I am finished with you, you will never think that you are not loved.

 

Rathore raised an eyebrow; Chotu and Shree gave Riya a teasing grin when she entered the conference room breathlessly; her cheeks flushed. They knew exactly what might have transpired between the couple in private.

Chotu leaned over to Shree, "Shree if you had bet me for real you would have been short 100 rupees today. Told you this time Arjun sir is going to succeed in appeasing our Riya."

Shree grimaced then grinned at his friend. "Yeah you are right and I don't think it's over yet." He said pointing to Arjun who had walked in at that moment.

Riya didn't dare look up from the file she was working on when Arjun walked into the conference room. She felt his heated gaze on her and bent her head even more to hide her heated cheeks. She might as well have waved a red flag in front of a bull by revealing what she did in the conference room. She knew him well enough to know that she should be prepared for anything.

Arjun took his seat, pulled the file he was working on in front of him but his full concentration was on his wife who was trying to hide her face from everyone. He grinned inwardly because he knew why she had bent her head even more when he walked into the conference room.

He twirled a pen between his fingers as he thought about how to make up to his wife for hurting her so much. He knew she had forgiven him but he knew he had crossed all limits this time and apology was not enough to make up for the hurt.

He placed the pen on the table as an idea formed into his head. He and Riya needed to go away for day or two and this is the perfect time to ask Sam to give them time off since there were no major pending cases at the moment. He decided to finish his paper work then approach Sameer later in private. He wanted to surprise Riya but first he wanted to make sure it was okay to take the time off.

Later that evening Arjun walked into their apartment, placed the shopping bags on the sofa then walked straight back to the kitchen where he could hear Riya starting to make dinner preparations.

He leaned against the doorframe for a moment to watch her move around the kitchen so fluidly. He went and wrapped his arms around her small waist just as she reached up for a bowel; he nuzzled her neck and inhaled her sweet scent before giving her a kiss on her pulse point.

Riya gasped when she felt strong arms around her then immediately relaxed when she felt Arjun nuzzled her neck. "Arjun what are you doing?"

Arjun lifted his head then turned Riya around to face him but held on to her so that she doesn't move away from him. He grinned down at her, "If I have to explain what I am doing then it's obvious I am not doing it right."

Riya's eyes widened then she pushed her way out of his arms, "Arjun go freshen up while I start dinner." She said as reached up again for the bowel.

Arjun stopped her midway then brought her hand down to hold it in his hand. "We are not eating at home today. You need to get ready and pack an overnight bag; we are going away from the city for a day."

"Really?" Riya asked with excitement.

Arjun grinned at her childlike expression and thought he made the right decision even if he had to ask Sam for time off and take all the teasing from his best friend too. At the end of the day smile on Riya's lips and the sparkle in her eyes made it all worthwhile.

He kissed her forehead then took her by the hand to walk out of the kitchen. "Really, it's only for one day but at least we will be away from the city, noise and all the crimes."

Riya was excited at the prospect of spending one whole night and one whole day alone with Arjun without any interruption. May be, just may be he was about to grant her big wish, the very thing they had argued about the day before.

"But where are we going?" She asked as he picked up the shopping bags from the sofa on their way to the bedroom.

He turned and winked at her. "It's a surprise, now hurry up." He handed her the bags, "And pack these in the overnight bag too."

Two hours later Arjun pulled up in front of a private beach bungalow. Riya jumped out the car immediately when she saw the place and its surrounding area. This particular bungalow was away from the road and all the others they saw as they drove the hills. It was surrounded by the most beautiful greenery Riya had ever scene. She wanted to run to the back of the place to see if it was just as beautiful but contained herself.

Arjun met her at the front of the car and placed his arm around her waist. "Do you like it?" He asked as he gazed at her happy face.

Riya turned, wrapped her arms around his neck then looked him in the eyes. "I love it, its beautiful. Thank you for bringing me here." She lifted up on her toes and gave him a light kiss on his stubble cheek then immediately ran to the front door of the small house.

"Now hurry up and show me the inside of the house." She shouted when he didn't immediately follow her.

Arjun just shook his head and did just that. He stood to the side and observed her as she explored the small house with a child like wonder. He also looked around and saw the place through her eyes and thought the place had its own charm.

It was small but clean and well kept. It had a small living room in the front; kitchen was at the back of the house, which was also small but it had double doors that lead to outside enclosed, patio. To the right side of the front door was a small hall that led to a single bedroom which also had a small patio attached to it.

Riya explored every nook and cranny of the small house before coming back to him. "Arjun this is a beautiful place," She said as wrapped her arms around him and placed her head on his shoulder to give him a quick hug.

Arjun hugged her back then bent slightly to bury his face in the softness of her shoulder length hair.

He moved away from her bit reluctantly but kept his arms around her. "I am glad you like the place," He released her completely then turned her towards the bedroom. "I have something for you." He said as he led her into the bedroom where he had placed their overnight bag.

He pulled out the shopping bags and handed her one of the bags. "This is for you," he said as he placed the bag in his hand. "I want you to wear this for me tonight."

Riya placed the package on the bed then turned back to Arjun. "You know you don't have to do all this, I really did forgive you and I am over what happened. I understand why you were upset."

Arjun wrapped his one arm around her waist then cupped her face with the other hand. He tilted his head sideways and smiled down at her. "I know you already forgave me but this time I had gone too far and I hurt you by refusing to listen to you."

Riya felt her heart leap up with hope. She wanted to ask him if this meant he was ready to listen to her about starting their own family but she didn't want to mess up the moment in case he was still not ready.

"I love you Riya." Arjun whispered just before he bent his head to capture her lips gently. Riya entwined her arms around his neck, lifted up on her toes to respond to the kiss.

Arjun groaned when she tried to deepen the kiss and released her quickly. He wanted tonight to be perfect. "I am going to go freshen up while you check your gift." He said as he grabbed the other shopping bag and went into the bathroom to freshen up.

Riya stood still for a moment after Arjun enclosed himself in the bathroom then came out of her trance as she glanced at the gift bag on the bed. She wasn't sure what to make of the sudden change in Arjun's behavior, not that she ever doubted his love for her but at the same time she also knew that he was not completely over Roshni when he married her. Arjun always held part of himself back at all times and she didn't know how to breakdown that last invisible barrier.

Riya thought that if they started their own family he would let go of the past finally, not that she wanted to erase Roshni completely out of his heart, but she just wanted him to let go of the fear of losing her like he lost Roshni. She had broached the subject of having a baby after much contemplation on her part but he had blown up when she tried to talk to him and he had said some things that he was obviously feeling bad about now. She hoped that he doesn't end up giving into her request because he was feeling guilty.

Riya sat on the bed then opened the bag, she gasped when she saw the gorgeous black silk Sari. It was simple with only light decorations at the border. Fabric of the sari was shear, smooth and soft.

She couldn't help but smile at his choice; he never ceases to surprise her with his unexpected but perfect gifts. "Do you like it?"

She looked up when she heard him then her breath hitched when she saw him. He was in black slacks and black shirt that was only buttoned up half way. His hair was wet and sticking to his forehead. All other thoughts flew right out of Riya's head as he walked towards her.

Arjun bit the inside of his mouth, to keep from grinning at her, when he saw the glazed look in her eyes. He had seen the lost look on her face when he came out of the bathroom after a quick shower. He had also known what had put the sadness back on his face and wanted to kick himself for putting her in the dilemma. He had realized that he needed to stop living in the past or else he will destroy his future and his second chance at love as soon as he had spoken the harsh words to Riya the other night. He had tried to retract his statement but his she hadn't been ready to listen at the time but now he was going to clear up everything between them so that they could start fresh.

Arjun took her hand to make her stand in front of him. "If you keep looking at me like that our dinner is going to be delayed until breakfast." He said huskily in her ear.

Riya shivered when she felt his warm breath in her ear then she heard his words and flushed because he had caught her staring at him with lustful eyes.

She cleared her throat when he moved back and saw him grin at her. She clutched the Sari to her chest and moved past him but stopped at the bathroom door to look at him one more time before going in and closing the door.

She leaned against the door and tried to calm her galloping heart down to is normal rate then shook her head in expiration at herself for getting tongue tied in front of him even after being married to him and knowing him so intimately for almost a year now. There was something definitely different in the way he was behaving today but she didn't want to get her hopes up too much.

 

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Part 2

 

Thirty minutes later Riya came out of the bathroom, draped in the black sari. She had taken a quick shower because she didn't want to miss any opportunity to spend time with Arjun. She sat in front of the mirror to towel dry her hair then applied light make up to her face before brushing her hair dry. She took one last look in the mirror before walking out of the room.

Arjun stood in the enclosed patio and stared at the full moon as he waited for Riya. He had set the table for dinner and was waiting for her to arrive before he put the food on the table. He had made arrangements with the caretakers of the house for dinner when he called to rent the house for the night.

He turned when he felt Riya's presence behind him. His breath caught in his throat when he saw her in the black sari that looked so perfect on her gorgeous, slender figure. He wanted to go to her and march her right back to the room to show her just what he was feeling at that moment but controlled himself. First he needed to clear the unacknowledged tension between them that he was responsible for.

Arjun needed to tell her what she meant to him, what her presence meant to him in his life. Their marriage had started out because of his physical attraction for her on his part and love on her part but now he needed to show her that it was more than that, it had always been more than the physical attraction that pulled him to her but he had been too afraid to admit that, even to himself.

Arjun had thought that he would never be able to love anyone like he had loved Roshni but here he was, for the second time in his life, in love with another girl who was total opposite of Roshni. He hadn't even realized how strongly he felt for Riya until the other night when he had hurt her with his harsh words.

 Arjun sighed when Riya stayed rooted in one spot instead of coming to him like she would have before. He decided it was up to him to make the moves tonight instead of the other way around. She had forgiven him but she was still not confident about how he would react if she came to him first, he had noticed her slight hesitation and the way she held back when he had flirted with her earlier.

Riya had been ready to embrace him from the back the moment she spotted him starring at the moon but froze in place when she remembered what had happened two nights ago. She couldn't get her feet to move forward in case he rejected her affections once again. She twisted the end of her pallu around her finger as she waited for him to notice her and when he turned she had seen his eyes flare up with passion at first but then the look was replaced with something more than lust and she couldn't decide if that love in his eyes was real or a figment of her imagination.

He has told her he loves her numerous times and she never doubted or questioned his words of love until she looked into his eyes. The eyes that had told its own story whenever she looked into them; Riya looked away because she didn't want to harbor hope of him loving her like he had loved Roshni, the way she loves him. For her it was enough that he loved her so what it wasn't as deep and strong as the love she felt for him.

Arjun walked up to her and kissed her on her cheek, "You look beautiful tonight."

Riya smiled at him, "Thanks, and you look very handsome too."

Arjun was taken back slightly by the formality in her tone but ignored it as he escorted to her to the table. "You sit here while I go get our dinner."

Riya couldn't help but be surprised by his gesture; she didn't know how to respond to this Arjun. Since the beginning of their relationship she had always been the one to take the first step to initiate everything but this new side of Arjun was causing havoc in her heart and mind.

She was almost afraid of his reasons behind this romantic side of him. When he had said they were going away for the night she never expected him to have plans for a romantic evening. She had thought they would go to a place just to rest and relax and to get away from the city for the night.

Arjun placed the tray of food on the table then moved his chair closer to Riya's before sitting down. He served the food in one plate only. He looked up to see her staring him in confusion. He just smiled then scooped up some food in a spoon then held it to her mouth. "Eat Riya then we will talk."

Riya tried to take the spoon from him but he just shook his head and indicated for her to open her mouth. She finally gave into his demand and opened her mouth for him to feed her. When he held more food in front of her mouth she placed her hand on his then turned it towards his mouth to feed him. As the meal progressed with each feeding each other they both started to relax.

By the time they finished their meal the tension between the two of them had melted completely and they were back to being their normal usual self. Riya stood up to help him clean the table but he stopped her. "Leave it Riya, just relax, I am just going to take these plates into the kitchen." He said as he put everything back on the tray to carry back inside the house.

Riya walked to end of the patio, gripped the rail then glanced up at the sky. She saw a shooting star just as Arjun wrapped his arms around her from the back. "Arjun look a shooting star," She said by pointing to it.

Arjun placed his cheek against hers then looked up to see where she was pointing at, "So close your eyes and make a wish." He said with a smile.

Riya turned to him in surprise, "But you don't believe in all that."

"I don't but you do, so why not make your wish, who knows it might come true." He placed his hand on her eyes to close them. "Make a wish Riya."

Riya closed her eyes and made a wish then placed her hand on Arjun's wrist to move his hand from her eyes. She hesitated for a moment but couldn't hold back anymore. She stepped away from him. "Arjun you really didn't have to do all this just for me. I know how important your duty is to you, we didn't have to take a whole day off for you to make up for what happened the other night, I do understand your upset and I promise I will never bring it up again."

Arjun realized how much he had hurt her in order to protect himself. Her words told him how hard she must have worked to keep her true feeling from him just so that he wouldn't feel pressured by her wishes, her wanting to be loved like she deserved to be loved. Her pain was not from the few words he had spoken the other night but it was from him holding back from her. She must have tried hard to keep her insecurities to herself because not once had he felt that she was unhappy in any way until she broached the subject of having a baby. He knew she must have thought that may be giving him a child would bind him to her forever not knowing that he was bound to her forever anyway.

Arjun stepped closer to her then took her hand in his gently. He led her to the swing at the corner of the patio and sat down with her on his lap. He placed on arm around her from the front and rubbed his other hand up and down her almost bare back to relax her into his arms. "Riya look at me." He commanded gently.

Riya couldn't ignore his gentle demand and looked at him. She felt her stomach quiver when she again saw the love and passion for her in his eyes. Her eyes welled up with tears on it's own and hadn't even begun to tell her what was on his mind.

Arjun brought his hands in front to cup her face then kissed her forehead gently. "I love you Riya, not just love but I adore you. I know that I should have said this to you long time ago but I didn't and in order to protect myself I ended up hurting you."

Riya shook her head to deny her pain but he stopped her by placing his index finger on lips. "Don't deny it, just hear me out first, okay?"

Riya nodded slowly and kept gazing into his eyes.

Arjun took her hand again, "I know that our marriage happened because of my physical attraction to you but believe me Riya, that was just so that I wouldn't have to admit to myself that I have truly fallen in love with you. My own fear of losing you like I lost Roshni kept me from admitting to myself that it was already too late to hold anything back because I already loved you too much and if I lost you like I lost Roshni then I would not be able to live at all."

At end of his speech Riya was crying openly and didn't bother to hide her tears from him instead she wrapped her arms his neck and buried her head in the crook of his shoulder as she sobbed in relief.

Arjun also blinked back his tears and wrapped his arms around her tightly. Once she was calm he cupped her face and made her look at him. He gently wiped her tears then kissed her on the forehead. "Now do you believe that we don't have to have a child to bind us together forever?" He asked.

When she nodded her head yes he decided he didn't want to talk about serious things anymore. It had been two days since his wife had properly loved him and he did not want to wait anymore, but he wanted to clear one more thing with her before he showed his wife just how much he loves her.

"Just one more thing Riya," he said as he gazed into her eyes, "I am still not ready to have babies, not because I don't want them with you but because I don't want to share you with anyone just yet, not even our kids."

Riya smiled then placed her forehead on his, "Okay now that I know you will never leave me I am not ready to share you with anyone either."

"Wait a minute, why would you think I would leave you?" Arjun asked her sternly.

Riya jumped up from his arms and turned her back on him. She clenched her hands in front of her as she thought of a proper way to tell him what she had been thinking for a while. "No reason, I just thought eventually you would get tired of me and leave me." She said and waited for him to shout at her for doubting him.

Arjun also stood up and wrapped his arms around her from the back. He bent slightly to rub his stubble cheek against the softness of hers. "You mean you thought I would leave you once my desire for you was abated completely."

When she nodded her head again, he smiled. "Okay then now that it is cleared up its time I showed you just how much I love you and I will never stop wanting you because I don't just want your body I want you, the whole you, not only certain parts, even the parts of you that is hard to understand at times and the part of you that drives me crazy at times too."

Arjun counted off mentally and waited for her to put him in his place. He had only reached five when she turned and glared at him. "I am complicated and hard to understand and I drive you crazy is it? Fine then go find someone who is easy to live with," She turned and walked toward the door in a huff.

Arjun grinned and grabbed her arm before she could take more than two steps. He lifted her to carry her in his arms. "Not so fast sweetheart, let me at least show you what you will miss if you leave me." He chuckled when her cheeks started turning pink.

He carried her all the way to the bedroom before setting her on her feet. He had dimmed the lights in the room, lit the tow thick candles he had found in the kitchen drawer and placed them in the room when he came in to bring the dishes back to the kitchen.

Riya and Arjun didn't care about the surroundings and had eyes only for each other at that point.

Arjun cupped Riya's face and bent to kiss her on the lips; he rubbed his lips against her gently at first and kept his touch light until her lips softened under his and she started to respond to his kiss. He ran his lips at the seam of her lips asking her to let him in and soon as she opened her mouth slightly he deepened the kiss.

Riya placed her hands on Arjun's chest to balance herself even as she moved closer to him to bridge the slight distance between their bodies. She held on to him tightly as she responded to his kiss.

Arjun released her lips when they both gasped for air and trailed his lips down her slender neck and shoulder. He reached up and moved her sari out of the way to gain access to more of her skin as he kissed her down to her cleavage.

Riya was completely lost in the sensation caused by Arjun's kisses to even realize that he had removed her sari completely and she was only in the matching skirt and blouse of the sari. She couldn't stop the moan that escaped her lips as he bit her at the neck lightly then soothed the small bite with an open mouth kiss.

She frantically ran her hands down his back and pulled his shirt from the waistband of his trousers to feel his heated skin then she brought her hands around to his front to unbutton his shirt as he trailed more kisses upward and captured her lips with his again.

She abandoned the shirt buttons as he lifted her again to place her on the bed without breaking the kiss. He lay down beside her and reached for the hooks of her sari blouse in the back.

Time ceased to have any meaning for both Arjun and Riya as they continued to love each other and show each other what they meant to one another.

 

Riya woke from a peaceful sleep by the morning sunlight streaming through the bedroom window. She turned and smiled when she saw Arjun also sleeping with the most peaceful expression on his face that she was seeing for the first time.

She can finally let go of her fears of not being loved by him completely. He had cleared all of her doubts first with his words and then with actions. She flushed just by thinking about all the ways he had loved her through the night. She will never forget this night as long as she lived. Riya placed her head on his shoulder and wrapped her arm around to snuggle into him. "I love you Arjun Suryakant Raute."

She felt his arms go around her as he hugged her, "I love you too Riya Arjun Suryakant Raute, always will." He said softly as they both drifted off to sleep again.

 

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Thanks in advance everyone.

 

My previous Ariya work

 

After that night

Teri Justajoo

 

My Arjun FF

Betrayed by Love

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😉res

i was actually expecting a high voltage love story😆, but you gave us such a wonderful love story, which went straight to ones heart😳
i always felt that it wouldnt be easy for Arjun to be with Riya, at least love wouldnt be what will make them get close, but lust and desire would...
but then gradually Arjun would realise that he had always loved her, despite his insecurities😭
but poor Riya, i could feel her pain, she must have suffered a lot, because she thought the foundation of their marriage was only desire, and one day when Arjun would be fed up with her, he'd leave her😭
i can tell you that's a very big stress that any person can undergo when in love😭
but the ending, the dinner, the conversation and confession was very well done, it was filled with lots of emotions😳
and then the nok-joks, and finally they are really as one😳
Awesome Shilpa😳😉
Edited by haruhi26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Di !!
 
I loved it ...❤️
 
Riya Insecurites were so well described and Arjun way of apologizing was also too gud!!
 
Super -duper Romantic wala tha yeh ...Meri request toh aapko pata hi hai na !!😉😉
Edited by sips_crazy - 11 years ago
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chalo hum bhi res 🤣

Edited

actually i never read much Os but after reading this s i was like 🤪
it was awesome really...
you've done a great nai Mindblowing and bravo job !!!
Hope to see you soon again with another new fresh OS😆

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Dill mera garden garden ho gaya! 😎

Diii!!!!🤗

Kya likhte ho By God! 

I loved it! ❤️❤️


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Amazing Di... loved it...
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Di faint calling
faint wake up
faint wake up rofl
finally wake up!!
omg di maje aa gye..
superb
excellent di
ariya rocks!!
ps. waiting fr my arni di frm u too pls
love u di
tc..!!
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Hey...
Amazing it is...
I didnt feel that i was reading a work of fiction but a story thats real..
It touched my heart.. Seriously... 
Its so necessary to answer the insecurities in a relation otherwise it can eat away the relation...
Thank you for writing such wonderful story...
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OMG..
aap kya kya likhti ho di...
aab mai kya batau..??
thik hai bata he deti hun..
AWESOME..
SUPERB..
FANTASTIC..
Haawt...aur bahot Romantic tha...
mai OS ki baat kar rahi thi...
LOVED IT..