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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 1:18am | IP Logged it...cant wait for d next page...write it quickly...and thank you for d PM Smile

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Thanks for the PM Poo Hug
I so love this mr and mrs Bhatnagar of your story, brings a big grin on my face!!! Big smile
Loving it and waiting eagerly for the next one! Update soon!

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excellent poo

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ClapClapClap where were u Poo with this talent? ...Superb...MM FB scene was Day Dreaming

I must say...U r an extreme romantic person Embarrassed Wink

Thanks for the PM n Next Page ASAP ! Big smile Cant wait now... Smile

Oh forgot to add...Most logical reason of seperation n describtion how they handled it... i ve ever read in fan-fictions on this forum Embarrassed Clap Thumbs Up

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Thanks Poo, very nicely done! Thanks for the pm ! Smile

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Mohan was in his Bhopal house looking at one of the rooms in awe. Guru walked in with a cup of coffee for him and looked at him strangely.

"What happened bhaiya? Are you not happy with the room dcor?"

"Naa Guru! I'm more than happy and just imagining Chavvanni walking into the room, all surprised!"

Guru looked worried "Bhaiya, Are you sure, Nanhi will come to stay with us?"

"Guru, I know my Chavvanni! She is sure upset and angry with me. But she can't stay away for long!"

Rimjhim came in running and hugged Mohan. "Who is coming to our home, Paapu?"

"Someone just like you"

"Is it a girl or boy?"

"Sweet little girl"

"Ok good! I will be happy to play with girls. I'm bored playing with these two boys" She mocked at them and ran into her room.

Mohan and Guru smiled at each other. Guru prayed to God. "Hope all goes well!!"

"Guru, everything will go well if you prepare good food for my Chavvanni!"

Guru crossed his arms with pouted lips. Mohan smiled at him.

"Bhaiya, Do you know what food Nanhi likes? I will make all her special items giving her a big surprise!"

Mohan showed a frowned face. "Guru, I am scared now. 8 years and Chavvanni must have changed a lot. Her habits, likes and dislikes. So many unknown things to me. Do you think she still likes me the same way as earlier? Does she still want to see me as her Spiderman?"

Mohan sat down with a concerned and worried look on his face.

"Arrey yaar! Why didn't she write to me any time at all? How I wish I know all about her now."

"Ohho Bhaiya, Don't worry. She will just be our sweet little Nanhi, as always."

"Guru, Should I get some gift for her, when I go to receive her at the station?"

"What will you get for her?"

Mohan thought for a while "I know what I should get for her. Also I have to add one more thing to her room."

In the night Mohan was in his room, lost in his thoughts, while Rimjhim was sleeping next to him. Mohan remembered those days when Nanhi used to hug him and sleep.

Mohan has FB.

Mohan and Megha sitting next to each other, on that night before he was leaving for the last time.

"Mohan, Will we all be together anytime soon?"

"That day is not too far, Megha"

"I trust you,Mohan"

Megha looked at him hopefully but she could just see a lifeless expression on Mohan's face. They both knew what the truth was going to be but could only smile at each other consolingly. Megha rested her head on Mohan's shoulder. She slowly let her hands around his waist to hold him  tightly, as if not ready to let him go anywhere. Mohan could feel the warmth and tension in that hold. He turned towards her and kissed on her head. He held around her squeezingly closer to him, returning the feel of possessiveness that she shared with him. Tears of separation flew through their cheeks and they were just left like this with no words.

Nanhi was found sitting on the swing. Mohan walked towards and sat next to her. Nanhi looked at him and she was filled with tears. Mohan was so heartbroken to see her like that and he hugged her. He kissed on her forehead and tried to hold himself strong.

"Hey chavvanni, sunna! Don't cry"

"Spiderman, you told that you will be with us forever!"

Mohan was hurt but hiding it to himself he said "Nothing changes even now, Chavvanni. We are always together"



Mohan knew his words weren't that easy as always but he had to say it to make himself believe in that. He wanted to be as innocent as Nanhi to believe in simple magic happening around them. He touched her chin which she returned as well, to give a hi-five finishing their usual action of endearment.

He gave her a card and flowers. The card read 'To my Best Friend! Our Friendship is forever!' signed as 'Spiderman'. Nanhi gave a big grin and hugged him.

"Chavvanni, I want you to be the support for your Mummy. She must be feeling very alone when I am gone"

"You know that I will. What about you Spiderman?"

Mohan couldn't help himself from taking a deep breath. Then he said with a teasing smile "Guru is there with me. He will take care and we will manage"

He could only sense that his mind was doing all the talking but his heart was so restless that he could feel waves inside him. He just hoped that he could find a way to control them and keep himself intact, for the sake of everyone.

FB ends.

Mohan continued to sit through the night in his thoughts. He never let go off the latest family picture sent by Megha. He just hoped he recognizes Nanhi without any trouble at the station.

Mohan was at the railway station. He held a card and flowers in his hands. He looked very restless and got irritated when the announcement said "The train from Indore is 10 minutes delayed".

"Arrey yaar! 10 minutes! I've been waiting since 6 am for the 7 O' clock train and now it's delayed 10 more minutes!"

He felt as if his heart was going to burst out anytime with excitement. He said to himself "Mohan Bhatnagar, Don't worry nothing will happen to you". He smiled to himself and couldn't believe or reason any of his acts. But he looked so contented amidst the excitement and felt the main purpose of his wait was going to be paid in full. The sight of the train made him more nervous and he touched his heart to feel the beat there. He closed his eyes for a while before starting to relive his Spiderman days again.

The station was not crowded much and the passengers getting down from the train were very few as well. It wasn't difficult to spot Nanhi walking with her trolley suitcase on the platform. She hadn't spotted Mohan yet. The moment Mohan's eyes laid on her he just couldn't feel a gasp escaping from him. He just murmured to himself "Chavvanni!"

He just walked towards her while Nanhi spotted him. Her footsteps stopped automatically and she couldn't sense what her feelings are then. She tried to smile but she did not feel any movement in her facial muscles and it appeared that she had frozen in the hot summer. Mohan slowly moved closer to her and he gave a look at her from top to bottom. He was just so happy as if to see a long lost friend and also like a proud father. His hands wanted to touch his Chavvanni's chin and greet her in their special way, but somehow he couldn't feel his hands moving at all.

When he finally managed to bring his hands up, Nanhi was not sure what to expect. She sure was not ready for a hand shake with him. If his hands were reaching her chin then she was not at all sure whether she could bring herself to return the gesture as always. She wanted to believe that it came out as natural as earlier but she didn't dare to face it if otherwise.

As if Mohan understood what was going on inside her, he hesitantly stopped his hand halfway. He then took the card and flowers from the other hand to give to her. She looked relieved of her confusion and disappointed for her need at the same time. She took them from his hands and smiled at him. He tried to say something but then realized that his voice wasn't coming out. He cleared his throat and brought himself to say something that he thought was appropriate at that time.

"I will take your bag"

She wanted to say no, but she found it better to handover the bag than to try saying something which she thought wasn't possible for some more time. And she thought that it will never be for very long time. They started walking together sharing a look and smile with each other. They could feel a sense of familiarity in the strangers between them. They were not sure whether it was a good sign or bad. But they wanted to leave it to forces of nature to take over instead of them taking things in their hands.

Pages to be continued...


Edited by Senpoo - 28 April 2013 at 10:03am

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