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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
What happened  the beta reader idea? Ermm
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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 8:38am | IP Logged
thanks for the thread!
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
just discovered this thread! And love it :)
If anyone needs help u can pm or scrap me... I'll try my best.

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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -chamkilli-

Originally posted by crazy2012

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I need one help plz

pls help me to write a little intimate scene btwn leads:
the hero is helping the heroin to wear a saree as she is injured now. both of them come close and feel the sensuality in each other. I wanted to show their romance, closeness, hero's caring aspect together. pls help to to describe it

thanks in advance

how is she injured by the way. I have some ideas for the scene

she is injured to save hero's sister from the goon(by acid attck)
she cant move her left portion of the body temp
XYZ hero helps her wear XYZ heroine's saree. Then XYZ hero steadily takes a hold of her right shoulder slowly and carefully and turns XYZ heroine around so now her back is facing him. He then takes her hair and puts it on her right shoulder. Giving him a clear access of her nape . He then slips a necklace around her neck. Tying the string etc etc he lingers his fingers around her neck area for a bit longer. Sending a shivers down her spine in pleasure. He slowly then turns around so XYZ heroine is now facing him. She slowly raises her eyes to meet his gaze. They stare for a bit longer etc etc, before he brushes his fingers on her forehead pushing back some loose strands of her hair that fell right across her eyes. He then tucked them lightly behind her ear. Etc etc they stare a bit longer before he leaves his hands down to her cheek just lightly caressing it. Involuntarily making her close her eyes.

Now how intimate do you want them to get or are you planning for them to just enjoy one another's presence
I have another idea if you don't like this


Thanks Neha..it is awesome..
I would like to read your second idea too, if u don't mindTongueEmbarrassed
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Heyyy
I need help in writing an FF of mine.

It has a lot of past scenes..both the leads have a past. But I think flashbacks make stories very boring :/ So can anyone help me with telling how to exactly make things tumble out? I think I might screw it up and make readers confused..I am making them confused now as well! :P

I have thought of two ways -

Both the leads have an outburst and they tell their life story themselves. 

Or

Someone investigates and finds out about the other. :P

?

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personally i love flashbacksSmile, but only if they are written well and they don't make me go madLOL, but if you say there is too much to unfold, then i like the first option, I think it has a huge impact on a reader, reading about the leads reveling their past each other their and seeing the reactions of bothSmile 
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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shimmer_Vani

Heyyy
I need help in writing an FF of mine.

It has a lot of past scenes..both the leads have a past. But I think flashbacks make stories very boring :/ So can anyone help me with telling how to exactly make things tumble out? I think I might screw it up and make readers confused..I am making them confused now as well! :P

I have thought of two ways -

Both the leads have an outburst and they tell their life story themselves. 

Or

Someone investigates and finds out about the other. :P

?

If the story requires a lengthy explanation about the past, then the first option. Otherwise, the best way to unravel the flashback is going bit by bit according to the present scenario. But don't go for the second option. It doesn't sound too good. 

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Actually I have few of this accounts ie my sisters works to be adopted...can I post the links???

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