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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Thanks a lot for helping me always..This is really helpful guys..

I wanna help again, can I get this one too?Embarrassed

Situation: how to describe the Hero is taking care of Heroin? She is injured in her leg and he is doing her bandage though she is reluctant to take help from him. But he orders to keep her mouth quiet.

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
This is such a good idea! Thank you :D 
I've written a story story'ish, it's half way through but I can't seem to progress it after a certain point. Any help would be much appreciate. I'm just a scrap/PM away :) 

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy2012

Thanks a lot for helping me always..This is really helpful guys..

I wanna help again, can I get this one too?Embarrassed

Situation: how to describe the Hero is taking care of Heroin? She is injured in her leg and he is doing her bandage though she is reluctant to take help from him. But he orders to keep her mouth quiet.

Thanks AgainHug
If it's a sort of scene where the protagonists bond, then maybe you could describe the plight of your male lead as sort of vulnerable. His face gives away nothing but stillness while his eyes screams the vulnerability of seeing his beloved in pain. He is blabbering in anger because he doesn't want to reveal that he care for her. Meanwhile, the girl is reluctant due to the proximity she shares with him and here you could describe her heartbeats and her thoughts at the closeness. 

Does that help? 
If not, apologies :/ 
 

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help help help

ok, so i am stuck between love and crime...

my plot was 3 frnds were in same college, bt due to some misunderstanding(not love triangle) they separated. now after 8 years all are in same office...and fireworks is bound to happen.

i am stuck, as the office is a crime investigation department. and moving the story with cases ...its going too looong. so suggest, should i stick to personal relations, or case along with relations? and also from where i should begin the story? the college life, or after 8 years?

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Posted: 24 July 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyasarkar007

help help help

ok, so i am stuck between love and crime...

my plot was 3 frnds were in same college, bt due to some misunderstanding(not love triangle) they separated. now after 8 years all are in same office...and fireworks is bound to happen.

i am stuck, as the office is a crime investigation department. and moving the story with cases ...its going too looong. so suggest, should i stick to personal relations, or case along with relations? and also from where i should begin the story? the college life, or after 8 years?

My suggestion mix personal life with professional it will help you in move on the story.
One second i didn't get you! You had already wrote it or you are still making the plot?
If you are still  making the plot than start from now a days, i mean after 8 years, write about what happened in the past as flashbacks.
I think in this way the story it's more interesting, it's just a suggestion you are free to start as you want it. 

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Posted: 24 July 2013 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by HK90

Originally posted by riyasarkar007

help help help

ok, so i am stuck between love and crime...

my plot was 3 frnds were in same college, bt due to some misunderstanding(not love triangle) they separated. now after 8 years all are in same office...and fireworks is bound to happen.

i am stuck, as the office is a crime investigation department. and moving the story with cases ...its going too looong. so suggest, should i stick to personal relations, or case along with relations? and also from where i should begin the story? the college life, or after 8 years?

My suggestion mix personal life with professional it will help you in move on the story.
One second i didn't get you! You had already wrote it or you are still making the plot?
If you are still  making the plot than start from now a days, i mean after 8 years, write about what happened in the past as flashbacks.
I think in this way the story it's more interesting, it's just a suggestion you are free to start as you want it. 
I love your suggestion. It'll keep mysterious sort of feeling throughout your story.

@riyasarkar007 - You may want to bring out a case in the present scenario that may have link in the past, maybe the reason why the three friends separated. 
 


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Please know, I'm not a pro at writing (not even close to it) but some of the tips I've learned in the past years have immensely helped me improve my writing. I do they help you too :D

 

A few tips to improve your writing:


1. Punctuation - I cannot possibly stress enough to explain how important it is to use the right punctuation as the right place. It makes a HUGE difference. For example - "Let's eat grandma." and "Let's eat, grandma." are two completely different sentences with different meanings.


2. Proofread - With proofreading, here is what I do - I write a story/chapter and I don't read back to it for couple of days. After couple of days, I open the chapter and read it and I can seriously point out of many typos/errors this way. If you try to proof-read your work straight after you've written it, you won't be able to correct your errors because the story is fresh in your mind, so you're tend to overlook the mistakes. But like I said, it's so very important to always proofread your work, at least once. You may want to ask someone else to proofread it for you. You can get second opinion that way.


3. Please please please avoid using slang in writing. I know there have been so many debates about this issue, in for and against, between both the readers and writers. But please, slang takes away the maturity of the writing. If your vocabulary is not very broad, use simple English. You don't need to have a broad vocabulary to be a writer. A writer's job is to deliver a story, in whichever manner they can. So please, try and avoid slang.


4. Always plan your story. You can use any method you're comfortable with, but always plan it out. If you think, it's in your mind and you don't need to store it somewhere safe, you maybe wrong. Planning and jotting down notes related to your story can be so helpful. I use bullet points to plan my story/chapters because it's easier for me. You can use spider diagram, mind map etc.


5. Synonymous option on word document is a lifesaver. Trust me! It is so helpful I can't explain. It broadens your vocabulary and also gives variety to your writing.


So yes, that's about it. It is quite basic but trust me, it helps a lot :D

PS - If there are any typos in the post, apologies :/ Writing this at 2am :P

 

Love, Zoah x

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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 12:46am | IP Logged
@ Zoah (it's Zoha or ZoahLOL) anyway your post it's so so true, your are simply right on this, yeah i too hate when people write without puntuaction; and you are superb right regarding the effect, that if you try to proofread your story just after  writing it, you will be not able to correct it, i can admit i did it few times and i was not able to found the errors, so your advice it's true and writer should try it, and about the Synonymous option, well i use it when i little it help a lot, but when come to know that it helps in english too i was in cloud nine, because my mother tongue is Italian and i'm really bad in Inglish. 
Thanks For the helpful post, it will really help people a lot. 



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