Posted: 11 years ago
nice start 👏 continue soon 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
intrstng strt... desire to love or passionate heart beat r gud...
Posted: 11 years ago
nice story. I think it's title should be passionate heartbeat.
Posted: 11 years ago
Ooo I'm excited Shahi! :D I like the background info and everything! 

I like Passionate Heartbeat! 
Edited by PrittB - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
characters are really nice..continue soon.
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey plz carry on!It's a nice concept...n don't forget to PM me 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
I like the title, Passionate Heartbeat.

I like the concept of your story and my mind is already asking questions.  Did Madhu want to marry?  Is RK planning on divorcing her soon?  Can Dips get killed in chapter one??  Sorry, but i intensely dislike that character!!!!

Pls continue and best of luck!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice shahi
the painful impact wl fit i thnk.
Posted: 11 years ago
Very good start! shahi👏 I liked the concept.
I got a very practical title which is not Poetic.Hope u will like it.
It is "Unusual and Cute Will"😆
Thanks a lot for the FF Shahi.😃
I like the title "Passionate Heartbeat"😳
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey bhagwaan ek aur ff thnx for it. Title should be love is a painful cup of tea

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