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THE ETERNAL LOVESTORY:TAAREY (SECOND THREAD) (Page 120)

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Originally posted by Nukti

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Originally posted by Taani_Nawreen

Nice update!! I loved every bit, especially Tahira wid Rey n Taani.
Plz update soon...!
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GUYS BEFORE THIS UPDATE I WANNA SAY SORRY TO ALL THE PEOPLE WHO SEND ME THE PMS FOR THE UPDATES...GUYS AS A STUDENT OF CLASS 12TH I DAM BUSY ...I HARDLY COME ONLYN SO I M NOT ABLE TO COMMENT ON ALL UR BEAUTIFUL UPDATES BUT I PROMISE THAT I LL READ AND COMMENT SOON..
 
AND NOW A BIG THANK TO ALL THE TAAREY FANS FOR ALLOWING ME TO RUN VIAAN'S LOVESTORY; AND TO JUSTIFY HIS CHARACTER...SO SORRY AGAIN
 
 
 
 

chapter 23

After a few hours'..Tahira decided to go back home'..

so she drove off but on her way'..her car's tyre got punctured'..

Tahira (to herself) : oh crap !!!!!

now what ??????

she decided to walk and seek some help''but on walking a few centimetres''

suddenly her phone rang it was Viaan'.she did not know y but her heart beat increased on seeing his name on the screen''

she was experiencing something really really strange for the first time''

whatever Sharon told her about Viaan had increased Viaan's respect in Tahira's eyes'

Tahira was a really different girl'it was the first that she was hesistant with a guy'..

she picked up the call''

Tahira:hey Viaan'.

wats up !!!!

Viaan:all is cool Tahira ''while talking to Sharon i came to know that u had visited Taani and Rey'''.so i thought of asking u that how is Rey now?

Tahira:ohhh ''Rey is good rather very good ''.i could sense that the two had a gala time yesterday night''

(she chuckled)

but for a few seconds Viaan could not say anything and Tahira sensed her mistake'

Tahira: (to herself)Tahira ''.di ne tujhe Viaan ko khush karne ko kaha hai and what the f**k r u doing ?

Tahira: waise Viaan ji kya aap ne sach mein sirf yahi puchne ke liye phone kiya tha ya phir ekk beautiful ladki par chance marne ka moka dekh rahe the aap ''..

Viaan was depressed but Tahira had a magic with her words that really gave Viaan a soothing effect''

he could not resist and smiled showing his colgate teeth''.

Tahira sensed that her magic worked''..

Viaan: haan right Tahira socha tum par thoda try kar lun ''.shayad iss pyar ke mausam mein mujhe tumhara saath mill jaye''

whatever Viaan spoke was a joke for him but it gave goosebumps to Tahira''.

she literally shivered and her blood froze''

Viaan: (breaking the silence)

ji Tahira ji kya khayal hai aapka'..

Tahira came back to her senses'..

Tahira: tum bhi na Viaan ''(she was nervous for the first time in her life)

Viaan:waise have u reached home''..

Tahira: home !!!!!!!!!!!!

oh shit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i forget '''.

but how could i ''..

she was shouting at the top of her voice'..

Tahira:actually Viaan i m stuck'..

Viaan: (a bit worried) what happened r u ok??????

matlab tum theek ho na''tabyat theek hai na...i mean all is okk na'..

he was stammering saying all these sentences'..

the reason for his stammer was the least know to him.

Tahira was happy seeing Viaan's concern for her''

rather she was enjoying the attention without the reason being know to her''.

so she thought of again playing a prank (aadat se majbur'')

so she exaggerated the problem to gain Viaan's concern, sympathy and the lovely affection'.

Tahira:actually Viaan jab main Taani aur Rey ke ghar se vapas aa rahi thi to the brakes of my car failed''.the road was empty so i escaped an accident (smiling) and my car landed up in a muddy forested area''

i walked a few miles but have not yet received any help''

Before she could go on Viaan interuppted

Viaan:oh god tum theek ho Tahira''

matlab tumhe lagi to nahi na'..

aur tum yahan ke bare mein zayada nahi janti'.so please kissi stranger ko mat trust karna'..

bolo na Tahira r u okkk ?????????

Tahira was somehow enjoying all this'..

rather she felt great for being so important to someone''

she felt that each and every word that Viaan spoke had her copywright''

Tahira:i m okkk Viaan ''.

she consoled him ''

suddenly a tear came rolling down her cheek''

this tear actually perplexed the whole situatioon for her'..

she could not say anything '''

it was difficult for her to understand herself''.

Viaan:okkk''right now tell me where r u ''i ll come ''.but plsss till then be there''nd take care of yourself'..

Tahira gave Viaan the address and disconnected the call''

Just with the disconnection of the call '''both Tahira and Viaan had a stream of emotions flowing through them''

Viaan : (folded hands)oh god please who theek ho'' i mean just be with her god''

Viaan took his bike and drove off'..

While Tahira was standing still at a place''

Tahira:maine itne logon ke saath aise pranks kiye hain lekin aaj tak who concern nahi feel kiya jo Viaan ki baaton mein tha'..

main feel kar sakti thi that he was tensed''

but kya sach main''.i mean Viaan mere liye worried tha''

yeh kaisa insaan hai yaar jis ladki se pyar karta hai usski khushi ke liye apni life tak sacrifice kar deta hai'.apne doston ke liye itna tensed hai''

he is seriously an angel who deserves to be the most happy person ''

and main usse happy bana kar rahungi'.. (smiles)

Tahira:par mera aansu'..i mean main to kabhi nahi roti then y did i cry today !!!!!!!!!!!

she was confused''

Tahira:main har type ke logon se mili hun par Viaan is different ''.uski awaz mein jo pain tha''usne to mujhe rula diya''

lekin kyun ??????

she was unable to understand the scenario''

Her heart wanted to say something but it was not clear'..it felt as if the voice of her heart was being echoed''

So that's why hers ears could not cath the sound perfectly''

Fighting away all the deep going processes in her mind ''..Tahira said to herself ''.

Tahira: Viaan ne bahut suffer kiya hai but no more'..ab main uski life main fun and masti vapas lakar rahungi'..(smile)

just then Viaan reaches Tahira ''.

He stops the bike with a jerk, frightening Tahira a bit''

He got down quickly and hugged Tahira''

They caressed each other's back like two passionate lovers''.

Tahira was moved''they both had tears in their eyes''

The aura that surrounded them was beyond any explanation''

They both actually had no clue about what way the destiny was leading the two of them''

Viaan broke the hug and held Tahira's arm strongly'..

Viaan's face was red''it was like he was deeply terrified and in shock''.

Viaan:r u ok''.

Tahira: yes Viaan i m totally fine''

the very next minute''.Viaan lossened his grip and then there was an akward silence between the two of them''

They wiped their tears'..

But they lost eye contact'..

What Tahira started as a prank turned out to be really heart weeping experience for the two of them''

now they both were not facing each other''

Tahira: (to herself ) tujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha Tahira'..did u see how tensed he was ?

and di ne usse khush karne ko kaha tha aur tu ne to usse rula diya !!!!!!!!!!

Viaan: (to himself) thank god she is fine''but maine usse hug ''.i mean''pata nahi ''mujhe kya ho jaya tha'..

i mean pata nahi usse kaisa laga hoga ??????

Tahira: but abhi mujhe uske mood ko change karna hoga'..(talking to herself)

warna i ll really feel guilty about his situation'..

But usne mujhe hug kiya and she smiled.

Tahira turned to Viaan and wiped his tears ''.

Tahira :yaar tum dost to bade senti ho lekin ache ho''

and she hugged him again''

Viaan losses his resitivity whenever Tahira is in front of her'..this time too he smiled

Tahira:chalo Viaan ab ghar chale ?

Viaan : (pointing to his bike ) haan lekin aap aisi cheez par baith sakogi !!!!!!!!

and they both laughed out hard'..

Tahira: my dear friend i ll not only sit on this bike but i ll ride it too'..zara real Tahira se tum bhi to mil lo''. (smirked)

she moved to the bike where the keys were already plugged''she wore the helmet and signalled Viaan to sit'''..

At Rey's house.

Taani was preparing soup for Rey in the kitchen

She was totally engrossed in her work.

It looked as if her only motive of life was too see Rey in good heath and spirit.

Rey very silently entered the kitchen so as Taani doesn't notice him.

He reached close to her and shouted in her ear '..

Rey : aaa'''''''''''''''

Taani was terrified she suddenly turned and the soup she had in her hands was all over Rey's face and his body'

His hair were dipped in tomato soup giving way to a new hairstyle (he he '')

His face was totally red not because of Taani's kiss or any other romantic antic but because of the soup that Taani prepared for him with her own delicate hands

( kya se kya ho gaya bewafa tere pyar mein : he he LOLLOLLOLLOL )

Taani glanced at Rey to realize what just happened and the very next minute she broke the silence by giving a big laughter''.

She was laughing like anything holding her stomach while Rey stood there still ''

Trying hard to believe what happened a minute back'.

Taani : awww''

Baby isliye kehte hai zyada badmashi nahi karni chahiye warna result devasting hota hai'

And she again laughed'

Rey could not resist and spoke

Rey: acha beta !!!!!!!!!!

And pulled her towards him '..

They were so close that they could feel each others breath.

Taani : Rey chodo warna main gandi ho jayungi !!!!!!!!

Taani pleaded'..

Rey: acha ab hasi nahi aa rahi'..

Mere romantic moment par soup gira kar to bada has rahi thi'..

Maine to socha tha ki daar kar mujhe hug kar logi lekin tum ne to'..(he faked anger)

Taani:Acha baba sorry but please mujhe chodiye aur ja kar naha (bath) leejiye warna kissi ne agar aap ko aisa dekh liya to lick na kar le''.

.

After saying this she tried hard not to smile but soon saw Rey smiling and joined him in his laughter.

They went to their room where Taani gave Rey his clothes and pushed him inside the bathroom.

Rey: Taani main kya soch raha tha , tum bhi aao na I might need help inside (smirked naughtily)

Taani blushes at this statement and runs from the room smiling'..

Rey: acha beta ekk baar shaadi ho jaane do phir gin gin ke badla lunga !!!!!!!!! (SMIRKS)WinkWinkWinkWink

now this time not a precap,but a question :

(SORRY GUYS WAS BUSY SO CANT GIVE THE PROMO ABIG SORRY TO RAADHI...Cry)

what do u think how will Tahira and Viaan's bike ride will be ??????

WANNA SUGGEST SOMETHING ???????????

and yes don't miss the next chapter because it has a lot of taaReylicious moments''.WinkLOL

NOW PLSSS COMMENT AND BECAUSE THEY ARE THE ONLY THINGS THAT FILL COLOUR TO MY MONOTONOUS LIFE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 



Edited by shivi77 - 05 April 2013 at 1:19pm

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
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GUYS BEFORE THIS UPDATE I WANNA SAY SORRY TO ALL THE PEOPLE WHO SEND ME THE PMS FOR THE UPDATES...GUYS AS A STUDENT OF CLASS 12TH I DAM BUSY ...I HARDLY COME ONLYN SO I M NOT ABLE TO COMMENT ON ALL UR BEAUTIFUL UPDATES BUT I PROMISE THAT I LL READ AND COMMENT SOON..
 
AND NOW A BIG THANK TO ALL THE TAAREY FANS FOR ALLOWING ME TO RUN VIAAN'S LOVESTORY; AND TO JUSTIFY HIS CHARACTER...SO SORRY AGAIN
AND ONE MORE THING I M SPEECHLESS FOR THE SUPPORT THAT U ALL EXTENDED
SO LOVE U ALL AND THANK U SO MUCH


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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Res
unres!!!

Yay yay yuhooo!!
I m the first one!! Vo bhi pm se pehle!!! LOL

coming to ur update...
Viaan and tahira's love story ki gaadi nikal padi.. Yaay!! And that too jet speed se!! Wow..
Taarey's moment was so hilarious... I was smiling bt jab vo line padhi.. Rey's hairstyle... Me burst out laughing... ROFL
nxt update jaldi do!! M waiting fr the taareylicious momnt and bike ride of via-ra.. Haan bada ajeeb sa naam bana dia viaan and tahira ka... Plz dnt mind.. Ignore.. Lolz m so excited.. Fr ur question me cuming to pakao u on ur scrap... LOL

Edited by toshi_ta - 05 April 2013 at 1:20pm
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superb update 
continue soon
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