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Posted: 11 March 2013 at 4:16am | IP Logged

Notes:  This FF is dedicated to Piyush Sahdev's birthday.

This story has Inspector Abhigyan (Senior most and most efficient officer of Shapath team (Played by most talented actor Piyush Sahdev), there are his 4 friends and wife Palak. Friends names are: Vivek, Puneet, Anuj, Mohak. He got maried to Palak in my 2nd or previous FF. Both love each other. If anyone who has not read it and wanna read how they got married can read it from the following link:

Before you read further..let me clear that you may not find it typically Investigation based Story...Just writing a simple and light moments story because i am writing keeping in mind the motive to dedicate it to Piyush Sahdev for his birthday. So as i don't write continuing FFs , i am just writing a story just to wish Piyush Sahdev  A Very Happy Birthday.

The Dialogues are in Hindi language.

Edited by -Mansi - 25 August 2013 at 8:27am

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Scene 1 starts at Abhigyan's house..With 2 friends of Abhigyan and Palak.

Puneet to Palak- Bhabhi ji, fir kya plan is baar kuch karne ka? Shaadi ke baad yeh pehla time hai , kuch special hona chahiye.

Palak- Huh! Tumhare jigri dost ko police ki nokri se chutti mile toh na kuch karenge. Ghar bhi sirf 2 din aate hain , mahine mein. Celebration kya karenge? Mujhe toh doubt hai unhe yaad bhi nahi hoga.

Vivek- Yaad toh hai usey, bas kehta hai "time nahi hai, mood nahi hai."

Palak- Wohi toh. Kaam hi itna hai unko. Ab duty aisi hai kya keh sakti hoon."

Puneet- Is baar aisa nahi chalega. Is baar celebration kar ke rahenge. Bhabhi aap abhi phone lagao usey aur usey ghar aane ke liye kaho."

Palak- "Agar kisi case mein hue toh?"

Puneet-" Arre aap try toh karo, hum dekhte hain, is baar kuch toh karna padega."

Palak dials a number on her Mobile..the screen shows "Calling Abhigyan."

There is some kind of fear on Palak's face. As she is scared that Abhigyan will scold her that she is disturbing him.

Puneet- "Rob se baat karna, like a have right to say anything." He says it as if he has hint about Palak's fear.

Palak gets comforted and nodds to Puneet and feel little confident. Abhigyan picks up the call and says "Hello"

Palak- "Main ghar par bore ho rahi hoon, aap ghar kab aa rahe ho? Mujhe bahar ghumne jana hai."

Abhigyan is silent. Puneet snatches the phone frrom Palak and says strongly "Abhigyan abhi ghar aa ja, humari pehle bhi baat huyi thi, humein jana hai kahin, humein treat chahiye." Puneet cuts the phone.

After 15 minutes Abhigyan steps into house.

Palak, Vivek and Puneet stand up from sofa coutch.

Vivek asks - "Koi case tha?"

Abhigyan -"haan par tabhi khatam hua tha."

Vivek -"great..chutti li?"

Abhigyan -"Haan..jiske tum jaise achche dost ho toh chutti milegi na.." laughs and continues "Ab tum logon ne mujhe aisa bulaya toh tum logon ki packing toh ho gayi hogi na.?" and smiles sarcastically.

Vivek Replies -"Haan"

Abhigyan -"Then main mooh dho leta hoon , palak tum packing kar lo, hum chalte hain."

Palak-"Aapki uniform kahan hai?"

Abhigyan Replies "Police station mein hi chod kar aaya hoon."

Palak looks confused with Abhigyan's answer and before she could question, Abhigyan starts heading, Vivek interrupts Abhigyan -"Hum jaa kahan rahe hain?"

Abhigyan -"Jab pohonchenge pata chal jayega." smiles again. Palak and Vivek look at each other that Abhigyan is manitaining suspense about the place they are supposed to go.

Scene 2

Scene 2 shifts and they 5 are in a jeep..Abhigyan is driving the jeep..Puneet is sitting beside Abhigyan..beside driving seat. there 2 more common friends of Abhigyan, Puneeet and Vivek. They are Anuj and Mohak. Rest 3 are sitting at back seat. Palak is behind Abhigayn's seat and Anuj and Mohajk are to the left side of Palak.

The 4 friends are in elated mood and singing songs side by side. 4 friends turn get over. Mohak asks Abhigyan to sing for Palak.

Mohak to Abhigyan- "Ab tum gaao Abhigyan, Palak ke liye gaa do."

Abhigyan -"Kyun? Mauke ke anusar toh Palak ko gaana chahiye." , Abhigyan smiles.

Palak -"Jab waqt aayega toh ye bhi kar dungi." Abhigyan smiles little and other 4 friends laughs loudly as Palak has given strict yet sweet answer. Maybe they had observed the sweet meaning of Palak's answer.

Scene 3

The place they reach is Lokhandwala..There are tiny hills around a cottage called Guest house.

Abhigyan sighs and says - "Well, ye mere ek close uncle and aunty ka house hai, inko maine ek bomb blast mein se bachaya tha tab se ye mujhe apna beta maante hain, inka beta bhi hai shayad wo bhi ho ghar mein, ye unka guest house hai, kuch din hum yahin rahenge, yahin ghumenge, humein kahin jaana tha so main yahan le aaya, kisi ko koi problem"? looks at everyone.

4 friends smile and Anuj says "This is awesome..matlab Ghar bhi mil gaya and bahar ghumna bhi ho jayega..aur kya chahiye..khoob maza aayega..khoob celebraton hogi" says giving a big smile. Abhigyan smiles and looks at Anuj and says "Chalo fir"

Abhigyan rings the door bell. An old lady opens the door.

The lady smiles seeing Abhigyan, puts her hand round his face and hair and says "Beta kaise ho?"

Abhigyan touches the feet of old woman to get blessings, Palak does the same.

Abhigyan says "Main theek hoon aunty aap kaise ho?"

Old lady replies "Bas main bhi theek hi hoon, aao andar aao"

Abhigyan to Lady "Aunty Aayush kahan hai?" Ayush is old couple's only son.

Lady replies "Woh America gaya hai"

Abhigyan gets shocked that they don't have medium financial status then how could they afford for America trip.

Abhigyan asks "Kaise gaya?, i mean itne paise kahan se aaye?"

Lady "Wo uske office ne kharcha diya hai wahan jane ka"

Abhigyan does not question but trying to get convinced.

Abhigyan introduces everyone one by one to lady..starting from Palak, Anuj, Puneet, Vivek, lastly Mohak.

The old person comes in front. Abhigyan and Palak touch the feet of old man..Old man hugs Abhigyan, and gives him blessings of long life by saying "Jeete raho" and besides putting hand on Palak's head.

Old man says -"Aaj hum kahin bahar chalte hain dinner karne."

Abhigyan smiles, Everybody else laughs and they all leave.

Scene 4

They all return back home.

Anuj says -"khana kitna swadisht tha, mazaa aa gaya."

Everybody laughs out..Abhigyan smiles again.

Lady shows the 3 seperate rooms to Abhigyan and his company. 1 room is for Abhigyan-Palak, the other is for Puneet-Vivek, and the third one is for Anuj-Mohak. Their rooms and couple room are in same house.

They wish each other "Good Night" and head towards their room for sleep as it is night now.

At night when Puneet is in sound sleep, Vivek listens a horrible, crying voices of a lady saying "Mujhe maar diya"

Vivek gets scared..he sees here and there, looks upside as voices seemed to come from the roof of the room.

Vivek says "Puneet utho, suno kaisi ajeeb si awaaz aa rahi hai"

Vivek  says again "Uth Puneet" because Vivek again hears the same horrible voice "Mujhe maar diya"

But Puneet does not respond. He is still in sound sleep.

He leaves the bed, opens the door and comes out of the room.

Scene 5

Vivek reaches in lobby, there is darkness in the room,  a little light is coming from upstairs which is to the right side of their room.

Then suddenly voice of old lady's comes "Bachao, bachao"

Vivek rushes towards stairs as he feels voice came from upstairs.

He reaches up, there is a terrace there, he sees a horrifying scene that a creature..a huge height, , huge legs, a white big cloth covering the whole body and feet, open hair, badly rotten face, big open eyes with blood in it, huge hands are pressing the old lady''s neck. The creature seemed to be a soul saying "tum logon ne mujhe maara , ab main tumhe maar ke pratishodh lungi"
Old lady is trying hard to free herself, and again tries to scream for help and says little less louder "bachao".
Vivek eyes are big opened..he says firmly "Chod do unko, chod do". There is continous thunderclap in the sky.
The creature hurriedly turns towards Vivek, puts her left hand towards Vivek from the same place and right hand is still on old lady's neck and roar from the same place and her big like ghosts and yellow teeth are visible. Vivek gets frightened. He rushes back down the stairs. He reaches outside Abhigyan's room, knock the door 2-3 times and screaming out Abhigyan's name 3 times..."Abhigyan..Abhigyan..Abhigyan. His voice is filled with fear.

Abhigyan and Palak open the door. Abhigyan asks -"Kya hua Vivek?"

Vivek-"Upar, upar aatma aunty ji ko maar rahi hai"
Abhigyan gets shocked. Listening noise all..old man, Puneet, Mohak, Anuj also come out from their rooms. Abhigyan rushes to terrace. Everybody follows Abhigyan. Abhigyan reaches and sees the dead body of old lady. Abhjgyan screams "Aunty ji"  Abhigyan is extremly shocked and broken. Old man all other are shocked too. Old man screams " sab kaise hua?" Old man cries and says -"Meri shakuntla." Abhigyan checks the body. He finds nothing except nail marks on neck. Abhigyan stands up in sad mood then asks anxiously to Vivek -"Ye sab kaise hua", kisne kiya Tune dekha na?"

Vivek is still in fear. He replies -"Preeti ki Aatma". Abhigyan is shocked and asked irritably -"What? Tu paagal ho gaya hai?"

Vivek replies -"Nahi..tu mera yakeen kar..wo Preeti ki aatma hi thi..wo uske safed kapde, lambe baal, lambe haath, bade bade daant, maine..maine usey rokne ki koshsih ki thi par..par main dar gaya , wo mujhe bhi maarne wali thi" . Abhigyan finds it difficult to believe and looks down to left take time to think something.

Then Palak says -"Par jo bhi thi wo gayab kaise ho gaya? Yahan toh koi bhi nahi hai"

Vivek says -" Aatma thi wo tabhi gayab huyi hai". Abhigyan looks angry over it.
Old man is standing in such a way that he knows something.and wants to tell something to Abhigyan but he is stuck as if someone is controlling him.

Scene 6

Everybody is gathered in lobby. Now there is proper light in the room. Abhigyan comes towards to Vivek and asks -"Kya hua tha?exactly kya hua tha, tu upar kyun gaya tha, tune exactly kya dekha?" Abhigyan looks extremely sad and serious.

Vivek tells that how he heard the voice, how he tried to awake Puneet, how he reached on terris and whatever he saw about that creature, he tells everything through seeing a flashback in mind again.
Suddenly Puneet sees a photograph of a lady in a small frame  on wall of the room. He screams -"Yehi ladki thi, yehi ladki thi"

Abhigyan becomes alert. Before Abhigyan could ask about the lady, Old man says "Ye Aayush..humare bete ki patni Preeti thi.."

Abhigyan asks -"Abhi kahan hai?"

Old man says -"2 mahine pehle road accident mein maut ho gayi iski, Ayush ke sath taxi mein ja rahi thi, taxi ka accident ho gaya, Aayush ko chot lagi thi par wo bach gaya par Aayush ki wife Preeti mar gayi, uski aatma yahan bhatakti hai aur ilzaam lagati hai ki Aayush ne jaan bujh kar us taxi ka accident karwaya kyunki driver bhi mar gaya tha aur wo bhi bas Aayush ki kismat achchi thi ki wo bach gaya"
Abhigyan looks better now as he got some hint but of course he did not believe this soul fact.

Puneet says -"Yahan aatma hai? Humein nahi rehna yahan, Abhigyan.."

Abhigyan says -"Aatma nahi hoti hai Puneet..tum logon ko jaana hai toh tum jao , main yahin rahunga , mujhe khooni ko dhoondhna hai"

Abhigyan asks Palak -"Tumhe yahan rehna hai?"

Palak is scared..her hands are moving on each other..she wants to say to leave the place but knowing her husband..she says -"Haan Abhigyan, aap yahan hain, aapki duty hai, jahan aap rahenge main wohi rahungi."

Abhigyan looks at his friends, his friends look at each other.. Puneet says -"Okay, hum bhi yahin rahenge."

Abhigyan says -"Ab sabse pehle baat ye uthti hai ki wo cheekhne aur "Maar diya" awaaz sirf Vivek ko hi sunayi kyun di, hum mein se kisi ko kyun nahi?"

Everyone is quiet, everyone looks at Abhigyan because they have nothing to reply. And as they know it is only him who can help them and can find out the killer and save them too because the creature had already tried to kill Vivek.

Scene 7

Abhigyan goes upstairs to Terrace. He says in heart-"Yahan itna kuch hua hai kuch na kuch toh zaroor milna chahiye jisse pata chale ki is sab ke peeche kaun hai."

There is one waste paper bucket, Abhigyan searches it, he finds nothing important in the bucket. There are only few papers. He sees here and there, while returning back, he sees broken nails lying on floor. He bends down, pick them up. Seeing them he says -"Ye naakhun toh kisi aadmi ke hain, par vivek ne toh Aayush ki wife Preeti ko dekha tha yahan, toh iska matlab ye aatma ka chakkar nahi hai and iske peeche kisi aadmi ka haath hai." then suddenly a thought comes in his mind and he gets scared. The thought he says in his heart -"Kahin ye sab Vivek ne toh hi nahi..aur jo yahan nahi hai means Preeti , uspe ilzaam daal diya?"

Abhigyan has mixed expressions on his face, he has anger, he has sorrow that maybe his friend killed his dear aunty who is like his mom for him.
He goes down quickly, everyone is still standing in the lobby. Abhigyan reaches there, he stands quietly and look at everyone for one minute. After one minute he breaks the silence and says to Vivek -"Tumhare pass kya saboot hai ki aunty ji ko Preeti ki aatma ne maara means kisi aurat ne hi maara, kahin tu kuch chupa toh nahi raha?"

Vivek says -"Tu mujhpe shaq kar raha hai?"

Abhigyan shouts in grief and anger -"Yahan Pe sirf hum log hain..bahar se koi nahi aaya.."

Mohak says -"Yahan pe aatma pehle se thi."

Abhigyan is now in extreme anger , eyes are filled with blood and anger.

He says to Mohak-"Aatma nahi hai, aatma hai toh sabke saame aake sab ko maare, aaye maare, wo toh aatma hai na? Kyun nahi aake sabko ek sath maare, usko kis baat ka darr?"

Abhigyan leaves by looking at everyone with anger except Palak and old man.

Scene 8

Abhigyan sees those nails again, put them in a transparent packet and look at them from close..he is in deep thought for one minute and says
'Kis ke ho sakte hain ye nakhun? In sab mein se toh kisi ke bhi nahi the jab mene dekha. His mind sees a flashback that when he was talking with Vivek and Mohak then while looking at each other he noticed nails of everyone except Palak because the nails belong to a male.
Abhigyan says -"Khooni hum sab mein se hi koi hai, itna confirm hai Palak nahi hai."

Then while looking at nails, he suddenly moves the packet to the left side and sees small yellow marks under two broken nails.

He says to himself -'Ye kya hai?" after a few seconds -"Kahin ye nakli nails toh nahi, nakli ke upar kuch treatment kar ke asli toh nahi banaye gaye?"

Abhigyan continues to saying himself -"Ye nails kisi ke haath nahi lagne chahiye, nahi toh khooni hoshiyaar ho jayega ki mujhe uske khillaf saboot mil gaya hai, bakion ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai isse." Then after a few seconds he continues -"Kaise din aa gaye hain, kabhi nahi socha tha apne kisi dost ko khooni kehna padega."

Scene 9

Abhigyan reaches to a male parlour named "Go dashing"

Abhigyan enters the parlour. The attendant comes forward and greets Abhigyan by shaking hand with him and says -"Sir aap toh pure fit hain, body toh aapki superb hai , and facial wagarah ki toh bilkool zaroorat nahi hai aapko, chehra toh aapka chand ki tarah chamak raha hai."

Abhigyan says -"Arrey bhaai sahab , aap suniye toh, main kuch karwane nahi aaya hoon, kuch poochne aaya hoon."

Attendant -"Kya poochne aaye hain, kuch packs wagarah ke naam poochne aaye hain?"

Abhigyan takes out nails out of the packet..and asks -"Kya artidficail nails ko kisi tarah asli show kiya ja sata hai, means ki wo asli lagein aisa kuch kiya ja sakta hai?"

Attendant -"Jee haan Sir, Ye ek new scheme aayi hai ki agar kisi ke nails toot gaye hain ya kharaab ho gaye hain aur wo new nails lena chahta hai toh hum nakli nals ko ek specail type ki bleech and drill se asli dikha sakte hain..par aap ye sab kyun pooch rahe hain, aapke nails toh bohot khoobsoorat hain inko badalwayiye nahi..aapke kisi rishtedaar ko badalwane hain.?'

Abhigyan takes a sigh, shows his identity card and says -"Main Inspector Abhigyan hoon, ek murder ke silsile main pooch raha hoon..achcha jab aisa treatment karwate hain toh kya nails ke neeche ye aise yellow nishaan ho jate hain?"

Attendant -"Yes Sir, jab ye nails starting mein hi agar paani mein baar baar dhoye jayein toh ye bleech jo hum use karte hain uska yellow colour dikhna shuru ho jata hai kyuin ki jo nakli nails hote hain uska powder utar jaata hai. aur humein treatment ke time nails ki oiling bhi karni padti hai during and after treatment otherwise nails ke neeche pink colour bhi ho jaata hai kyunki nails pe drilling ka asar hota hai and oiling na ho toh skin pink ho jaati hai."

Abhigyan asks Attendant-"Aapke pass aisa koi insaan aaya hai jisne ye treatment karwaya ho?"

Attendant Replies -"No sir, ye new hai toh abhi tak mere pass koi nahi aaya."

Abhigyan-"Ok thanks a lot." and leaves.

Scene 10

Abhigyan and Palak both are sleeping in their room. Palak feels uneasiness in throat and stomach. She gets up, goes out of room, takes a water bottle out of refrigerator, drinks water and as she is about to go back to her room , she sees terrace light on, she thinks somebody is there, she goes up, sky and Terrace are filled with thunderclaps, wind is blowing fast, winds are banging in window and window pane is banging in window. She listens the cry hat "Mujhe maar diya." she gets frightened but wants to see who is there. She had the courage now because Abhigyan had explained to her that creatures like soul don't exist. She goes further, she sees from window of terrace that Preeti sucking a baby's blood. She does not believe her eyes. She feels as if she is dreaming. She moves a little to her left, opens the terrace's door, and Preeti sucking the blood, and then looking at Preeti with horrifying eyes with the desire to have suck her blood too, she laughs and laughs, the sky thunders loudly. Palak screams with fear, she regrets coming there. She got a see threatening creature. She reaches in the room and shouts Abhigyan's name, makes him wake up by moving him hurriedly and in crying voice she says -"Abhigyan...Abhigyan utho."

Abhigyan wakes up and is shocked to see Palak crying . Abhigyan asks Palak -"Kya hua Palak, tum ro kyun rahi ho?"

Palak is crying, not able to answer to Abhigyan-"Wo...wo Preeti..kisi bachche ka khoon..khoon pee.."

Abhigyan gets up from the bed, rushes to terrace, everyone also get together after hearing Palak's cry.

Abhigyan reaches the terrace with everyone but he finds none there.

Palak is still in trauma, she is crying constantly, the sky thunders again, she gets more frightened and hugs Abhigyan.

Abhigyan keeps his arms round Palak's back gently and says -"Daro mat, main hoon na, kuch nahi hoga, main hoon, sab theek ho jayega."

He continues -"Batao mujhe kya hua? Dekho ab koi nahi hai yahan?"

Palal is still very tensed and scared. Abhigyan takes her down in lobby, makes her sit on sofa, and he gets the water to her, she drinks it little.

Abhigyan says -"Ab batao kya hua?"

Palak explains -"Mujhe gale mein dard ho rahi thi , main paani peene bahar aayi, mene terrace ki light on dekhi, main upar gayi dekhne kaun hai, khidki se dekha ki Preeti white dress mein , open hairme, wohi lambe kapde, lambi height, daravna face jala hua sa, wo kisi chotte bachche 2 saal ka hoga , uska khoon choos rahi thi, mujhe yakeen nahi hua, mene darwaaza khola aur wo meri taraf dekh ke zor se has rahi thi, jaise abhi mujhe kha jayegi." and starts crying again."

Abhigyan puts his hand on her shoulder and says -"Bas ro mat, ab main usko nahi chodunga."

Scene 11

Abhigyan in his room thinking about the incidents happened with Vivek and Palak regarding that Preeti's soul creature.
Then he again takes out the packet contains nalis out of almirah and says in heart -"In nalis ko kahin chupana padega, agar kis ko pata chal gaya in nalis ke baare mein toh khooni hoshiyaar ho sakta hai aur bakiyon ki jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai."

Then he searches for an appropriate place to hide the nails. He takes off the bed sheet of bed, opens the wooden box of the bed and puts the nail packet and puts the packet in the extreme corner and shuts down the wooden box of the bed.

Abhigyan is frustrated that no leading proof could be found which will tell who is doing murder in name of soul.

Then again a big question which had been surpassed comes in Abhigyan's mind and he says to himself -"Us din ka jawaab abhi tak nahi mila ki Wo awaaz sirf Vivek ne hi kyun suni? Humne kyun nahi suni? Maine kyun nahi suni?" Then he breaks down, sits on bed and says to himself -"Sari meri galti hai..Mere hote hue..aunty ji..ka..main aunty ji ko bacha nahi saka..bachana toh kya main koshish bhi nahi kar paya..mere hote hue..Agar main na so raha hota toh shayad aunty..." and cries for few minutes.

Then suddenly he remembers that he had gone to a restaurant with Palak, Old couple and with his 4 friends. Then he becomes serious and says to himself determinedly-"Wo jo bhi koi hai main usey dhoondh ke rahunga aur faansi ke fande tak pohoncha ke rahunga. Us din hum sirf us restaurant mein gaye the , uske baad ye sab hua hai, usse pehle kyun nahi aatma aayi, humare aane se pehle aunty ka murder kyun nahi hua, agar koi yahan ka hai, mere hote hue , ye jaante hue ki main cop hoon , koi murder kyun karega, us hotel se hi lead milega case toh main solve kar ke rahunga ab,"

Scene 12

Abhigyan's friends and Palak are sitting in Lobby and discussing the matter.

Mohak-"Yahan aake ye sab kya ho raha hai? Enjoy karne aaye the aur ye sab ho raha hai, ek ek pal darr lag raha hai."

Palak is in extreme sad mood. She utters-"Abhigyan toh akele baith ke pata nahi kya sochte rehte hain, kuch batate bhi nahi hain.Main jaanti hoon Abhigyan ko kitna dukh ho raha hoga, maine suna tha un auny ji ke baare mein bohot baar Abhigyan se, Abhigyan ko unse phone pe baat karte hue bhi suna tha, Abhigyan apni saari baatein share karte the unke sath." and she also breaks down.

Vivek says -"Arre bhabhi rote nahi, sab theek ho jayega, Abhigyan strong hai and best cop hai , wo zaroor aatma ko pakad lega."

Abhigyan comes there, puts his hand on Palak's shoulder. Palak stands up, wipes off the tears, Abhigyan hugs her and says-"Main theek hoon, meri chinta mat karo, chinta ab khooni ko karni hai." moves his hand on Palak's head. Palak feels comforted and smiles a little and does free herself from Abhigyan.
Abhigyan says to everyone-"Chalo hum fir usi restaurant chalte hain jahan us din gaye the."

Everyone is surprised. Anuj says -"Kya hua?"

Abhigyan says -"Arre main apni patni ke sath yahan aaya hoon, ghar mein hi baithe rahenge kya? Mujhe palak ko bahar le kar jaana hai, wohin lunch kar lete hain."

Everyone is about to leave.

Mohak does not move. He says -"Abhigyan tum log jao, main ghar par hi rahunga."

Abhigyan feels like crying and says in crying heart-"Shayad is sab ke peeche tera haath hai , isliye tu jaane se darr raha hai, mujhe tere se ye umeed nahi thi."

Abhigyan says to Mohak-"Kyun kya hua? Bhookh nahi lagi kya? Tere ko toh khaane ka bohot shaunkh hai."

Mohak says -"Wo mene sangeeta(his girlfriend) se kuch baat karni hai akele, tum log jao, main baad mein hi kuch khaa lunga ghar mein."

Palak says -"Main hi kuch bana jaati hoon..mujhe pehle nahi pata tha, nahi toh amin pehle hi bana deti, aunty je ke baad toh main hi kitchen ka saara kaam kar rahi hoon."

Mohak replies-"Nahi nahi bhaabhi jee, mujhe bilkool bhookh nahi hai, aap jaayie, aake bana dena."

Abhigyan says-"Oops! Main apna cell phone toh room mein hi bhool aaya, tum log bahar chalo, main phone le kar aata hoon." Everybody else leaves.

Scene 13

Abhigyan, Palak, Puneet, Vivek, Anuj, Old amn reach to the restaurant -"Tasty food only here"

They all sit on a table..Abhigayn is looking here and there..

Abhigyan asks Palak -"Kya khaogi?, Chalo tum ice cream khao"

Abhigyan points towards a waiter and says -"Waiter" . That waiter looks at Abhigyan and ignores Abhigyan looking at down to register in his hand.. The other waiter looks At Abhigyan comes to Abhigyan and says -"Jee sir kya lenge aap?"

Abhiigyan says-"Nahi nahi aapse nahi, hum..main us wo jo waiter hain na unse lunga..wo ice cream aur manchooriyan bohot achchi serve karte hain." Says humorously.

The waiter tries to run but Abhigayn catches him and says -"Kahan bhaag raha hai? Ice cream mein kuch mila ke nahi khilayega? Kitni umeed le kar aaye hain tere pass?"

Waiter says -"Maine kuch nahi kiya."

Everyone is surprised that what Abhigayn is saying. Before anyone could ask anything to Abhigyan, Abhigyan starts beating the waiter, he slaps him 2 times. Waiter cries and utters -"Sir mujhe paise mile the." Abhigyan slaps the waiter again-"Bewakuf puri baat bol, nahi toh 6-7 aur padenge." Waiter says -"Sir mere ghar ki haalat bohot tanga hai, unhone mujhe paise diye, aapki photo dikhayi aur kaha in logon ke sath jo bhi aayega , un mein se kisi ki bhi dish mein , ek dawayi di thi wo mila dena, mene wohi kiya, pehli baar mene in aadmi (pointing towards Vivek) ki Ice cream mein aur in Maam (pointing towards Palak ) ke manchooiyan mein wo dawa mila di thi."

Vivek is shocked and says -"What?, tune meri ice cream mein kya milaya tha." Vivek tries to raise the collar of waiter but Abhigyan stops him. Abhigyan slaps the waiter and asks -"Kaun tha wo?"

Waiter Replies-"Main nahi bataunga sir, wo meri family ko maar dega, usne mujhe dhamki di hai."

Abhigyan says him-"Kuch nahi hoga tumhari family ko, main hoon, tum batao kaun tha wo? Agar nahi batayega toh main tujhe nahi chodunga"

Waiter says -"Main nahi bataunga sir chahiye aap meri jaan hi kyun na le lo, wo bohot khatarnaak hai, wo bohot darawan hai, main apni family ki jaan khatre mein bilkool nahi daalunga."

Abhigyan says -'Aisa kuch nahi hoga."

Abhigyan continues-"Is restaurant ke owner se milna chahiye."

Abhigyan was about to ask something from the Waiter but Waiter left.

Scene 14

Mohak is sitting in lobby, watching TV, he sees something in black like wind is coming through terrace and banging against wall near the stairs which lead to terrace. Mohak stands up, Says -"Kaun hai." His voice is proving that he is scared. He goes up to terrace. He sees a tall lady in white one dress, long hairs, long legs..

Mohak is stunned..Lady smiles and says -"A gaya tu? Aaj teri baari hai..kaun bachayeha tujhe?"

The lady grabs Mohak, door behind from Mohak entered gets closed suddenly, sky is thundering in day. Lady is pressing throat of Mohak. Mohak is trying to free himself. Voice of stopping a jeep comes, Lady loosens the hand, Mohak frees himself , looks down towards the road, and shouts -"Abhigyan, Abhigyan" His voice is showing that Mohak is crying inside.

Mohak turns back and sees lady is vanished, door is closed. Mohak runs towards door, opens the door and rushes towards Abhigyan. Mohak reaches at main door of house. Abhigyan is also at main door.

Abhigyan is shocked , he asks Mohak-"Kya hua?"

Mohak says -"Wo, wo aatma bohot bhayanak thi, usne mujhe maarne ki koshish ki, agar tum na pohoonchte toh wo mujhe maar deti."

Abhigyan says -"Kahan hai wo?"

Mohak -"Wo gayab ho gayi, aatma hai."

Abhigyan is shocked and just looks here and there in room that whoever it was got vanish suddenly so soon.

Scene 15

Two persons enter the same restaurant..1 person seems to be very old, wearing poor clothes, wearing specs and has white hair that is Abhigyan..Abhigyan is in disguise.
Second is normal young guy, wearing normal white shirt and black pant..having mustaches and long hair that is Puneet..

Abhigyan heads towards the manager of restaurant and starts weeping -"Sahab hum bohot gareeb hain saab..humara bete ko naukri de do sahab..hum aapka ehsaan zindagi bhar nahi bhulega sahab."

Manager -"Arre arre ye kya kar rahe ho? Yahan kyun beekh maang rahe ho naukri ki?"

Abhigyan -"Humare chokre ko naukri ki bohot zarurat hai sahab..please aap ek baar kaam de do , mere bete ki qualification bohot achchi hai,  bohot mehanti hai, bohot khush rakhega aapko apne kaam se."

Manager -"Dekhiye is hotel mein naukri restaurant ke maalik dete hain par aaj wo chutti par hain, aap kal aana."

Abhigyan bends down little -"Please sahab aap mujhe maalik ka ghar ka pata aur naam de do, kal tak bohot late ho jayegi."

Owner -"Achcha achcha deta hoon."

Scene 16

Abhigyan and Vivek reach to restaurant's Owner house.

Vivek says Abhigyan-"Abhigyan tumne badi chalaki se Hotel ke maalik ka pata lagaya , aisa kyun? Tumhe toh directly poochne se bhi pata chal jata?"

Abhigyan -"Us Waiter ko uske kisi Restaurant mein kaam karne wale ne paise diye aur blackmail kiya, agar wohan mujhe pata chal jata ki wo WaIter mujhe kuch bta raha hai toh uski family aur uski jaan ko khatra tha isliye aise pata lagana pada."

Vivek says -"You are Great Abhigyan."

Abhigyan says -"Owner ka naam Kashiraam hai"

Abhigyan rings the door bell of owner's house. Owner opens the door. Owner says -"Yes?"

Abhigyan says -"I am Inspector Abhigyan...Ek khoon hua hai, us silsile mein aapke hotel ke baare mein kuch baat karni thi."

Owner -"Khoon ka mere Restaurant se kaisa link? mere hotel mein toh khoon nahi hua?"

Abhigyan says -"Aapke hotel mein khoon toh nahi hua par aapke hotel ka ek waiter Raaj , usko paise diye gaye the aur murder karne mein aur..aur baki logon ko darane mein help karne ke liye aur ab uski family ko bhi kidnap kar liya gaya hai."

Owner says-"What? Toh is mein main aapki kya maddad kar sakta hoon."

Abhigyan -"Well, aapka hotel hai, aapko pata hoga ki aapke hotel mein kaun se log aate hain jo aisa kar sakte hain?"

Owner-"Ji main aise kisi insaan ko nahi jaanta, mujhe kisi pe shaq nahi hai."

Abhigyan-"Dekhiye, wo waiter bohot ghabraya hua hai, sirf wohi hai jo humein bata sakta hai iske peeche kaun hai par wo nahi bata raha humein, aap hotel ke maalik hain, us waiter ko jaante hain , aap koshish kijyega usse poochne ki, shayad aapko bata de."

Owner-"Ok sir, main try karunga."

Vivek was silent all the time. Abhigyan and Vivek stand for still for one minute, look at each other and then leave.

Scene 17

Abhigyan and Vivek reach home. Abhigyan says Vivek -"Tum apne room mein jao." Vivek goes inside. Abhigyan goes on terrace, switches on the light as it is dark because of night. He says in heart -"Kuch na kuch aur zaroor milna chahiye." He starts searching but suddenly light gets off, someone with big hands having horrible nails grab his neck, presses it, but Abhigyan bravely frees himself and kicks that person or creature with left leg. Abhigyan turns back, there is so much darkness that Abhigyan is not able to see anyone there, Abhigyan feels someone is in front of him, he slaps in darkness in front, The loud sound of slap fills the terrace. The second person attacks again in darkness which Abhigyan is not able to see but just with guess that now it is other person's turn, Abhigyan bends down his head and escapes from person's attack by hand, A fair and rotten hand appears in darkness because an outward light is appearing at that portion, Abhigyan holds that hand and kicks the person on stomach with left leg again, it is stomach because it seems from the sound of kick. in the meanwhile, Abhigyan moves back a little to switch on the light finding the opportunity to do it, he gets hit with other person and hurriedly holds that person's hand which had  iron weapon in hand, Abhigyan bruises that person in stomach.

Abhigyan turns back to find and stop the first person but Abhigyan finds that person is nowhere, he finds second person is also vanished.

Scene 18

Abhigyan and Puneet reach hotel's owner house again.Before Abhigyan could knock the door, Hotel's owner opened the house, the owner has suitcases in his hands.

Abhigyan says -"Arre kashiraam ji aap kahin jaa rahein hain?"

Owner says -"Ji..wo meri Maa ki tabiyat theek nahi hai toh amin unse milne gaanv(Village) jaa raha hoon."

Abhigyan and Puneet enter the house. Abhigyan says -"Hum bohot bore ho gaye hain yahan, aatma ka case solve karte karte thak gaye hain, kuch haath nahi lag raha, aap humare sath chaliye." and smiles.

Owner is shocked and says -"Jee..? Main? Main kyun? Main kya kar sakta hoon."

Abhigyan-"Aap sab kuch kar rahe hain yehi toh main kehna chahta hoon."

Owner -"What? Main? Aap keh rahe hain main aatma hoon? Main aapke saamne zinda khada hoon."

Abhigyan says-"Theek hai agar aap humare sath nahi chalenge toh hum aapke sath chalte hain."

Owner's face get yellow peel like in jaundice..and says -"Kyun? Kya matlab hai aapka? Main apni Maa ki dekhbaal ke liye jaa raha hoon wohan, aap kya karenge wohan?"

Abhigyan -"Main apne doston ko yahan laya tha kyunki mera janamdin aa raha hai, hum yahan moj masti karne aaye the, par yahan khoon ho gaya, aur main toh police hoon toh case toh solve karna padega, majboori hai nahi toh huamre ACP gussa ho jayenge, but kuch solve nahi ho raha toh hum aapke gaanv jaa ke masti karenge..kyun Puneet?"

Puneet says -"Haan haan." and smiles a little.

Owner tries to run. Abhigyan holds owner from his shoulder, turns owner his side, raises owner's collar up and says with anger in eyes and on face -'Abhi tak mene araam se pooch raha tha par agar ab tu sach nahi bolega toh tu zinda nahi bachega, agar tu nahi batayega ki tune Aunty ji ka khoon kaise kiya toh abhi isi waqt main tera khoon karunga..aur teri laash ko aise jagah tikaane lagaunga ki kisi ko teri laash bhi nahi milegi..ab bol nahi toh thokoon ek?..bol." He continues -"Jis time tumne mujhpe us din humla kiya tha toh us din mene tumhara haath chuya tha  and baad mein mene tumhe pehchaan liya and ye dekh tu apne nails pe oil nahi lagaya aur ye pink ho gaye hain..ab tujhe parsaad doon ya tu bolega?"

Owner cries says -"Haan..haan mene sab kiya and karwaaya waiter ko mene paise diye the and uski family ko mene kidnap karwaya hai.."

Abhigyan -"Par tu ghar ke andar kaise aata tha? Jaata kaise tha? Aisa kaise huya ki humein kuch pata nahi chala? 

Owner says -"Batata hoon sir..par pehle wahan chaliye."

Abhigyan -"Abbey chalne ke bachche pehle ye bata waiter ki family kahan hai nahi toh tera bharta bana dunga."

Scene shifts..Abhigayn running out of owner's house..he bends down on grass outside house..opens a underground box, goes in it, he finds a lady and 2 children there bind with ropes and tapes on mouth. He frees them and says -"Ghabraiye mat, main inspector Abhigyan hoon, aap logon ko kuch nahi hoga."

Scene 19

Abhigyan breaks a door that is Old man's house where he is living with his wife and Friends. Kashiraam and Puneet are with him. There is darkness in lobby..Someone is pressing his neck but who it is, that is not visible because there is darkness in room..then why is not attacker visible? Because-Abhigyan turns on the light and a person covered with burqa..Abhigayn says -"Hands up! Main jaanta hoon tum kaun ho, mujhe sab paata cahl chuka hai , behtar hai ye naqaab uthao aur apne aap ko mere hawale kar do."

The attacker remains silent..and starts pressing Old man's neck..Abhigyan rushes and make free old man from attacker. Abhigyan says-"tu aisa nahi maanega..haan?" and wears off the burqa from attacker's face..

It is Abhigyan's friend..Anuj..

Abhigyan says -"Mene dost ke roop mein bhadiye ko paal rakha tha."

Anuj starts crying and says -"Tu mujhe galat samajh raha hai Abhigyan..main inhe nahi ye mujhe ,maar rahe the..jaise hi tumhari gaadi rokni ki awaaz aayi inhone apna burqa mere upar daal diya and mere haath se apna gala dabane lag agye..mene kaha bhi yeh kya kar rahe ho, mene rokne ki bhi koshish ki par.."

Abhigyan says angrily-"Ek toh khoon karta hai upar se jhoot bolta hai, haan? Dekh naatak karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, chup chaap sab sach bata de ki kyun aunty ji ko maara aur aatma ak naatak kiya, dekh mujhe haath uthane par majboor mat kar, na jaane kyun apni 8 saalon ki dosti ki khair rakh raha hoon main."

Anuj just says -"Par.."

Abhigyan says -"Tu nahi maanega aise.." shouts -"Puneet" Puneet takes Kashiraam forward..Abhigyan says -"Is aadmi ne mujhe sab bata diya hai..ab main tujhe aakhri mauka de raha hoon..sach bata de ki kyun kiya?"

Anuj remains silent. Abhigyan starts beating Anuj. He bruises Anuj numerous times.

Finally, Anuj utters -"Haan..haan mene kiya hai ye buddhhe ke bete se maine badla lena tha. Usne mujhe mei CA ki naukri se nikalwaya tha..meri koi galti nahi thi, par usey laga main company ke accounts mein gadbad karta hoon..usne manager ko shikayat laga di aur manager ko laga main imaandaar nahi Aayush inka beta imaandaar hai..main raaste pe aa gaya tha."

Abhigyan -"Aayush ko kab aur kaise maara?"

Anuj -"Hum logon ke yahan aane se 2 din pehle humne Anuj ko kidnap kiya tha, tab iske saath iski maa aur biwi thi, usse agle din mene Aayush ko maar diya kyunki mere pass koi aur raasta nahi tha, par uski maa aur biwi ne mujhe dekh liya tha toh maine usi din jis din Aayush ko maara usi din Uski wife Preeti ko bhi kidnap kar ke maar diya aur socha ki uski maa ko blackmail karunga ki wo mere baare mein an bataye nahi toh ,main usey aur uske pati ko bhi maar dunga, maine blackmail ke liye isliye socha kyunki mere pass laashon ko thikaane lagane ki koi jagah nahi thi isliye un dono ki laashein mene yahin ghar ke bahar gaad di aur ek aur maa ki laash gaadne ki himmat mere mein nahi thi." cries.

Abhigyan says -"Aatma ka drama kyun kiya? Kyunki main yahan le aaya tum logon ko?"

Anuj-"Haan..jab hum yahan pohonche main samajh gaya tha tum in logon ko jaante ho aur tabhi us din us aurat ke paanv chooke aashirwaad lene ke bahane us aurat ko kaha ki wo tumhe kuch nahi btayegi par usne mujhe kaha chahe uski jaan hi kyun na chali jaaye wo tumhe bina bataye nahi rahegi, tumhe apna beta maanti thi isliye maine inhe (pointing towards owner) us aurat ko maarne ke liye kaha." Abhigyan feels tears in his eyes. Anuj continues-" isliye usey marwane ke liye mene socha kyun na main aatma ban jaun , ye mere liye bohot asaan hai, aur isse baki logon ki baatein sunke ki wo aatma se darre hue hain tum case na solve karo nahi toh tum mujhe aur asaani se pakad lete."

Abhigyan -"Par us din sirf Vivek aur Palak ke sath aisa kyun hua ki sirf unhe pata chala , humein kyun nahi aawazein sunayi di?"

Anuj-"Wo main jab hum pehli baar restaurant gaye the, washroom jaane ke bahane us waiter ko paise de ke kaha tha ki hum mein se jo sab log ek hi dish order karein unki dish mein neend gehri aur zyada  aane wali dawayi na milayein , usse neend sirf zayada gehri aati hai, jo sabse alag dish order kare unki dish mein milaye kyunki koi na koi chaihye tha jo aatma ko dekhe aur baaki logon ko bataye aur baaki log specially tum Abhigyan kuch na dekh sako aur na kuch sun sako."

Abhigyan says to owner-"Jab sab theek chal raha toh waiter ki family ko kyun kidnap kiya?"

Anuj-"Ye mere chaacha hain isliye inhone meri maddad kari, jab mujhe laga ki shayad tum vivek pe shaq kar rahe ho toh tum hum mein se kisi pe bhi shaq kar sakte the aur sirf Vivek aur Palak ne kyun suna tumhe is baat se restaurant ke khaane opar shaq ho jata isliye us waiter ko blackmail karne ke liye uski family ko kidnap kiya."

Abhigyan -"Tumne toh mujhe bhi marwane ki koshish ki apne is chacha se...kyun?"

Anuj emotionally says -"Nahi main cahhta tah ki tu kis tarah se maan jaye ki yahan wakay mein aatma hai, sirf thoda sa believe karwane ke liye..marwaane ke liye nahi..main aisa nahi soch sakta kabhi bhi."

Abhigyan says -"Wo toh jab ye mera gala daba raha tha toh mene iske nails pehchaan liye the jiske tukde mujhe mile the   par us din 2 logon ne mujh pe attack kiya tha toh mere poochne par doosre aadmi ke bare mein tumhare chacha ne tumhare baare mein bataya ki tum dono mile huye ho aur ab tum uncle ko maarne wale ho toh inko toh maine bacha liya."

Palak says -"Wo tum kis bachche ka khoon pee rahe the us din?"

Anuj-"Aayush aur Preeti ka beta."

Abhigyan is extremely shocked and says "What!?" and asks old man -"Aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki inka ek beta tha aur wo bhi gayab hai? Kyun?"

Old man -"Beta tumhe pata hai inhone dhamki di thi ki agar tumhe kuch bhi bataya jayega toh Shakuntla ko maar denge isliue.."

Abhigyan asks Anuj arrogantly-"Us bachche ko kyun maara?, usne tera kya bigada tha?"

Anuj-"Jab mene Preei ko kidnap kiya toh wo bachcha uske saath tha , usse kahan fainkta? Mujhe waise bhi khoon peena achcha lagta hai toh mene isiliye us bachche ko maara."

Abhigyan says -"Aatma kaise dikh rahe the tum log?"

Anuj -"Make up kiya tha chacha ji ne..Aatma ki acting chacha ji ne ki thi. Chacha ji face pe rotten face and jali huyi aankh ka mask lagate the ."

Abhigyan to owner-"Nails ke treatment ke baare mein mene pata kiya wahan koi  nahi gaya toh tumne kaise treatment kiya nails ka ki wo asli aur bade lage?"

Owner -"Main is shehar ke bahar rehta hoon , wahan ek factory meiin aise nails baane lage hain ki agar kisi ka nail toot gaya hai toh usse doctor ke pass jaane ki zaroorat nahi hoti, wahan se nails leke laga sakte hain aur oiling kar sakte hain."

Abhigyan-"Chachaji itne lambe kaise lagte the?"

Owner replies-"Wo steel ke bade bade shoes milte hain humare gaanv mein jaise horse ke hote hain, ab itna kuch karna tha toh jaise taise wo shoes adaane padte the.

Abhigyan to Anuj-"Tum dhamki kis waqt dete the? Humein pata kaise nahi chalta tah tumhari dhamikiyon ke baare mein?"

Anuj-"Jab sab log jaate the toh us waqt mein uncle aunty ke room mein jaata tha chupke se."

Abhigyan -"Jo nasheeli dawayi bakiyon khaane mein hoti thi wo tumhare khaane mein toh nahi hoti hogi, kyun?"

Anuj-"Waiter toh 1 hi bowl laata tha toh us mein dawayi hoti thi par main kha leta tha taaki tumhe mujh pe saq na ho."

Abhigyan -"Tum log gayab kaise ho jaate the 5 minute mein , ghar toh band rehta tha, chacha ji andar kaise aate the?"

Anuj-"Terrace ki left side ke corner pe pipe hai, wo pipe sabse chotti hai, uske neeche hi terrace ki deewar khatam ho jati hai aur kamro ki deewar shuru hoti ahi , beech mein gap hai, jab sab log terrace pe aate the, chacha ji kamre mein kood jate the aur wahan se bahar nikal jaate the aur main darwaaze aur khidkiyan chupke se band kar deta tha andar se taki tumhe shaq na ho."

Abhigyan-"Shaq toh ho gaya tha mujhe tabhi itna araam se mene investigation ki aur nails bhi chupaye aur us din phone lene jaane ke bahane mene ghar mein bag bhi laga diya kyunki mujhe Mohak pe nazar rakhni thi kyunki ye humare sath nahi aaya toh mujhe ispe shaq ho gaya tha."

A Voice comes from behind which says -"Isliye humein bhi inform nahi kiya."

Abhigyan turns back and sees it is Acp Teje with Shaurya, Mayank, Aditya, Kavi and Kashish.

Abhigyan says -"Acp sir aap..?

Acp -"Haan..humein toh aana hi tha..socha tha yahan kuch aur ho raha hoga , par yahan aake humne sab sun liya..I am proud of Abhigyan..Jis taarh se tumne situation ko itni samajhdaari se handle kiya, tumhe laga tumhara koi dost shamil hai par tum peeche nahi hate..that is like my best officer..tum humari team ki shaan ho.."
Acp continues-"Mayank in dono ko arrest kar lo."

Abhigyan -"Nahi dono ko toh main hi hatkadi pehnaunga."

Acp-"Apne dost ko?"

Abhigyan-"Sir ye mera dost nahi..meri maa jaise aunty aur unke bete, bahu aur bachche ke gunhegaar hai."

Anuj-"Main ek aatma hoon , aap mujhe kaise arrest kar sakte ho?"

Abhigyan -"Sir lagta hai isse hallucination ki beemari hai, tabhi apne aap ko aatma keh raha hai."

Acp-"Isse psychatric ilaaj ki zaroorat hai..chalo arrest karo isse."

Abhigyan puts hatkadi on Anuj's hands.

Scene 20

Continues at home with Shapath team, Abhigyan and His friends.

Acp -"Hum toh bhi yahan Abhigyan ka Birthady celebrate karne aaye hain."


Suddenly Power goes. Abhigyan-'Arre light ko kya ho gaya? Ye kyun chali gayi?"

Puneet-"Lagta hai ab doosri aatma aa gayi..Abhigyan chal bhai ab doosri aatma dhoondh."

Everyone laughs.

Abhigyan-"Sir Celebration yahan?"

Acp -"Toh aur kya ? Tum yahan the apne doston ke saath toh hum tumhara mobile track kar ke yahan tak pohonch gaye."

Everyone laughs,.Acp says-"Arre bhai cake laao."

Shaurya brings the cake from their car..opens it , Palak sets candles on it. Abhigyan blows the candles away.

Everyone is singing-"Happy Birthday to You, Happy Birthday to You, Happy Birthday to Dear Abhigyan, Happy Birthday to You."

Shaurya and Kashish say -"Happy Birthday Abhigyan", Kavi says -"Happy Birthday Abhi." Mayank, Aditya say -"Happy Birthday Abhigyan sir."

Each team member hugs Abhigyan, makes him eat a piece of cake by everyone's hand and wishes separately Abhigyan-"A very happy Birthday."

Acp hugs Abhigyan and Says-"Mere sabse bahadur Officer ko very very Happy birthday." and makes him eat a little piece of cake.

and says -"Meri taraf se Bahaduri medal Birthday gift" and puts bravery medal in Abhigyan's neck and honors him.

Puneet, Vivek and Mohak each hugs Abhigyan and say -"Happy Birthday Dost."

Everyone looks at Palak-"Acp says-"Kuch ho jaye?"

Palak sings -"Hum tumhare hain sanam" song and both dance over this song. Everyone claps and says again "HAPPY BIRTHDAY ABHIGYAN"

PS: Sorry if there are many typing mistakes. I know you all are frustrated with ghost stories as we see them more than 6 times in a month in Adaalat, CID and Shapath. I am not supporter of ghost stories but i just wanted to use horror element so i had to choose Ghosts. So bear this one.

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Loved it Mansi!!! Big smile

Happy birthday to Piyush!!!

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It is just amazing Mansi Clap loved it so much... you did a great job... Abhigyan's expressions,actions,dialog everything was so perfect and every Part of your ff is mind blowing,full of suspense and mystery .. I liked it because it is something different and I really liked it very much.. specially dialogs like 
-"Abbey chalne ke bachche peghle ye bta waiter ki family kahan hai nahi toh tera bharta bana dunga." LOL 
 and the action part was perfect and I enjoyed that part so much and also I liked the other new characters also and the way you showed that duty comes first for Abhigyan ... is just awesome... his style of investigating the case was great and I really loved this one... THANK YOU A LOT FOR THIS FF... Day Dreaming





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Originally posted by MOON_LYT

It is just amazing Mansi Clap loved it so much... you did a great job... Abhigyan's expressions,actions,dialog everything was so perfect and every Part of your ff is mind blowing,full of suspense and mystery .. I liked it because it is something different and I really liked it very much.. specially dialogs like 
-"Abbey chalne ke bachche peghle ye bta waiter ki family kahan hai nahi toh tera bharta bana dunga." LOL 
 and the action part was perfect and I enjoyed that part so much and also I liked the other new characters also and the way you showed that duty comes first for Abhigyan ... is just awesome... his style of investigating the case was great and I really loved this one... THANK YOU A LOT FOR THIS FF... Day Dreaming


haha..thanks Moon di ..u know what? mujhe stories toh itni achhi nahi likhni aati toh jab bhi ff likhne lagti hoon aur Abhigyan ka gusse wala face and piyush ke 6 pack abs yaad aate hain aur aise dialogues likhne ka bohot mann karta haiROFLROFL




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I corrected few spelling mistakesLOL and added 6 lines in bold in scene 18. Anyone want can check them.

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