OS: Kanya Kumari [The Virgin Goddess]

Hi forum members, A story based on the Virgin Goddess KANYA KUMARI, OR KANNIKA PARAMESHWARI, in my own words.

She stood with her head bowed, her voice choked, she asked, do we have to be separated again swami?

He stood behind her, understanding her suffering, yet unable to stop the events that were about to unfold.

Parvati, we will be together again my dearest.

She looked towards him, her eyes filled with pain of having to be separated once more for the well being of the universe.

She stepped forward into his embrace,  her head resting against his chest. His hand gently comforted her. It will all be over soon parvati, and you will be back by my side in Kailash.

They slowly walked back to were the Devtas were waiting, her steps were measured, he watched her lovingly.

He had to hide the  pain from her. He had to be her strength. He knew he cannot show that he did want her to go away either. But this was  meant to be, there was no stopping the wheel of fate. 

His pain was even deeper, he knew he will never be able to attain her as she takes the form of Kanya Kumari.

Indra Dev, Agni, Vayu and all the devtas stood with folded hands.

Mata they chorused, have mercy on us, Bhanasur is destroying the world Mata, and you and only you can destroy him.

They knelt before Mahadev and Parvati.

Shakti and Shiv raised their palm in blessings, raise, your suffering will be over soon.

You will have to perform a Yagna, Mahadev in his deep voice addressed the frightened Devtas, and from the fire ParaShakti will arise in the form of a Divine baby girl, he looked towards his Parvati, his eyes dark with love.

Nourish her, rejoice in her, worship her, and she will grow into the Kanya, who will destroy evil.

Jai Mata Paravati, Har Har Mahadev filled the air.

Shiv spoke to his shakti with the confines of the soul, my beloved,   I will come to wed you dear one.

to be continued...
THE LINKS TO THE CONTINUATION
BHANASUR
YAGNA
IN ALL HER GLORY
HER LOVELINESS IS BEYOND DESCRIPTION
LOVE IS DIVINE
FUTURE FORETOLD
THREE STRANGE REQUESTS
ULTIMATE EVIL CONFRONT ULTIMATE POWER
SHE IS UNATTAINABLE
DHANVIN, ISHAAN, MRIGASYA, SHIVENDRA
KAVACHA
JAGATPITA JAGATMATA
IMMORTAL
PREPARATION
SABESHAN
SADYA
THE SEVAL CROWS
ADI PARASHAKTHI
OM SHAKTHI OM SHAKTHI
SHE WAITS FOR HER STANU
THANK U NOTE
Edited by jayvenk - 11 years ago

nicely written
loved it,
waiting for next update

Lovely ! Amazing story.

They should show it and can use your narration, honestly.

Do write on Mugamibika too after this one. And on Maankadu Kamatchi Amman.

Wow.. nice story...Jaya...!! 😊

Wow nice one Jaya. Continue jaldi. 😛

Wonderful story. This could be shown in the show. Please continue further.  😊

What a fabulous story, please to continue.

Beautiful...Please continue...

beautiful..but short one😔
continue soon😃

BHANASUR
He lounged arrogantly on his throne. Two skulls sat as adornment for his hand rest, and another lay beneath his feet. Huge gold rings on his fingers, gold and silver beads lay on his massive chest, two horns on his crown, his thighs looked like the trunk of a tree, his arms like huge branches. His dark complexion completed his fearsome and formidable appearance. In one hand held a wine goblet and in the other he held a woman by her hair, dance he was yelling into her ears.
Several frightened apsaras stood in his attention, some filling his wine goblet, some danced, some fanned him.
Maharaj, one of his ministers addressed him,
I have told you not to disturb when I am relaxing he roared,
But Maharaj, a Yagna is being performed, they are evoking Shakthi herself.
His errie laughter echoed, and what do you think this Shakthi is going to do? Tickle me? he asked laughing even more loudly.

I am invincible, do you hear me INVINCIBLE, only a Virgin girl can kill me,
A GIRL.. ha a girl, that too a virgin.
Look at me, he said slapping his huge muscular chest, you think a little wisp of a girl can even scar me? Girls are like toys to me, I make slaves out of them... he screamed at the trembling minister.

Shakthi vibrated with fury. From her eyes emitted fire as she heard Bhanasur.

VINNNAAASH,  thunder and lightning rolled and vibrated, as Shakthi drew herself to her full form.

Unaware of her anger, Bhanasur continued to glorify himself.
I am immortal, I am the new Lord of the Lords,
He continued his merry making.

Edited by jayvenk - 11 years ago