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Posted: 11 years ago

Shree reaply sir vahi koshish ker raha hoon..
Arjun-koshish abhi tak koshish ager etana time lagaoge to result kab doge..
Rathor give a damm look to arjun,
Ra-rawte aavaj nichi,ager bole bina nahi reh sakte to volume kam ker ke baat karo ..
ager galti se bhi baby udd gaya to tumhen use chup kerana padega ,
samjhe rawte ya samjhayon,
Ar-ye damm look dena band karo,tum bhul rahe ho shayad tumhare esi dam look ke karan baby out of control ho gaya tha,
Ra-ye tumhen mujhe batane ke jarorat nahi rawte..
us out of control baby per main he control ke breack lagaye the,
All sense the tenstion buildup bw two acp..
Shree spook.. sir mill gaya..
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what happened few minute before-
Arjun n rathor stood in one corrner n disscused about baby-
Ra-Arjun tumhen jab ye bachhi mili sorry i meen jab ye bachha mila to tumne local polish station main complent kyun nahi likhawaye..
Arjun rised his eyebrow n looked toward Rathor..
tumhen lagta hai,maine es baare main mahi soncha hoga..
(arjun moves his hand on his pent pocket n took one paper n give to rathor)
Ra-ye kya hai rawte..
rathore opened that paper n read..
after few minute-
ohh to ye baat hai hum,
hamen kuch to kerna padega,
es baby ke jaan khatare main hai ,or hamen es bachhe ke baare main kuch bhi nahi pata..
(later ke baare main baad main bataongi)
on the othere-
all fight with each other
no ye naam boring hai..
yuk its old fashion..
like 16 senchuary..
Noo ek or samjhe samjhayon mahi,
or dammit to bikul nahi..
both riya n ayesha hit shree..
tumhen jayada pata hai,
to tum kyun nahi choose kerte,
baby claps his hand n smiles on them..
Rathor yelled ..
Dammit Ye kya laga raha hai tum logon ne,ek simple se naam ko leker laad rahe ho..
loll poor baby Rathor n uska dammit..🀣.🀣.
baby start crying badly..
es baar riya or arjun

Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Se baby chup nahi huya..
all looks toward rathore as he is chiken on a plate..
Ra-es tarah kya ghur rahe ho,aab kya kachha kha jaoge,
ek bachha tak chup karana nahi ata..
Dammit tum logon ka kuch nahi ho..loll again dammit my poor baby🀣.🀣.
All took step toward rathor,
n rathor took step back..
waittt i will handle..
All-what..?
Ra-yes i will try..
now baby is sameer hand..
rathor order baby..
i say stop crying ..baby crying more loudly..
no oo no rona band karo,
ab jaldy chup ho jao,
all give amused look to rathor,
ayesha tried to controled her like,
Ar-Rathor vo ek chota bachha hai,use pyaar se chup kervao..
riya looks in arjun ..
hum mere samjhe samjhayon ko sab pata hai,
she blush to imagine her future..
Arjum feel her graze on him,
he looks toward her n found she is lost in him,
A small smile crept in his face,
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shree chotu n liza wishper-
sh-hehhee chotu rathor sir ko lagta hai,vo apne dam look se bachhe ko chup keralene..
Ch-chalo koe to hai,jisane rathor sir ka dammit band kera diya,

Liza-tum dono chup ho jao,tum dono kabhi nahi sudharoge,vaise kuch bhi kaho,
rathor sir ko baby sitting kerte dekh ker achha lag raha hai,
Ra-rathor lift baby up n down..na na na rote nahi..
dammit ye bachja to tum hone ka naam he nahi le raha..
he again wanna to say dammit..
but before he say all shout nooo...
Rathore pathes his back..
but baby stil not caam..
he pleading n looks help for ayesha..
ayesha nodded her hand n comes forward to help..
akhir help ke jarorat pad he gaye,abhi to koe bahoot badi badi baten ker raha tha,
baby ko kaise chup karaten hain kaise nahi arjun said..
Haan vo main abhi bhi chup kera sakta hoon rathor reply..
poor ayesha looks in rathore n rathor say her its ok my jaan,baad main gin gin ker badala loonga..
at last finaly baby stop crying


Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

in rathors arms..
Acctualy baby driffted in sleep..
(Ayesha place one sheet on conference table n rathor carefuly put banby on them)
now its shree's turned..
Rathor turned toward shree..
Jo adhoora kaam reh gaya use poora karen..
So shree bahoot maza aa raha tha na baby ka naam rakhane main..
So chalen naam karan karne..
Now shree is chiken piece shree sit on middle n all stood around them..
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flashback end-
shree-sir maine kuch naam ke list select ke hai..
Ab analyse ker lijiye,
jo naam sab se nest hoga hum vo rakh dengi..
Again a small fight start bw them..
No ye boring..
No ye thik hai ..
Shut up u guys...
both arjun n rathor yelled together...
all looked in baby direction but thank god he sleeping pieacefully..
all take long breath...
now arjun wishper in very low voice...
Ham ese aryan keh ker bulayenge..
ab es topic per or koe bahas nahi..
samjhe ya samjayon..
TBC-
PRE-ariya shoping for baby ----
i kno i kno jayada achha nahi tha..
i m waiting for tamato..patato..
lolll hahhaaa...
plz only veg throgh kernaaa...


Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi piyaπŸ€—...
 
awesome brilliant update dearπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...
 poor baby rathore ke damm it se itna darr gaya ki rone lag gayaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...rahore n baby sittingπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...not that badπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...etf kya care rahi hai bachhe kiπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...rathore arjun convoπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...lol really funny
 riya blushing...arjun ko sab aata haiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...
 n lisa bhiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...
 rathore aisha eyes romanceπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey its awesome. I love this ss. Wow ek baby rathore ka to damit hi band karva diya. Give some ariya romantic scenes
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg rathore toh baby ko bhi order de raha tha
aur arjun baby ki name mai bhi order
in dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesooom update wwwooww Aryan nice name      update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
BRILLIANT update... Waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rathod's dialogs were too gud 🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
really very nice part, Ek bacha chup nahi karwa saktay shame on them,
Really very nice