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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 3:29am | IP Logged
wow so cute plz continue 4 2morrows epi

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Awesommme as usual...Big smile continue soon

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
wow awesome loved it...superb...

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
wonderful!!!! <3 love ur writing!

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Awesome! please continue..

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStaralthough u mentioned,that ur scene doesn't form any continuation with the ongoing scenes in the serial,i found ur scene to be as subtle,thoughtful n poetically prosaic as i find the scenes in the serial itself.the timid little sensations of samud,their hesitations,their longings,inner introspections -u portray them ALL.AND SO WELL.
the way u etched out the last scene,deserves a special mention. i can almost foresee the gentle beginning of a sublime romance. very well done.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
  BUT i have a little complain this time i know u DIDN'T leave it as a cliffhanger,but i JUST CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!! ITS TOO GOOD.ClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStar
       and one thing i wud like,is u must have noticed that there is a kind of passion in saras when it comes to kumud.he HAS  to c her face,he HAS make her talk to him.i wud like if u can put in a little more of that side of saras.the possessive ownership husbandly type attitude he has for kumud.i know its xtremely difficult to maintain that combination of soft yet firm,but with an artist of UR  caliber,i know it isn't impossible  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
*BOOKMARKED* :)

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pamalo

wow so cute plz continue 4 2morrows epi

Thank you so much, I am planning to write a long scene, but cannot to do for the next epi


Originally posted by huntinchild

Awesommme as usual...Big smile continue soon
Thank you so much, will try to write soon




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