Saraswatichandra
Saraswatichandra

India-Forums

   

OS - Safe in his arms P75 (Page 6)

Pamalo Goldie
Pamalo
Pamalo

Joined: 04 December 2011
Posts: 1818

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 3:29am | IP Logged
wow so cute plz continue 4 2morrows epi

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

hunnybunch

huntinchild Senior Member
huntinchild
huntinchild

Joined: 08 May 2012
Posts: 346

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Awesommme as usual...Big smile continue soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

hunnybunch

_Ms.Foxy.Angel_ IF-Sizzlerz
_Ms.Foxy.Angel_
_Ms.Foxy.Angel_

Joined: 11 December 2012
Posts: 15756

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
wow awesome loved it...superb...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

hunnybunch

seven_stars Goldie
seven_stars
seven_stars

Joined: 31 May 2011
Posts: 1049

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
wonderful!!!! <3 love ur writing!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

hunnybunch

mandygill IF-Dazzler
mandygill
mandygill

Joined: 03 January 2012
Posts: 3398

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Awesome! please continue..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

hunnybunch

zerro Senior Member
zerro
zerro

Joined: 30 August 2007
Posts: 305

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStaralthough u mentioned,that ur scene doesn't form any continuation with the ongoing scenes in the serial,i found ur scene to be as subtle,thoughtful n poetically prosaic as i find the scenes in the serial itself.the timid little sensations of samud,their hesitations,their longings,inner introspections -u portray them ALL.AND SO WELL.
the way u etched out the last scene,deserves a special mention. i can almost foresee the gentle beginning of a sublime romance. very well done.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
  BUT i have a little complain this time i know u DIDN'T leave it as a cliffhanger,but i JUST CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!! ITS TOO GOOD.ClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStar
       and one thing i wud like,is u must have noticed that there is a kind of passion in saras when it comes to kumud.he HAS  to c her face,he HAS make her talk to him.i wud like if u can put in a little more of that side of saras.the possessive ownership husbandly type attitude he has for kumud.i know its xtremely difficult to maintain that combination of soft yet firm,but with an artist of UR  caliber,i know it isn't impossible  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

hunnybunch

..swagger.. IF-Rockerz
..swagger..
..swagger..

Joined: 20 March 2010
Posts: 8122

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
*BOOKMARKED* :)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

hunnybunch

hunnybunch IF-Sizzlerz
hunnybunch
hunnybunch

Joined: 28 November 2010
Posts: 12917

Posted: 24 March 2013 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pamalo

wow so cute plz continue 4 2morrows epi

Thank you so much, I am planning to write a long scene, but cannot to do for the next epi


Originally posted by huntinchild

Awesommme as usual...Big smile continue soon
Thank you so much, will try to write soon




Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Gautam Rode advices to Drive safe

Author: dasan.divya   Replies: 9   Views: 511

dasan.divya 9 511 10 August 2013 at 12:44pm by annete
Saraswatichandra - Into the arms of love

2

Author: slmu   Replies: 13   Views: 873

slmu 13 873 05 March 2013 at 7:43am by nitzy_21

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Saraswatichandra Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index