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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Hi everyone i am here with my very first story ever i am writing on arshi even i guess most of the pplz are mad after arshi and i am also one of them .
i am going to start normally no cs , no prologue nothing at all !!!
it is a little diffirent from the serial concept
so...here i go ...
Scroll down to read ch1 


Edited by saba-ramisa - 09 March 2013 at 5:02am

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Story is starting from Paris


CHAPTER 1


Location Paris :


This story i about a girl named Khushi Saxena , she is beautiful , sweetheart ...
It was the party night given by her staff to her on her birthday night !


She was sitting alone outside the hotel leaving the party ...
her eyes was closed and a tea drop hiddenly from her eyes to cheek


**Flashback**


2 childs was playing outside the house in garden ( Arnav and khushi )
khushi was sitting and playing with her toys suddenly arnav smiling come to her hiddenly and take out her ruber band , her hair was opened khushi was running after arnav and he was running
ahead Khushi ( The sweet moment of their childhood Friendship)


**Flashback Ends**


she immisitaly open her eyes and hold her hairs , her hairs was opened same like on that time .
Kabhi socha nahi tha ka mere sab se ache dost ka parents hi mujhse meri zindagi , mera bachpan cheen liya


kabhi maaf nahi karungi mein unhe Puri ki puri Raizada family khatam kar ke hi saans lungi . issi din mujhse mera bachpan cheena gaya tha ...


aakhir kya begada tha mere amaa baujee ne unka ...
Her eyes was fully wet of tears and her eyes was being red of Anger
Bohat ho gaya !!!
22 saal ho gaye us hadse ho ab aur intezaar nahi hota mujhe ab mujhe India wapis jana hoga ...


Location India :


ASR groups of companies :


it was morning time in the office everyone was wishing good morning to their boss Arnav he is a very jovial happy person ...
as he set a smile on everyone's faces from wherever he pass same like that he behave well with his office staff , he treat his staff like his family member


a man came to him running and say " Sir ye rahi aap ki file "
Arnav : Arre araam se araam( He was gard of the office ) vijay ko mere office mein bhejo

in arnav's cabin :

Viya enter in cabin
Arnav : haan vijay deal pakki ho gayi ?
vijay : yes sir it's final , but ...
arnav : but ?


vijay : but sir client ne meeting jaipur rakhi hai to humein delhi se jaipur jana hoga
arnav : jaipur...thike hai kab rakhi hai meeting ?
vijay : sir day after tomorrow
arnav : thike hai tum jaipur jaane ka arrangment karo
vijay : ok sir ( after saying that he leave )
outside the cabin he call khushi


she pick the phone and say " haan vijay kaam ho gaya ? "
vijay : yes madam kaam ho gaya hai hum day after tomorrow jaipur ke liye nikal rahe hain .
khushi : thike hai kal tak mein bhi india pohanch jaungi acha mein rakhti hoon see you later
vijay : ok madam .


khushi : Arnav singh raizada apni barbadi ki ghariyaan gin lo yunke abse mein tumhe 1 pal bhi chain nahi lene dungi ...
( Khushi have left vijay in arnav's office who give news of every 1 sec to khushi so she can pt an eye on Arnav to Destroy him and his family )


So friends how  it was ?
Eagerly waiting for your comment's coz it's my first time on Arshi
Hope you like it !!!Smile



Ramisa




Edited by saba-ramisa - 09 March 2013 at 5:23am

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res *edited*
nice start...!!!
interesting what did arnav's parents do?
continue soon...!!!



Edited by devildiva21 - 09 March 2013 at 5:39am
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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
The starting is good! A very different one. 
Just a suggestion , please do check for spellings and format and hope you don't mind the suggestion :)
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