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A NEW POEM-A NEW SUNSHINE OF HOPE

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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys well as i was missing you alot so i thought of posting my this poem which i would specially like to dedicate to all my pyaare buddies 😊😊😊Guys i am also posting this poem becoz you guys have filled me up with very POSITIVE ENERGYπŸ˜†πŸ˜†...so here's my work as apni last poem se sayad tum logon ko bahut dukhi kar diya tha so for that sorry... SO HERE WE GO...


                               A NEW SUNSHINE OF HOPE                      

Every day a new sun rises
leaving behind all the darkness
leaving behind all the sadness
Every day a new sun rises

A sunshine of new hopes
A sunshine of new happiness
Happiness spreading colors of rainbow
Bringing smiles on faces now and so
Every day a new sun rises
Leaving behind all the darkness

Just close your eyes and feel the magic
The sunshine will fill you up
With new dreams and aspirations
Leaving behind  worries of past trials and tribulations
Everyday a new sun rises
Leaving behind all the darkness

To feel this sunshine is a joy forever
It's lovliness in your heart will fade never
It will make you forget all the gloomy days
And all the unhealthy or darkened ways
As for every day a new sun rises
leaving behind all the darkness

This new sunshine for me now
Is an endless fountain of immortal drink
Pouring on to us from heaven's brink
And it will never let my heart shrink
As everyday a new sun rises
Leaving behind all the darkness

so guys i know bahut lambi hai sorry for  that and also for my all  mistakes agar hui hon toh and also agar meine bore kar diya ho toh  but guys yeh meri ab tak ki sabse pyaari poem hai aacording to me😊
so guys bolo bolo becoz its comment time... pls guys like and comment if you love it kyonki your comments are my motivation...Love you all and missing you all😊😊😊SO COMMENTS PLS...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Res *reading*

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Ohhh Anki It was something really encouraging..you know wat, it pushes us to move on!!πŸ‘πŸΌ You are damn talented gal!!πŸ˜› You have dat spark in ya, you just need to lighten it up!! Love you nd a tight hug!!πŸ€—It was really your best!! πŸ‘

Every day a new sun rises
leaving behind all the darkness
leaving behind all the sadness
Every day a new sun rises

These lines kinda like caught my attention very much yaar..!! I mean you've simply expressed one of d biggest facts about our lives!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey anku! loved it very much! sissy i am missing you a lot! awesome and beautiful poem anku! loved these lines-


This new sunshine for me now
Is an endless fountain of immortal drink
Pouring on to us from heaven's brink
And it will never let my heart shrink
As everyday a new sun rises
Leaving behind all the darkness

these were y favourite lines in this poem! do well in your exams! love you a lot! muuaah!

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice dear u write very well
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow yaar luvly 
i luv it thanks for PM 
n do write more n do PM 
me again kk
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!! Suj a sweet poem dear!! Luvd it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
just one word
 
       "wow"
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. Amazing.
Yar take a bow now. It was so inspirational
So true, with everytime sun rises, we should just forget all the worries and move on. Your poems always touch me. And this one just gave me new hopes, new understanding. I so loved it.
Everyone is writing favorite lines so here are mine


Just close your eyes and feel the magic
The sunshine will fill you up
With new dreams and aspirations
Leaving behind  worries of past trials and tribulations
Everyday a new sun rises

I loved this lines. It feels like meditation, your poems. I feel so calm. Okay bahot dramatic likhati hu me pata he, par aadat dal de. Fan ban gayi teri.😊