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Posted: 08 March 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Suchi vs Shymala
Part 1
Shymala coming home frustrated at the way Suchi has been treating her. 
She recalls how Suchi is spoiling her friend's life. First Deepa; not allowing her to live with her husband and next Thulasi; leading to her abortion. That girl was seriously being such a life spoiler to them. 
Cutting into her thoughts, Anand, "Bujima! Ein chellam. Romba tired a? Intha coffee."
Shymala, "Thanks ga. Ena gavanippu elam balam a iruku? Ena vishyam?"
Sulking, Anand, "Ena bujima nee? Nan evalo aasaiya; ein pondatti velaiku poitu tired a varruvanu dinner lan seinju vechurukein..nee ena na.."
Shymala smiling, "Sorry bujipa. Office la oru ponnunala tension."
Anand, "Yaaru? Antha Praba kuda.."
Shymala, "Ava thaan. Suchi. Etho officeku ava thaan boss nu nenapu."
Anand, "Naan vena Tamizh ta pesava?"
Shymala, "Athaan lan venam. Tamizh um avaluku support thaan. Seri appa veedu veraikum poitu varalama?"
Anand, "Unga ammavum call panirunthaanga. Unga appa plus samiyar toruture thaanga mudiyalayan. Vaa. Polam."
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Shymala, "Appa. Officela oru ponnu enaku torture kudukira pa. Enaku matum illa. Thulasi, Deepa..."
Appa, "Athalan samalikanum kannu. Samiyar kita asirvatham vangiko. Atha thangikira sakthi avaru kuduparu."
Shymala, "APPAAA!!! Avala poi einu nalla varutha kepeinganu patha. Ipdi pesireinga!!"
Appa, "Illa kanu. Adi thadi correct illa nu mappilla thena sonnaru."
Shymala, "Ponga pa. Naanei samalichikiren."
She gets ready to go out of the house; when the samiyar and his followers enter the house. She gets more annoyed. Unknowingly, she dashes into a foreign follower, whose mobile phone falls down. She picks it up irritated and by mistake, she presses a button to reveal a photo of Suchi. She stands dumbstruck and turns to look at the foreign, "Iva..epdi?"
Foreigner, "What?"
Shymala, "I mean, who is she?"
Casually the foreigner looks at the mobile and when he sees Suchi, he gets hyper.
Foreigner, "Oh my God! She? She? She? She is ...she is ...", getting more hyper.
Just then, the swamiji calls out for some pooja and the man goes inside after giving her a weird look.
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Anand is waiting outside the house consoling his MIL. Shymala comes out confused. 
Anand, "Ena bujima? Ena achu? Ein ein bujima munju vaadi iruku?" 
Not bothering to answer him, she goes back inside the house with a 'determined' look. Anand confused follows her. The swamiji is making a fake style prayer and everyone are following it. She tries to get a glimpse of the guy again. He follows the bajans but it is very clear that he is disturbed.

(To be continued...)
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Edited by Gisel - 20 March 2013 at 8:01am

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Posted: 08 March 2013 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

Thanks da Gisel for the lovely superb FF!

Hahaha... atleast here Shymala got a good clue how to trap Suchi! Foreigneray nonthu joined samiyar group because of Suchi aa? Rofl... Very good one Gisel Clap. Loved itWink.

 
CV's itha parthavathu give solid role to Shymala on dealing with SuchiTongue.

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Posted: 08 March 2013 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
That's a real good start... Very Interesting...

After come back I have started to like Bhujjima & Bhujjippa combo.. That too Kodai trip they were very cute.  You have very well maintained the cute chemistry between them... and little suspense around Suchi...

Can't wait to see how it moves. Thanks by the way...




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Posted: 08 March 2013 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Gisel...wow another ff
Sooo sweet...
Ithu mathiryum kumaran yosika vaipu irruku...!
Continue the part...Day Dreaming

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
super connection of suchi with foreigner gisel..thats a great idea...must say the CTs cud use this one!

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Nice, it's the first time I'm reading a FF based on Thendral !
 
Really that Suchi character is so annoying !! I wish they do something to get rid of her !!!
 
I liked this first Chapter ! Well written!
 
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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Agathe, feel free to check out all the other FFs and Os by Thendralians, We've got great writers here. 

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@Smiles
Yeah I guess they're all good ^^
I just need to find time to read FFs UnhappyUnhappy

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