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FRIENDS. (fanfic by MUNNIBABA2006) - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
plz continue its really gud
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EVERYONE WERE EATING SILENTLY. THEN PREM BROKE THE SILENCE.

P: YEH KHANA KISNE BANAYA HAI?
S: MEINE.
P: BASANTI TUMNE KYU NAHI BANAYA?
S: KYU YEH ACHHA NAHI LAGA?

MUKTI HAD A SMILE ON HER FACE AND RAISED HER EYEBROWS.

P: NO ACTUALLY (LYING) MEIN TO BASANTI KO THANKYOU BOLE WALA THA KI USNE NAHI BANAYA..THIS ONE IS BETTER YAAR

MUKTI CHANGED HER EXPRESSION INTO SAD ONE AND PREM SMILED..

IT WAS TIME TO SLEEP. THE GUYS SHARED PREM'S ROOM AND THE GIRLS SHARED SNEHA'S. PREM COULDN'T SLEEP ALL NIGHT SO HE DECIDED TO GET SOME FRESH AIR. HE SAW MUKTI STANDING IN THE BALONY LOOKING OUTSIDE. HE WENT UPTO HER..

P: YAHA KYA KAR RAHI HO?
M(LOOKING AT HIM): TUM YAHA KYA KAR RAHE HO?
P: WOH NEEND NAHI ARAHI THI....
M: MUJHE BHI....WELL AB ARAHI HAI...MEIN CHALTI HU...GOOD NIGHT...

SHE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE WHEN PREM CAUGHT HER HAND. SHE TURNED AROUND. HE PULLED HER TOWARDS HIM AND HE IS TIGHTENED HIS GRIP. IT IS HURTING MUKTI...SHE DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING BUT SHE WOULD BURST OUT CRYING ANYTIME...PREM SAW HER FACE WHICH WAS FULL OF PAIN..HE LOOSENED HIS GRIP..

P: SORRY.....
M: KYU?
P: WOH .........TUMHE BAHAT DARD HUA?
M: MAINE KUCH KAHA KYA
P: NAHI
M: TO TUMHE KYU LAGA KE MUJHE DARD HORAHA HAI?
P: TUMHAR CHEHRESE SAAF DIKH RAHA THA....
M: (SMILED AND LOOKED THE OTHER WAY)

HER SMILE MADE HIM HAPPY. THEY WERE REALY CLOSE TO EACH OTHER. MUKTI LOOKED AT HIM AGAIN AND THIS TIME SHE LOOKED DIRECTLY IN TO HIS EYES, SHE COULD SEE SO MUCH OF LOVE THAT AS HIDDEN IN SIDE FOR 10 YEARS. SHE SLOWLY MOVES HER HAND AND TOUCHED HIS FACE AND MOVED HER FACE CLOSER TO HIS. SHE WAS ABOUT TO KISS HIM WHEN THEY WERE INTERRUPTED BY A SMASHIN VOICE OF A VASE. MUKTI LEAVES RUNNING. PREM SLOWLY GOES TO THE PLACE WHERE THE VACE WAS SMASHED. HE SLOWLY WEHT TO THE GIRL'S ROOM AND SAW ALL THREE SLEEPING. THEN HE SLOWLY MOVED NEAR SNEHA, COVERED HER MOUTH AND PULLED HER OUTSIDE. SNEHA IN SLEEPY VOICE.

S: KYA KAR RAHE HO?
P: JYAADA NATAK KARNE KI JAROORAT NAHI HAI......WOH VASE JAANBUCHKE BREAK KIYA YA GALATI SE...
S: WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT....
P: WHAT AM I TALKING ABOUT...(CATCHES HER EARS)...AB YAAD AGAYA HOGA WHAT AM I TALKING ABOUT.
S: AAOU....AAOU....ACHHA SORRY....YAAD AGAYA YAAD AGAYA.....AB KAAN CHHODO.
P: SO ANSWER ME.........WOH VASE JAANBUCHKE BREAK KIYA YA GALATI SE...
S: GALATI SE....MEIN TUMHARA 10 SAAL KA SAPNA YU KYU TODUNGI...
P: WHAT?....WHAT DO YOU MEAN 10 SAAL KA SAPNA?
S: AB PLS TUM NAATAK MAT KARO...MUJHE PATA HAI TUM BACHPANSE MUKTI KO BAHAT CHAHTE HO NA?
P(SMILES AND NODS): AUR AAJ YEH YAKEEN HOGAYA HAI KI MUKTI BHI MUJHSE BAHAT PYAAR KARTI HAI...PAR USSE CONFESS KARWANA HOGA....
S: BEST OF LUCK...(SHE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE WHEN HE STOPS HER)
P: TUMHARE HELP BINA NAHI...
S: MEIN MASTERMIND NAHI HU SHARAD HAI...USSE HELP MAGNA...ABHI SO JAO ...GOODNIGHT.....
P: GOODNIGHT.
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Posted: 17 years ago
I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT WILL WRITE SOON AGAIN.
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Posted: 17 years ago
yah u finally updated n it was pretty romantic hope there will be more pm scenes lik this update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

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ITS GR8 PLZ CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOON

karen singh thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
thats really gud plz continue   👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 👏 wow rly gd yaar count soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
i liked it.. 😊 acutually no... i didnt liked it .. i loved it.. 😳 plz continue soon 👏 i m waitin 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome! plzzzzz continue soon 😆 😆 😆 waiting for update 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE.......NEXT PART IN COUPLE OF HOURS