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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
heeeyz! just read ur fan-fic, gr8 intro Clap , gr8 promo Clap , gr8 part Clap ! Big smile hmmm, i thinkkk i have an idea with wat this Dead prithvi wants...lol, ill wait n find out...hehe =], continue soon, cant wait to read the next part! Big smile
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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_jaanu27

heeeyz! just read ur fan-fic, gr8 intro Clap , gr8 promo Clap , gr8 part Clap ! Big smile hmmm, i thinkkk i have an idea with wat this Dead prithvi wants...lol, ill wait n find out...hehe =], continue soon, cant wait to read the next part! Big smile


awww thx alottt i hope u keep reading till end EmbarrassedEmbarrassed and i think i noe wat ur think lol   keep watch and see wat happens lol
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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 9:01pm | IP Logged


PaRt-2
kripa and pritvi reach to the mall
p- kripa i forgot the money at home
k- it okie we won't by anything cause were short on money
p- kk kripa
kripa and pritvi looked around
p- am hungry u wanna go out and eat
k- sure lets go
kripa and pritvi go out to by something to eat
pritvi was in line
k- pritvi am just going for a walk I'll be back
p- okie be fast
k- okie (smiling)
kripa leaves for a small walk

next scene
u see a limozin pull in
u see angad coming out of it
a- common dadi
dadi get out
a- dadi u goo i'll comme
d- kk be fast
dadi leave
angad then walks toward the sidewalk
in front of him u see kripa walking but kripa look different ways and so is angad
then suddenly the bump into each other
angad grabs her in his arms before she falls
they both stare
k- angad khanna
angad get out of his thoughts
p- kripa common
kripa gets up
she stares at angad and slowly there hands draft away from each other angad kripa runs away
a- kripa (hit himself lightly on the head)

p- where were u
kripa then thinks of wat happen
pritvi snaps
p- hello
k- oo i met angad
p- u mean angad khanna
k- ya
p- wat u do
k- nothing u called me
p- wow were is he
pritvi looks around
k- he's gonna noe
p- i wants to meet that chick
k- kk pritvi lets go noe
p- kk (looking around trying to find angad)
they go in

angad thinks of wat happen
a- wow those beautiful eyes, that beautiful smile,
the voice *thinking*
d- angad
angad gets out if his thought
a- am coming dadi
angad goes toward dadi

angad then see kripa enter the mall and kripa see angad
they both just stare

I HOPE U LIKED IT!!!
pw- find out wat happens Wink
ruby89 Goldie
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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 9:02pm | IP Logged

me first LOL GOOD JOB! tht was good! loved the way they met LOLWink acctually i love the whole fanfic so far!Big smileClap

luv u sweetheart!

ur missy/jaan

RUby



Edited by ruby89 - 26 July 2006 at 9:06pm
sweet_jaanu27 Senior Member
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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 9:09pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by kyph05

Originally posted by sweet_jaanu27

heeeyz! just read ur fan-fic, gr8 intro Clap , gr8 promo Clap , gr8 part Clap ! Big smile hmmm, i thinkkk i have an idea with wat this Dead prithvi wants...lol, ill wait n find out...hehe =], continue soon, cant wait to read the next part! Big smile


awww thx alottt i hope u keep reading till end EmbarrassedEmbarrassed and i think i noe wat ur think lol   keep watch and see wat happens lol

oh im definately reading this till the end!Smile n gr8 job on the next part too, lol, this prithvi is getting me mad already, hahaLOL! continue soon!Big smile

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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
p- wat u do
k- nothing u called me
p- wow were is he
pritvi looks around
k- he's gonna noe
----->p- i wants to meet that chick <------
k- kk pritvi lets go noe
p- kk (looking around trying to find angad)
they go in
What is that suppose to mean??????!!!! n e ways i read the whole fan fic and its fantasic..plz continue soon!!! LOL

Edited by badgurl4u - 26 July 2006 at 9:22pm
Kashiish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruby89

me first LOL GOOD JOB! tht was good! loved the way they met LOLWink acctually i love the whole fanfic so far!Big smileClap

luv u sweetheart!

ur missy/jaan

RUby



awww thx alott for being first Wink always lol
luv to jaan
ur sweetheart
kashish
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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_jaanu27

Originally posted by kyph05

Originally posted by sweet_jaanu27

heeeyz! just read ur fan-fic, gr8 intro Clap , gr8 promo Clap , gr8 part Clap ! Big smile hmmm, i thinkkk i have an idea with wat this Dead prithvi wants...lol, ill wait n find out...hehe =], continue soon, cant wait to read the next part! Big smile


awww thx alottt i hope u keep reading till end EmbarrassedEmbarrassed and i think i noe wat ur think lol   keep watch and see wat happens lol

oh im definately reading this till the end!Smile n gr8 job on the next part too, lol, this prithvi is getting me mad already, hahaLOL! continue soon!Big smile



lol awww thx alott for the comment Big smileBig smileBig smile lol pritvi alwys gets me mad but wat can i do i have to add him in lol LOLLOL
kashish

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