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Virika Ke Pyaar Da Dhabba Virika OS (Page 5)

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this was an awesome start...Clap

i loved the concept dear...its simplyyy interesting...Big smile

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thanx for the pm...!!!

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osm blosm update !!!!! Heart
great work !!! keep it up !!! n ya continue soon Smile

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very nice banner dear...update soon
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update pleaseee...!!!
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interesting story!! do update soon!! :D
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awesome story loved it 
pls cont
I have a lot to say more about d update but need to go now
because of my exam
sorry but continue fast
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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 3:46am | IP Logged

Sorry guys for upadating late. As my exams were going on and after i went to village in holi..

Sp heres a long upadte for you all. Hope you all enjoy it.

Dun forgt to leave ur feedback and do press like button.

One more thing, i have made slight changes in the starting,, As u all have read that they both were in college, bt nw i have replace that college and made it office..

 Precap : Virika fallen on bed. Smile

PART 3 :

Both of them were on each other. Jeevs eyes were closed. Viren was staring at her. He was mesmerized by her beauty. Jeevika slowly opened her eyes and saw viren upon him. She was feeling very awkard. She was nt having her dupatta too. She suddenly closes viren eyes by her hand.

J : tum kya baar baar mujh par girte rahte ho.

V : ooo hello. Galti tumhari hai. Tumhe kisne kaha tha ki cream girane ke liye floor par. And thik hai gira v di toh usko wipe nhi kar sakti.

J : ummm hmmm thik hai na ho gayi galti. Insaan hun main. Par tumhe kisne kaha tha ki mujhpar hi giri.

V : maidam mujhe aap par girne ka koi shauk nhi tum bich mein aa gayi. And ye kya hai yr, tumne meri aankhein kyun band kar rakhi hai.

Jeevs pushes viren and gts up and start finding her dupatta. Viren gave her dupatta and she wears it.

Jeevs : thank you.

Viren : u most welcome.

J : viren mujhe bahut bhuk lagi. Plzz jaldi se kuch order karo.

V : kyun bhagwan ne tumhe haath nhi diye hai. Khud phone karke order karlo.

J : had ho yr. F9, I'll do it. Do tell m eurs too, will order.

V : whatever u wish..

She calls at kitchen no. and order the food. After some mins the waiter came with food. Jeeviak was eating like a kid and she was looking dam cute. Viren was staring her and a smile was on his face. He remember something and became sad and gt up frm the chair and stand near the window. Jeevika looked at him and she became tensed after seeing viren.

J <in her mind >: aaj toh pata laga ke rahungi ki viren ki iss uadsi bhari zindagi ka kya raaz hai.

She goes near viren and put her hand on hi sshoulder.

J : viren, kya hua ? tum khan eke table se uth gaye. Itne ache smile kar rahe the and suddenly tum sad ho gaye. Problem ky ahai viren.

Hiding her face from jeevika viren wiped his tears. He turns towards jeevika and said nothing happened.

Viren eyes were wet.

J : tum ro rah ethe. Viren tell me, dard batne se dard halka hota hai.

V : jeevika maine kaha na kuch nhi hua. Tum khanna khatam karlo and soo jao.

J : thik hai mat batao. I am going outside. Jab tak tum mujhe nhi bataoge, main andar nhi aaungi anur nahi kuch khaungi nahi kuch piungi.

V : jaisi tumhari marzi.

J : made an angry face na dwent outside.

It was 12am and still jeevika was out in hotel garden. Viren went near the window and saw jeveika sleeping on bench and she was shivering.

V : ye ladki v na mujhe pagal kar degi.

He went down in the garden with shawl. He wakes up her.

V : lets go to the room.

J : maine bola na jab tak tm mujhe wo baat nhi bataoge tab tak main yaha se nhi jaungi.

V : ok baba room mein toh chalo, waha batata hun.

J : dou think I am stupid ? if u think then I am not. Yahi par batao.

Viren puts the shawl on her and lifts her up in hi sarm and took her to room.

J : dude this is nt fair.

V : kitni heavy ho tum.

J : dun change the topic. Yr, main tumhari frnd hun, frnd se apni dil ki baat kehne mein kya problem hai.

Viren looks at her. They both share a eye lock moment <with sade face >.

V : f9, I'll tell you. Bt promise me that kit um iske bare mein phir kav nhi baat karogi.



Long update. Guys I am nt just hapie with the response. I send more than 50pms bt in return and I dun g twat I want. If you dun like reading my stories then tell me I'll stop writing it.



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