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Virika Ke Pyaar Da Dhabba Virika OS (Page 3)

..Amrita.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 10:47am | IP Logged
brilliant start...nice thought...superb story...lovd the last bit...continue soon waiting eagerly...

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Posted: 10 March 2013 at 10:56pm | IP Logged

Precap : Viren had a fight with goons, and saved jeevika. And Virika left for gurgaon.


Virika were on their way. There was complete silence in the car. Jeevika was crying frantically.

Viren : Hey ! Plzzz stop crying. Everything has been over now. The goons have gone. Now nothing will happen to you. Main hoon na. U will be safe with me.

On the word " MAIN HOON NA ", jeevs looked at viren and they again shared a eye lock for 10 secs.

Jeevika : thank u viren. If u would have nt come today at the spot. God knows wat would had happen. They would have raped me and my life would become hell. Thank u so much.

Viren smiled at jeevika.

Viren : Now let's end the topic and concentrate on project.

Jeevika : can we be friends.

Viren looked at her, and said Why not.

They shaked their hand.. And they became frends.

Jeevika : Umm viren I am hungry. Do u have something to eat.

Viren : ya, see at back seat. U would find something.

Jeevika  looked back and there were many food items. There were chocolates, Burger, Fries, Cold drinks. She started eating.

Jeevika was enjoying her food and in the meanwhile she thought that viren would be also hungry. So she decided to ask him.

Jeevika : viren would eat something.

Viren : no, I don't eat while driving the car and I don't talk also while driving th e car. Bt in my life I have talked first time with you whle driving the car.

Jeevika : acha viren agar tum long tour par jaate ho, aur agar tumhe bhuk lagti hai toh then also u dun eat.

Viren was going to tell something bt jeevika interrupts in btwn.

Jeevika : how can any1 be humgry for such long hours. Mujhe hi dhekh lo, Mujhe bhuke pet toh kuch v nhi hota. Aur tum bhuke pet itne der reh lete ho. WOW YR.. Bt how do u do this. Tum bolte kyun nhi chup kyun ho.

Viren : meri MP3 agar aap chup hongi toh hi main kuch bolunga.

Jeevika : aaa maine kaha kuch bola. Tum hi toh chup ho tabse.

Viren thinks kita bolti hai, and ab mujhe Isko 2 weeks jelhna hai. Par koi gal nhi frendship ki hai toh nibhani padegi.

Jeevika : ab kya hua, phir chup ho gaye. Answer my question.

Viren : mere saath mere buddies rehte hai, who feeds me.

Jeevika : frends toh main v hun, Tohn if I'll feed you will u eat.

Viren slowed the car and looked at jeevika.

Jeevika : Ab mujhe dhekhna band karo aur Driving par concentrate karo warna Durghatana ghat sakti hai. Nd she laughed

Viren came into his sense and looked infront and smiled at jeevika childish behavior.

Jeevika feeds him. While eating pizza its indegrients falled on his shirt. Viren stooped the car.

Viren : ye tumne kya kiya. Meri fav shirt kharab kar di.

Jeevika : I am really sorry for this ruko main av saaf kar deti hun.

Jeevika cleans up viren shirt with tissue paper and viren keeps staring her. Suddenly viren remember something and he took tissue paper from jeevika hand.

Jeevika : kya hua I am cleaning it.

Viren : no its ok I'll do it.

Viren cleans up and and again started driving. And they reached gurgaon.

They went to Hotel to take room.

Viren : I want to rooms.

Manager : Sorry sir We have only single room. Dou want.

Viren : No its ok. I'll find it another hotel

Manger : I am sry to say that all hotels of gurgaoun are full. This is the top most hotel of this city. If u are not gting room here, Then wats the possibility of getting the rooms In other ones.

Viren thinks and asked jeevika. jevika say to take the room.

Viren : ok give us. But as soon If u have any room vacant plzzz tell me.

Manager : ok

He took the key and moved to room with jeevka.

They went inside the lift.

There were 4 – 5 boys in the lift. Jeeviak gt scared again. He holds Viren tightly.

Viren Put his hand on jeevs shoulder and hold her and assures her that nthing will happen. They came on the floor Of their room. They went nto their room.

Viren : Main fresh hoke aata hum tum tab tak khanna order karo.

Jeevika : ok

Jeevika took her cream out to put on her face. Jaise hi usne cap khola. The bottle slips from her hand and whole cream fell down. She calls up the servant to clean it up. Viren came out, he did not see the fallen cream and he falls with jeevika on bed.

Ahhh ! Such a long upadate. Little boring. Bt I promise to give romantic one In Part 3.

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-Aaliya.KryAn- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 March 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
virika are friends..Heart
loved the feeding part

continue soon

Edited by krystu05 - 10 March 2013 at 11:30pm

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NiaKushalHolic Senior Member

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Posted: 11 March 2013 at 12:28am | IP Logged
wowowo suc a nice updates really nice :)
surbhi1994 Goldie

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Posted: 11 March 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged
awesome fab
viren fall on jeevika LOLDay Dreaming
continue soon
loved it

Natasha137 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 March 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged's not boring at all.
It's amazing!
Virika freinds !
And love feeding part
and jeevika talking continously LOL
and gosh they are in the same htel and loved the slipping part 
now they 'll get in loveHeart
continue soon!
Nishtha.Relan Goldie

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Posted: 11 March 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
wow such a great story and thanks for the PM, continue soon waiting eagerly...
mehwish123 Goldie

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Posted: 11 March 2013 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Really it wasnt boring at all
btw i was smiling at jeevz...
Really afat ki purya..haha

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