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Virika Ke Pyaar Da Dhabba Virika OS

kamu_zainaddict IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 29 August 2012
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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 11:08pm | IP Logged

Hey guys.

I am Back with my new OS. This time it is totally hatke from the story of viren jeevika which is shown n HUM BUM. I gt the idea in my mind wen I was going to sleep. I gt a very good response in my previous OS. Hope to get same here.

Characters :

Viren Singh Vadhera  : A son of business Tycoon Mr.Deepak singh Vadhera. A naughty, Joyfull boy, who is studing In Delhi and completing his MBA. Famous among girls, Teacher and all in college. He is the topper of the collegeā€¦

Jeevika Chaudhry : A girl of business tycoon Mr. sunil chudhary. She is a shy type girl.. A very simple an dstudious one. Also studying In Delhi and completing her MBA with Viren. Famous among boys due to her beauty and intelligence. Competitior of Viren.


PART 01 : page 01



Classes were going on college. Today was the day when teachers were gonna assign every student their Project and Their project partner. Teacher was announcing their the partners name. She announced Viren and jeevika will be the partner in the project and your project will be in Gurgaoan for one for two weeks.

Viren and jeevika were in shocked to hera their their name. They both dislike each other. Classes were over. Bt still viika were sitting in the classroom.

Viren < thinking in his mind > : chal beta shock se bahar aa. Ab jo ho gaya so gaya. Bas 2 weeks kit oh baat hai. Uske baad toh masti hai apni.

Jeevika < thinking in her mind > : Chal jeevika teri kismet mein ye langur hi likha tha. Kaise v kar ke isse 2 week ajhel le. Uske baad toh tu iski sakal v mat dhekhiyo.

Viren went near jeevika.

Umm jeevika. Tum khud Se gurgaon aa jaogi ya main.

Jeevika : No thanx I am a independent girl. Mian khud se aajaungi. Tumhe tak leef karne ki koi jarurat nhi hai. Understand. And waise v mujhe tumhare saath aane mein koi interst nhi hai.

Viren : oye hello madam, Don't be in dream that I am interested to go with you.

Jeevika : aaa how dare u to say that. Thanx to god dude that I am your partner. Otherwise.

Viren : oh hello, you say thanx to god that I am ur partner. And excuse me mujhe tumhe 2 weeks jehlna hai. Tumhe mereko nhi.

Meanwhile teacher  entered the class and scolded virika for fighting like kids.

Teacher : tum dono ka av se yahi haal hai toh 2 weeks mein kya hoga. Chalo go to your home and start doing packing.

Virika left for their Home.


They left for gurgaoun. Both of them on their way. Jeevika was half of her way and suddenly her car tired gt busrt.

Jeevika : driver bhaiya ye kya hau.

Driver : mam lagta hai ki tyre puncher ho gaya.

Jeevika : oh shit.

Driver : main dusra tyre lagata hun.

He goes and open dicy and unfortunately there was no tyre.

Driver : mam tyre toh hai hi nhi.

Jeevika : hey bhagwan. Bhaiya aapko chalne se pehle chech kar lena chahiye tha na.

Driver : sry

Jeevik a: its ok. Yaha toh aas paas koi mechanic v nhi milega. Aap ek kaam karo aap jaake mechanic dhundo. Main lift mangti hun. Ahar mujhe lift mil gayee toh main chali jaungi.

Driver : ok mam.

Driver went o serach for mechanic. Jeevika gt out of the car. She was looking dam pretty in light pink suit.

 She started for asking lift. 4 TO 6 car passed away bt no one gaved her lift. After some time one car stopped near her. There were two boys sitting there. They gt down of the car.

1st boy: are bhai maal toh bahut acha hai. Par bahut takleef main hai.

Jeevika was gting scared.

Boy : kya hua chamk challo, idhar aa jao hum lift dete hai. Bade aaram se le jaayenge.

They touched jeevika with wrong sense. They removed her bag and her dupatta. As soon as they were trying to garab her one car stopped there. It was non other than viren. He was looking Damm Hot In pink tee..

 Jeevika ran towards viren and hides behind him. He gaved jeevik aher duppata and her bag.

Boys : Ye dhekho majnu aa gaya apni laila ko bachane.

Viren goes near them and started beating them. Fightng was on and jeevika called police. After 5 to 6 mins police came and caught the boys. Viren went near jeevika. Jeevika was totally scared. She hugged Viren tightly.

Viren : jeveika kuch nhi hoga wo chale gaye. Ab tum mere saath ho aur safe ho.

They broked the hug and shared an eyelock.

Viren : tum car mein baitho, hume ab nialna chahiye.

Jeevika : thank u viren.

And they left for gurgaoun. 

Hope you guys like it. 

Don't forget to give ur feedbacks and likes. 

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sushmakryan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
awesome update thanks for the pm

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Syed695 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Nice Update n Thnks for the PM...~!

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romanticgurl070 Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2013 at 12:06am | IP Logged
awesome one

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sweetdollashita Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2013 at 12:28am | IP Logged
awesome start...
continue soon n thanks for pm...

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radzzz123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 March 2013 at 12:53am | IP Logged
thanx for the pm

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Natasha137 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2013 at 1:33am | IP Logged
nice concept...
I enjoyed their nhok jhokLOL
they both are looking damn gorgeous
and aww viren saved jeevika 
and wdishum dishum sceneThumbs Up
hug and eye lockHeart
continue soon

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surbhi1994 Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2013 at 3:30am | IP Logged
nce story
good concept
loving it
loved d pic also 
continue soon

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