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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
aweosme updates dear ..
Lovd it..
Arjun is so sweet..
Da way he is supportng riya..
Continie soon..

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
lovely update...
so touching

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
superb update
so finally ariya are married
continue soon

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
read all parts in ine go...amazing
riya behaving lyk a child...
arjun is so caring..
thanks for pm...
n sorry for commenting so late..

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Posted: 10 March 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged
amezing.cont. soon.manali diSmileSmileSmile

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SRY GUYS FOR LATE UPDATE. ACTUALLY NOT FEELING WELL AND MY OFC DON'T GIVE ME TIME. AND ONE IMP THING I CAN'T PM ABOUT UPDATES. BUT PLZ READ MY WRKS. REALLY SRY FOR INCONVEINCE.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
PART 4
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
After weding Ariya come towards car. Riya sees car & smiles , car  is fully decorated with flowers. Riya's mother hug her & crying. Riya immeadtly leave her & says her , "Maa , aa kyu ro rahi ho ? aapko kisi ne kuch kaha? Bhai police mai hai na ? "and she look towards Rathod. All shell shocked. But remeberd DR. advice. "Aap mujhse milna aana ha , aur dher saari chocolate leke.." Riya give her mother instructions. Her father remberes her saying , "Oho Maa , mai bilkul nahi rone wali , mai to isi city mai rehungi & Arjun bhi hai na , aap bhi na ..." Riya happily touching flowers. Arjun call someone& comes to Riya. He tell her to seat in car , Riya seat Arjun besides & Sameer drving car while Ayesha sitting nxt to him. Arjun parents take another car. Ariya reach home. Ayesha tell Riya to stop at doorstep. She goes inside & within a minutes she comes with Aarti ki thali & one kalash. She put kalash in front of Riya's feet & ask her to kick her. Riya look at kalash & sees rice in it, instaed of kicking she bends & take kalash in her hands & says ,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" mai  ye leke jaau? mai ise ghar ghar khlungi"  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun smile at himself & inform Riya , "Nahi Riya vaise hi karo , jaise bhabhi bol rahi hai , mai tumhe ise bhi bahut saara rice dunga."
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya agrees & put kalsh front of her feet & look at Arjun " Do"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Pehele ise kick maaro , jaise tum football ko maarti ho."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya kick kalsh & in mean time Sameer pull Ayesha towards him , otherwise kalsh hit on Ayesh's head. All rice spread in hall , Riya happily look at this & clappes. all smiles at her. "Ye to acha shugun hai Arjun." Ayesha inform them.
 
 
 
 
 
 
" ab chalo " Ayesha says & start to do Aarati.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ye kya kar rahi hai? " Riya ask Arjun.
 
 
 
 
 
"Ye hamari puja kar rahi hai , jaise bhgawan ki karte hai" Arjun informs her.
 
 
 
 
 
Riya immeadtly raise her hand like god give blessings & smile at Ayesha. Sameer control his laugh while Ayesha give her smile.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun pick Riya in his arms & enter house. and goes to room. Arjun parents already reach home & watching aal from outside. "Meri dono bahu kiti achi hai , kash Riya bhi theek hoti." Arjun's mother sadly says. "Vo bhi theek hogi , lekin bas use ek Maa ki jarurat hai aur Tum ek bahut achi Maa ho" Arjun's father tell her.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ariya goes to room & Sameer about to seat on sofa , but Ayesha pull him towards door.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Chalo jaldi"
 
 
 
 
 
"Par kaha?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Plz na... chalo na..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha & Sameer inform parents they have some wrk to do.
 
 
 
 
Ayesha seat in car & tell her husband to start car.
 
 
 
 
 
"Hame jaa kaha rahe hai?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Tum chalo to sahi..."
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer silently drives car.They reach on high way."
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha tell him to stop car near Petrol pump.
 
 
 
 
 
"Ayu , tank is full. , there is no need of.. "
 
 
 
 
 
"I said stop..."
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer stop car & Ayesha slide down window glass & takes a long breath.
 
 
 
 
 
"Ammm... "
 
 
 
 
 
"Sam i love petrol smell."
 
 
 
 
 
"Ammm "
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer look at her amusedly.
 
 
 
 
 
"Pata nhi aur 7 mahine mujhe kaha lekar jaayegi ye."
 
 
 
 
 
"Ayesha mai apne beti ko petrol pump kaam nahi karne dunga"
 
 
 
 
 
"shut up Sam , let me take this smell na"
 
 
 
 
"Hey bhagwan kya is ladki ko kisi aur cheez ki carving nahi ho sakti , kya ye mitti nahi kha sakti , kya ye kuch aur nahi soch sakti." he thinks to himself.
 
 
 
 
 
After 30 minutes Ayesha inform him "chalo ghar , mujhe neend aa rahi hai."
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer sigh and starts car.
 
 
 
 
 
HERE AT HOME.
 
 
 
 
 
After one hour one person come & ask for Arjun.
 
 
 
 
Arjun comes & sees person , person handed him one necklace & Arjun give him money.
 
 
 
 
 
"Ye sab kya hai? "
 
 
 
 
 
"Papa , vo Riya ko Ayesha bhabhi ki tarah Magalsutra chahyie tha , to maine jewellers se manga liya." and he goes from there.
 
 
 
 
 
"Arjun's mother look at her husband & says "Ise jyada pyar Riya ko aur koi nahi kar sakta."
 
 
 
 
 
At night all seating at dinig table , Arjun take his plate inside his room. Arjun's mother peep in his rrom & sees his hot tempers son feed Riya camily while Riya running  all over room , they are playing hide & seek.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Jun , tumhare pass jadu hai?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Kyu , kya hua?" Arjun ask her while giving her one morsel.
 
 
 
 
 
" To... t.."
 
 
 
 
 
"First finish it"
 
 
 
 
 
Riya finish morsel in her mouth.
 
 
 
 
"To tum mujhe har baar kaise pakad lete ho?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Kyu ki mai Arjun hue.."
 
 
 
 
"A,,,, AAA,,,, RRR,,,"
 
 
 
 
 
" Jun"
 
 
 
 
 
"Ha vahi..'
 
 
 
 
Arjun's mother smile at them 7 leaves .
 
 
 
 
 
Suddenely she hears one happy voice.
 
 
 
 
 
"Yeee yeee... Sam"
 
 
 
 
She sees Sameer & Ayesha come from outside & Ayesha happily eat ice-cream candy.
 
 
 
 
 
"Sam u want it?"
 
 
 
 
 
"No "
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Aaa lo na" Ayesha yell childshishly.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Acha one bite " he takes small bite.
 
 
 
 
 
" Ek aur"
 
 
 
 
" but i am  already take it."
 
 
 
 
 
"Mere liye" she look at him with puppy eyes. her mouth fill with icecream.
 
 
 
 
"Acha but only one."
 
 
 
 
 
"Hmm"
 
 
 
He takes another bite.
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha goes to room , Sameer stops seeing his mother.
 
 
 
 
 
"Maa aap ab tak nahi soye.?"
 
 
 
 
 
"Tum dono the kaha? kitni der ho chuki hai , maine kaha tha na aise halat mai use jayda der tak bahar nahi rehena chayie."
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ha maa , vo bas use petrol ki smell pasand hai , to use vaha leke gya tha."
 
 
 
 
 
"acha , but ice- cream to khane ke baad deta na.."
 
 
 
 
"Maa , agar use ice-cream nahi mili to vo khana bhi nahi khayegi.:
 
 
 
 
"acha thik hai , par aag se dhyan rakh "
 
 
 
 
 
" ji Maa"
 
 
 
 
 
 with that Sameer goes to room.
 
 
 
 
Precap:
 
 
Ariya seat in puja . Riya sleeps in Arjun's lap.
 
" Ayesha vo prasad hai , sab ko dena hai"
 
 
" Par mujhe vahi chayie "
 
"Sab ke khane ke baad"
 
 
"Ye lo ise mai se do"
 
"Ayesha "
 
 
she is crying badly.

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Yay...
Me first to comment...
Manu di,it was fab.
Loved the way Arjun is taking care of Riya.
Hawww...
Ayesha petrol ki smell smell karna chahti thi,isiliye,woh Sam ko leke bahar gayi thhi.

That was fab.

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