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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
nice story dear... so touching...
continue soon..
aur namkaran bhi karlo pls...

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Hey ..
Nice start .
The story is amazing and emotional ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Too different concept...
Loved d 1st chap di...

Awesomeee...

Update soon...

Poor Arjun...
Really..only a sec is enough to change onez life :'(

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 6:23am | IP Logged
plzzz continue.i want read more.

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
awww...awesome story dear...n d start was also awesome...loved it so so much...continue soon...Big smile

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Part 2
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun lookin at her , he comes near her & try to touch her , but she hide her face in her mother's lap. Riya he call her, she move little her face & innocetly look at her mother who is crying.. " Aap ro kyu rahe ho? , ache log nahi rote , aapko kisi ne tang kiya? " she ask her mother. Arjun again try to touch her but Sameer stop him & dragge him outside room.
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Bhai , vo to mujhe janti tak nahi."
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Kaise janegi vo tumhe , tum uske bachpan mai kahi nahi the Arjun... kahi nahi.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Par usne kaha tha , ki mujhe kabhi nahi bhulegi , chahe kuch bhi ho.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Arjun... hosh mai aao.. use thoda time do , phir hame dekhte hai ki kya kar sakte hai."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Bhai , 6 din mai hamari shadi hai."
 
 
 
 
 
" Are u out of mind? uski halat to dekho , vo shadi ke bare kya bolege?"
 
 
 
 
 
" kuch bhi , par mai janta hue use meri jarurat hai."
 
 
 
 
 
" mai janta hue , par... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
" nahi aap uske parnts se baat karo. "
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer goes from there. Arjun sliently looking at her from window. Riya wave her hand in air like she playing with Airoplan & sounds like "zoommm ae zooommm" Suddenely her gaze fell on window she immedtly pull blanket on her.
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun rembers her dream "She want to Pilot"
 
 
 
 
"So iski shruvat yaha se hue thi"  Arjun thinks to himself & smile.
 
 
 
 
 
Her parnts are stunned at Arjun's father propsal.
 
 
 
 
"Ye aap kya bol hai Suryakant ji , Arjun aur Riya ki shadi???"
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , mai sahi keh raha hue."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Par bhaisaab , ab Riya... "
 
 
 
 
 
" Mai sab kuch janta hue , par vo hi meri bahu banegi , aur saari rasme ho chuki hai , sirf shdi to honi hai."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Par... "
 
 
 
 
 
" Par , var kuch nhi , Mohan mai tumhara dost hue , aur tumhari beti ab Arjun ki zimmedari hai , aur vo kya hame sab ka faisala yahi hai , iss shadi ko lekar.."
 
 
 
 
 
" Par Riya ko sabhalana..."
 
 
 
 
 
" Arjun hai uske liye.."  his father says & his gaze stop on Ariya , Arjun is in her room & talking to her & Riya talks to him somthing she wave her hands in air & tell him somthing. .
 
 
 
 
 
Aap ek baat ka javab dijiye mujhe mujhe , agar ye hatsa Arjun ke saath hue hota to kya aap shadi tod dete?
 
 
 
 
 
Her parnts keep mum. They know Arjun is like son to them. they never
change their decision for him in any situatuion.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Actaully Arjun sees Riya searches somthing on bed , he goes room & ask her.
 
 
 
 
 
" Meri Pinku kaha hai?"
 
 
 
 
 
" Pinku?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tumhe meri Pinku nahi pata? "
 
 
 
 
 
" Ammm , nahi , mai bhul gaya , bata do na.."
 
 
 
 
 
" Meri Pinku , matlb meri doll , vo mujhe chod ke kahi nahi jati."
 
 
 
 
 
"Oh , vo to ghar pe hai."
 
 
 
 
 
" Kyu"
 
 
 
 
" Vo dar gyi thi , use yaha dar laga isiliye tumhari Maa use ghar chod ke aayi"
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha vo bahut darpok hai."
 
 
 
 
" Tum lekar aayo use"
 
 
 
 
" Par vo kaise dikhti hai?" Arjun knows Riya never thorw her doll & teddybears , she kept them all for her child.
 
 
 
 
 
Riya wave her hand in air & strt to tell him how her doll luking.
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun forwards his hand & ask her " Tum meri frnds banogi?"
 
 
 
 
" Par mai tumhe nahi janti"
 
 
 
 
" Amm , mera naam Arjun hai ... "
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum kounsi clas mai ho."
 
 
 
 
 
" Mai ... mai vo... "
 
 
 
 
 
"Vo school nahi jata , vo smart baccha hai na , isiliye usne jaldi jaldi padai puri kar li." Sameer answers her & rescue his brother.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Par mai bhi smart hue , to mai kyu scholl jata hue?" she drop bomb on Sameer.
 
 
 
 
" Are nahi to tum bhi school nahi jati , tumne bhi study puri kar li.'
 
 
 
 
 
"Are va " she clappe her hand .
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer talk with Arjun , suddenely Riya yells " Pinku?"
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , mai ghar jakar lekar aata hue "
 
 
 
 
Arjun leaves & Sameer about to leave when she call him.
 
 
 
 
 
" Bhai .. "
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer stops & look at Riya .
 
 
 
 
 
"Kya kaha tumne ... "
 
 
 
 
 
She look at his face & crying loudly , she don't know how he call him Bhai . Actually in their first meet she ask him ' mai aapko bhai bolu?" and he happily agree with that.
 
 
 
 
Sameer call Dr. Dr cheks her and inform "Dekhiye unpe koi bhi jor mat daliye , unke attiet (past ) ke kuch hisse hai , jo unke dimmag hai , jo baar baar saamnev aate hai ye uska result tha."
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer smile at her & ask her . " tum meri behen banogi?"
 
 
 
 
" aap mujhe badiwali chochlate denge?"
 
 
 
 
" ok.. "
 
 
 
 
" thik hai ab mere saath khelo."
 
 
 
 
 
"what???? mai par mujhe khel... "
 
 
 
 
" Riya ab raat ho gayi hai so , jaao , varna rashkas aa jaayega" her mother told her . Riya immeadtly look here & there & wish gud nite to Sameer. and goes to sleep.
 
 
 
 
 
At Morning
 
 
 
 
 
She snuggles herself . & forwards her hand to search somthing , " Ammm" she yell in her sleep. She stands near window & look at her , she is like child , Again she yells "ammm " The womes stands to window now look at her with curosity. Amm , Sam..." she mumbles in her sleep , her eyes tightly shut. Woman goes to her & try to wake up her . "Amm , Sam good mrng kisi to do , varna mai nhi uhtnewali." Women bend down & whipers in her ear "Sam to ghar per nhi hai , uht jaao , Sam tumhara wait kar raha hai." with that Ayesha open her eyes & found her saas looking at her smilingly. "Maa aap ? "  "Ha , mai , kyu ?"  "Nahi , kuch nahi.., mai frsh hokar aati hue " with that Ayesha runs to baathroom & Sameer's mother smiles at her.

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
i m gng to love dis stryy!!!...

superbb update..!!!

ariya ki shadiii.. now letzz see how arjun gonna handle riyaa!!!

arey wah riya ne toh arjun ko aapni frnd banaaliya!!!

heheh aishaa!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL!!!

update soon!!

and pls do PM!!!

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 8:59am | IP Logged
lovely update

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