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Sang Hue Tere ( PART 26 ,Pg 135)DEC 15) - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
superb update :) loved it
loving this side of riya so much :) she is so adorable
love how arjun is ready to marry and ready to take care of her in this condition :)
loved arjun and riya's conversation regarding her doll pinky
aisha sam good morning kissi to do :) how cute
hope riya gets well soon
can't wait to read more
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...
love ariya convo... riya is cute and arjun awsum...
looking forward to ariya marriage... love how everyone in arjun's family is eager to make her their bahu...
hehe bechari aisha :D :D sasuma ke samne ye kya bol diya...
continue soon...
cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice.love the good morning kiss.cont. soon.:) :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read both the parts...!!!!
Awesome...!!!
Loved it completely...!!!!

Nice thought... and lovely presentation...!!!!!

Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh manu u r rwaly grate update..
lv u manu...
for such a grate update..
hummm so riya ..lost her memory
arjun family is so cute...
ayisha part was cute..
update soon dr..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read it...
first part was emotional...
& second part so cute..

Liked it..
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow mannu di the concept was amazing 
ariya is getting married and riya meet with accident 
ho ho ye kya hogaya me sad ...
so riya lost her memory ,so sad
shaddi to hogi na looking for it 
and wow arjun taking care of her so sweet na,
riya is behaving like child hahaha
continue soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...!
riya and arjun marriage...!πŸ˜ƒ
loved Arjun's family understanding...
Aisha and sam!!😊
waiting for more!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
After 6 day is Ariya's shadi , everyone is waiting for thata day. But now all find it difficult bcoz they all know ki Riya ko ready karna ye bahot badi baat hai. wht can they tel her? But Arjun himself take this responsibility. He goes to her room. She is talking to Pinku.
 
 
 
 
 
she sees Arjun & says her Pinku,
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Pinku Smart Boy aa gaya."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hmm , to mai smart boy , aur tum?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Smart Girl " and clap her hands.
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Riya , tum mere saath mere ghar chalogi ?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ammm , ( she is playing with her hair & thinking somthing) ek shart per , nahi nahi ( she count somthing on her fingers , but still confuse.)
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Kyu hua?"
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum meri shart manoge na , to mai tumhare saath chalungi."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Shart bata do."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum mujhe nahi daato ge."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ok"
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ae , mai bol rahi hue na."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Acha bolo."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum mujhe murga nahi banao ge ."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum raat ko story sunoyoge"  " Mujhe Ice-cream doge"  " Mere saath ghar ghar khleoge "  " Meri Pinku ki shadi kara doge."  " Aur mujhe doodh nhi doge , vo ekdum gandha hai"  "Aur  mujhe red frock kabhi nahi doge.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Red frock per kyu?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
" i dn't like red."
 
 
 
 
 
 
"oho . " Now he understand why Riya reject all red colour bridel dress.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ok , mujhe sab manjur hai."
 
 
 
 
 
Riya happily hug him & says "Good Boy  , ab tum hamari team mai ho."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tumhari Team?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , meri aur Pinku ki"
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Oho , bahut achhe."
 
 
 
 
 
"Pinku shake - hand karo... A,,,,j...jj..." she have difficuilty to speak his name.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Arjun "
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , kar lo kar lo " she intentionly do not take his name, bcoz she found it hard to speak.
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum mujhe jun keh sakti ho"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"jun " she raise her eyebrows & smile at him madly.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun also smiles. .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Riya , ek aur baat hai."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kya ?"
 
 
 
 
 
"Jaise maine tumhari shart maani hai na , vaise tumhe bhi meri shart maani padegi"
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya look at him scardly.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
she tensely look at his face.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Tum mere saath ghar aa sakti ho , par uske pehele ek choti si puja hogi , uske baad mai tumhe ek gift dunga , uske baad mai tumhe mere saath lekar jaaounga., aur tum hamesha mere saath , mere ghar par rehogi."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
she seems to relif ,.
 
 

 
 
 
 
 " Ha , ha , chalo."
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Par puja ke liye tumhare pass naya dress ... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Mere pass green colour ki new frock hai & matching sandles , aur choodi bhi" she inform him proudly.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Nahi maine ek bahut achi dress li hai , tumhare liye "
 
 
 
 
 
and he shows her pink & green colour lehenga .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya like awww, "Ye to Pari ke jaisa hai."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun smile at her . "Ye hum dono ki pasand thi " he thinks to himself.
 
 
 
 
 
 
After 1 hour Riya's mother 7 Ayesha ready Riya for marraige.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun wears simple white colour krta-payjama.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya seat besides Arjun with Pinku.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Pandit start "Havan " Riya sees this & scared. She yells loudly  "aag aag mumma aag" . Riya's mother about go near her , but her father stops her. Riya about to cry  , when Arjun tel her come here & pointing his lap. Riya immeadtly seat on his lap. Arjun wipe her tears , & smothing whispers in her ear. Riya annoyingly look at him & smiles. Then Pandit tell them " Ab phero ka wqut ho gaya hai , aap dono khade ho jayie." Ariya stands , Riya is geeting bore. she forwards her hands towards Arjun , Arjun understands & pick her in his arms & complete saath phere.  Arjun about to put Mangalsutra around her neck , but she refuses , "Ye mujhe pasand nahi hai."    "Agar ye tum nahi peheno gi , to tum mere saath kaise chal sakti ho? Dekho us Didi ne , tumhari Maa ne bhi ye pehena hai. Riya look at all & found same thing around their neck. She looking at Ayesha's neck & inform Arjun "Mujhe vahi chayie"  Arjun tell her "abhi ye lo , ghar jane ke baad mai vo de dunga"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Pakka promise"
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ha"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun put Sindoor on her hair partion. She touch it & also take some Sindoor & put on Arjun's forhead. She smile at him. Arjun put Payal around her ankle. She happily playes with it. & giggles.
 
 
 
 
 
"Ab shadi sampaan hue , aaj se aap pati patni hai." Arjun tell Riya to stand up. she stands up Arjun bend down & take blessings from Pandit , Riya sees this and she do the same.
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful concept 

that's true love 

i want to read more about how arjun will deal with cute little riya and how she'll regain her conscious 

waiting for next part