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Hi guys , actually im not feeling well.But gets bore ... din bhar sirf so rahi thi yaar. . So i like to start new story. But let me tel you somthing. Ki story ka update daily nahi milega. and abhi tak ye SS ye FF ye decide nahi kiya. and most important agar response acha hoga to hi story continue hogi.. Hpe u like it. And mst imp abhi tak naam decide nahi hua , to after reading plz give me suggestion.
 
 
 
 
Part 1
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He hug her tightly , and she smile happily. They love each other so much. After 1 week  they are enter into new phase of life. Ys they will be known as husband-wife after 1 week. They enjy gossiping , after that they gud bye each other. Boy headed for his car , while girl catch auto , girl turn & look at him , he guestures her to caal him , she nodded . And seat in Auto. Boy seat in car & talk on his phone , suddenely he hears loud sound . He immeadtly open door & see that dirction where that big sound coming. He sees lot of people gather there. He goes there. He reach to spot & start to handling crowd. He reach middle & sees big accident was happened. One Auto completely get burn , he look around & find somone lying near tree. He rushed there & sees that person. Yes , she is girl , he reconize her from her cloths. her face & upper part of her cloths fully get wet due to blood. Blood continuesouly ozzes from her head. He goes near that girl & check her heartbeat, yes she is still alive , suudenely his gaze fell on her purse , he pick that & open & found her ID proof. He reads that name & look at girl. He feel on ground . he got shocked . he look at her & take her in his lap. He try to wipe blood from her face with the help of his hand , & his eyes feel with tears. "Riyaaa" persons just look at him , like he is mad. He ask for help but on one come for help. He finally yells , " I'm Police Officer , plz help me" He crying bitterly . Persons help him to take her in car. He thanks them & goes to hospital. He admitted her & call her parents , his parents .Their parnts rushed to hospital. He just seating on bench like statue , his white shirt get completly red due to her blood. His father look at his state & call Sameer immeadtly. Sameer pick phone after three rings. His father crying bitterly on phone. Sameer understands somthing bad happen.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Baba , aap ro kyu rahe hai? baba mujhe dar lag raha hai boliye kyu hua? "
 
 
" Sameer , sameer . Arjun... "
 
 
 
His heartbeat stops , is his younger is ok? " Baba , saaf saaf boliye.."  
 
 
 
 
 
his mother now talk on phone, "Beta , kuch mat puch , tu bas jaldi aaja."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He look at his cell , he know somthing bad happened to his Arjun , his younger brother.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
he call somone, within a one hour one women enter in a cabin with worried face.
 
 
 
 
 
"Sameer baat kya hai , aapne mujhe achnak kyu bula liya? aur aap ro kyu rahe hai?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Ayesha , Maa ka phone tha , kuch hua hai vaha , hame jana hoga , bas ab aur kuch mat puchna."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She understand his situation , she knows her husband love his family so much. She immeadtly goes to Shree & request him to book ticktes for Delhi. While she take Sameer home & packs their bags. At eveing they are in hospital . Sameer just look at his parnts. he noticed Maa must crying bitterly. and her parnts is seating like no life between them. Sameer signals his wife to go them. While he look at his brother , he looking lost. He goes near him & call him slowly. Arjun look at him & hug his brother tightly. "Dada , Riya ... " he burst out in tears. Dr. comes out from his cabin. All rushes to him.
 
 
 
 
 
" Ji andar jo ladki hai ... " 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Vo ladki nahi hai , meri honewali patni hai Riya." Arjun informes Dr.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Riya..." " Ji mujhe unke parnts se kuch baat karni hai." Dr inform them.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Her parnts look at Arjun & goes with Dr. After 10mins they come outside , her mother faint down , while her father crying bittery. Arjun & Sameer rushed to them.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun ask them , but they just cried madly. Arjun leave them & goes to Dr, angrliy. Sameer father singnal him to go with him , while he handle her parents.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Dr , kyu hua hai meri Riya ko.?"
 
 
"Plz seat down Mr. Rawte."
 
 
 
 
 
" Mai yahi salh dunga , ab aap ye shadi mat kariye."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" What??? aap hote kon hai ye sab bolnewale? aur kya kaha hai apne mere saas-sasur se? "
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer barges in cabin & look at both , "Dr. plz tel us."
 
 
 
 
 
" Dekhiye , patient ki sir pe... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Pateint nahi , Riya..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Acha thik hai Riya... " Dr shows them some reports & X-ray.
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Dekhiye Mr. ... "
 
 
 
 
 
" Mr Sameer "
 
 
" Ji Mr . Sameer Riya ko sir pe bahut gehera ghaav laga hai , iske baje se vo shyad Coma mai jaa sakti hai , ya unki yaadash jaa sakti hai ya... " he look at person who seating with Rathod.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ya... aap ruk kyu gaye Dr.? "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Dekhiye unke brain pe kitna asar hua hai , ye to unke hosh mai aane ke baad hi pata chlega , shyad vo mentally challenged bhi ho sakti , isiliye mai suggest karta hue ki , aap unke shadi ke bare mai bhul jaye to behtar hoga."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ae , agar meri Riya ko kuch bhi hua , to maar dalunga tujhe."
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer take him away from cabin.
 
 
 
 
 
Dr gulped down.
 
 
 
 
Ayesha wating for her husband. Suddenely she hold her palm on her mouth & searching for washroom. Sameer calm down Arjun. After somtime Ayesha comes there , she wants to go home , but she knows her husband wants her , need her , her stomach starts to pain little. Sameer's mother comes near her .
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Beta tu aur Sameer ghar jaa , aisa halat tera yaha rehana theek nahi hai. "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Nahi Maa , mai theek hue."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Apne chehera dekh , kitna utar gaya hai , aur jab se aayi hai tabse Sameer ke saath bhag rahi hai , kuch khaya bhi nahi sirf thoda juice piya tha."
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer goes near them .
 
 
 
 
"Ab Sameer tu hi samaz isse , aise halat mai iska yaha rehena theek nahi hai. "
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer look at Ayesha " Maa thik keh rahi hai , tum aur Maa ghar jaao , hame hai yaha Arjun ke saath"
 
 
 
 
 
" Par Sameer ..."
 
 
 
 
"Aur kuchnahi...  Sameer jo keh raha hai vahi karo , Sameer tum bhi ghar jaao aur sab liye kuch khane ko lekar aao."  his father orders them.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
All reach to home. Maa goes to her room While Sameer & Ayesha goes there room , both are damn tires. Both are frenshn up. Ayesha seat on chair 7 close her eyes.
 
 
 
 
 
"Ayesha , Ayesha " Sameer calls her.
 
Ayesha open her eyes & found her husband standing their with jiuce & sandwitches.
 
 
 
 
" aap ye sab kab?"
 
 
 
 
 
" Shhush , kha lo , bechari meri Princess kab se bhookhi hai" and caressing her tummy.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ayesha smile at that, " Amm , nahi aaj to hum Papa ke saath se kahynge"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Acha thik hai " Sameer feeds Ayesha , after eating 2 sandwithches , Ayesha hold his hand .
 
 
 
 
 
" Nahi Ayesha , u have to finish it"
 
 
 
 
" Mera man nahi kara raha "
 
 
 
 
" Par "
 
 
 
 
" Sameer kuch acha nahi lag raha hai.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kyu hua ? "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha hold her palm on her mouth & runs towards washroom."
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer hears her voice , she is vommting. he rushes towards her & pattes her back. After vomitting she turn rest her head on his brod chest.
 
 
 
 
 
" Thak gayi?"
 
 
 
 
" Hmm"
 
 
 
 
 
 
He bent down & pick her in his arms 7 place on bed. Within a minutes Ayesha goes to sleep. Sameer smile at her & kiss her forhead . and goes to kitchen.
 
 
 
 
 
" Maa aap kya bana rahi ho? "
 
 
 
" Dal-chawl "
 
 
 
 
" Ayesha theek hai na.."
 
 
 
 
" Nahi use phirse ulti hue , ab so gye.."
 
 
 
 
" Hmm . thik hai . mai dekh lungi use , to plate le "
 
 
 
 
They both silently eat , Sameer goes to hospital with food while Maa goes to sleep with Ayesha.
 
 
 
 
 
 
In hospital.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Riya gain consciouness.
 
 
 
 
 
Dr check her. Riya open her eyes & look around.
 
 
 
 
"Maa , meri maa kaha hai?"
 
 
 
 
her mother comes near her , Riya hugs her & stole glances to all.
 
 
 
 
 
"Maa , mujhe aaj school nahi jana' Riya childshishly infromes her mother.
 
 
 
 
All shocked at that.
 
 
 
 
" Lagta hai inke dimaag par iss accident ka gaehra asar hua hai , vo lamha vo yaad nahi karna chahti , isiliye vo apne sab se ache yaado mai , matlab bachpan mai chali gye hai." Dr informs them
 
 
 
 
Precap:
 
 
Arjun frends with Riya.
 
 
" Sam,  ammm , gud mrng kissi to do , varna mai nahi uthne wali."
 
 
His mother smiles at her antics.
 
 
 
 
 
INDEX
 
 
 
part 1 - page 1
 
 
part 2 - page 3
 
 
part 3 - page 6
 
 
part 4 - page 9
 
 
part 5 - page 12
 
 
part 6 - page 14
 
 
part 7 - page 17
 
 
part 8 - page 18
 
 
part 9 - page 21


Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 10 May 2013 at 11:06am

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wow... nyc story... plzz continue soon!!!!

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Manali di ...kya ho gaya ..

happy happy ho jaao 

yeh lo jadoo ki jhappiHug

now coming to story ...awesum 

sersiously liked d concept 

d way u wrote first chapter was marvelous 

waiting for more

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
wow..
Diff cncpt nd great start dear :)
lovd it..
Aww.. Poor riya.. She is actng lyk kid..
Continue soon :)

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Awesome start... concept is really different...  continue soon...

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Great start!!

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
awesome story line...
continue soon

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superb start di...
loved it..
omg ariya were to get married and riya met with an accident :'( and behaving like a child... :(
continue soon...

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