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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
WOW! Such a sweet,romantic and adorable update. Really loved how Jeevika took care of Viren. <3 And the cherries part ROFL
Amazing :D Thanks for the long update <3

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged

awww it ws a cute  lovely romantic update

loved the update

thanks fr the update 

pls update soon

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
this was such a brilliant superb update

loved it
was awesome

please continue soon

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 9:42am | IP Logged
superb update!!!
loved the way both take care of each other!
Seeing Jeevika upset, makes Viren sad and vice versa!
Love the bond that the two of them share...

cute update and keep going!
thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 10:38am | IP Logged
That was a lively and lovely update
plz cont soon

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by krystu05

miku miku miku Hug Hug  Hug
do you how much i missed this story of yours??? Unhappy
you took so so long to update...Cry

was so glad after recieving your pm...Big smile
i was literally dancing...Dancing

Coming to the update...LOL
I really dont know where to start from...Confused
after reading this...i have become absolutely speechless...Approve
There are no words left with me to describe you and your updates...Embarrassed

the long wait was really worth it!! Smile
it was so so long update...i m seriously so very much happy right now after reading this..Big smile

jeevika was so scared when viren was not getting up...loved the way she hugged him..she is too cute...Smile

viren wiped her tears and hugged her.
viren-dekha meri to baat hi kuch aur h,thoda sa kuch hua nhi ki ladkia meri seva karne k liye ready hoti h.
jeevika chuckled and hit his arm-acha!bhot ho gya ab natak chalo ab so jao.

love how viren always suceeds in pacifing jeevs...Embarrassed

Kada scene was too good too...LOL

viren-vaise princess...i did what u said.dont u think u should also fulfill my wish.i mean i drank d kada for u,u should also do whaqt i say.
jeevika was first confused but later she understood his intensions-hm i think u r right.
viren-hm...i wanted to taste cherry.
jeevika winked-srry viren but i cant bring u strawberry in dis season
viren-no u can give it to me in every season.u r having it right now too.
jeevika-kidhar.if u know where it is den i will bring it for u
viren touched her lips signaling d place of cherries.
jeevika-kya hua viren.mere lips pe kuch laga h kya.
viren a lil irritated-are nhi yaar.i want to taste d cherries now.
jeevika-y r u behaving like dis.i dont know how to bring cherries now.
viren irritated-i dont want u to bring cherries, i want a kiss from u.
jeevika giggled-u r so cute viren *she laughed again*
viren-so u were messing wid me right
"maybe"she said while getting up.but vireb pulled her back.
viren-dont try to b over smart miss choudhry.
jeevika- viren u should take rest.
viren-u r not letiing me to.u make me lose my what can i do...
jeevika blushed-shutup viren! let me go now
viren-first my kiss
viren made a puppy face-plz
jeevika-fine but just one
jeevika approached  virens lips and kissed him.she broke d kiss quickly and ran.
viren-are jeevika!

loved this one the most...Embarrassed

the last part was too good to be described..
you are a hell amazing writer!! Clap

miku you are seriously the best!!
Really love u loads...<3 Hug

Next update very soon...Wink

Aaliya Heart

aly aly alyHug Hug

do u know how much i missed u?

i am sorry for d late update but frankly i dint wnted to update

but i updated only coz of u

i am glad dat u liked it

i luv u sho sho sho much

u r best and no one can take ur place

love and a big tight hug 

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
i loved it 
thx 4 the pm 
continue soon




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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
WOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! cutesttt updateee everrr!!!!! awesomeee..keep continuinggg!!!!

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