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VIRIKA FF-LOVE STORY part27-pg90 (Page 4)

srinuvirika Groupbie

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 6:30pm | IP Logged
OMG these updates are amazing!! update soon!! pm me if possible!

MehakGera Goldie

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
hey guys! start commenting coz next update will b on page 7.i know u guys didnt like it as i can see d comments and like. it is my first tym, but i will try my best so dat u like it.
all typs of critism is welcomed. and if u come up wid an idea releated to dis ff u can give me dose ideas so dat ill try to implement on dem.
regular commenters thnx vry much

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Angelic.gurl IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
amazing update
loved both parts
continue soon
pls pm me
-Aaliya.KryAn- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
i m short of words

loved both the updates sooo muchh
u r an awesome writer

virika praising each other..

dance on ishq wala love..Day Dreaming

update soon
MehakGera Goldie

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
so guys i am updating bfor pg 7 but next update will surely be on pg 8 or 
part 3
note-viren and jeevika's families lived in chandigarh.deir families were vry close to each other
viren's mom- vanshika
viren was shocked to see dat some drunk guys were teasing jeevika
jeevika-stay away from me and she pushed dem
guy-are aj to tum badi achi lag rhi ho thoda dance hamare saath b kar lo he held her hand
jeevika-dont dare to touch me she slappped him
guy- teri itni himmat
viren was fuming with anger.guys were moving closer to jeevika.tears were flowing from her eyes and she was yelling viren of the guys were trying to hold her waist when viren came and punched him.
viren-how dare u touch her
big fight started.everyone gathered over of d students called de security and police.
jeevika-leave dem viren.lets go
den suddenly a guy hit viren's head with bottle of wine.his head started to bleed.still he was a while security came and took dem out.
jeevika-viren! and she hugged him tightly.viren tightened d hug.tears were flowing from both of deir eyes.after 2-3 mins dey broke d hug, viren touched jeevikas face
viren-tum theek to ho na
jeevika-main bilkul theek hun. she touched viren's head where it was bleeding
jeevika- tumhe itni chot lag gai h. chalo jaldi ghar chalein.
viren-main bilkul theek hu jeevika
jeevika held his hand and took him towarrrds d car
jeevika-chup chap ghar chalo viren
she drove to her rum.dey went her bedroom
viren-jeevika main bilkul theek hu.
jeevika-itni chot lagi h aur tumhe ye theek lag rha h, ruko main first aid box lati hu
she brought d first aid box and started to clean viren's wound while crying
jeevika-oh sorry.viren tumhe kya zaroorat thi un gundo k sath ladne ki
viren-koi tumhe chede aur main khada hoke dekhte rahun
jeevika-tum itni ache kyu ho viren. main tumhari frnd hona diserve nhi karti
viren-ae who r u to decide dis
jeevika-bhot dard ho rha h
viren-nhi main bilkul theek hu
jeevika-shut up viren! kya tabse main theek hu laga rakha h.koi bhagwan ho kya jo tumhe kuch nhi hota
viren-m sorry. ouch aram se yaar
jeevika-lo ho gay.ab tum mere ghar hi rahoge jab tak tum theek nhi ho jate
viren-nhi jeevika.its ok main apne ghar hi rahunga aur vaise b mere kapde kaha hain tumhare pas
jeevika-tumse kissi ne pucha tum kaha rahoge.maine order dia h ki tum mere ghar hi rahoge.aur raha sawal tumhare kapdo ka to vo tum b janti ho ki mere ghar tumhare kapdo ke pair hote h. ab koi aur bahana
viren-but tum pareshan ho jaogi
jeevika-pareshan karne ka kam mera h tumhara nhi isliye pareshan hone ki chinta tum apni karo
viren-vo to main bhil hi gya tha
jeevika-chalo ab kapde change karlo.main tumhare lie khana lati hu
viren-theek h .main b ata hu
jeevika-dont even dare to. iss bed  se uthne ke bi koshish ki to dekhna.
viren-ok mam.both of dem smiled to each other.
jeevika came with food afetr some time
jeevika-ye lo tumhare lie healthy aur  light khana
viren-plz jeevika.i hate dis food
jeevika-plz rockstar.thoda sa ,mere liye
viren-ye emotional blackmail mat kiya kar.theek h but thoda se
viren's phone started to ring.jeevika brought it from d table
jeevika- ye lo aunty ka phone h
viren picked d call
viren-hello ma
vanshika-hello viren1tum theek to ho na. tumhe zyada chot to nhi lagi.
viren-are ma main bilkul theek hu aur apko ye sab kisne bataya?
vanshika-kisi ne nhi. tumhe zyada dard to nhi ho rha na
viren-ma main theek hu.apko ye sab apki ladli ne bataye hoga.chup to isse rha nhi jata.
jeevika:O she snatched d phone from viren
jeevika-dekhiye aunty apka beta din bhar mujhe tang karta rahta h.
vanshika-mujhe pta h beta, ye bhot shaitan hota a rha h
jeevika-aunty ap bilkul chinta mat kijiye. main viren ka ache se dhyan rakhungi.
vanshika-tum ho to islie mujhe koi chinta nhi h.theek h beta kal bat karte h.gud nite 
jeevika-ok she hung up d call
viren-tum apne andar koi bat rakh nhi sakti na
jeevika-nhi. any problem.chalo ab so jao 
viren-theek h main guest room mein jata hu
jeevika-oii itna formal hone ki zarrorat nhi h.pehle bar mere ghar mein aa rhe ho.pehle b hum yhi sote the na to aaj kuch nya h kya
viren- acha meri ma.Wink
jeevika tucked him to sleep.she change her dress and sat beside him staring 
jeevika-kitne pyare ho tum viren.she smiled to herself Embarrassed

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-Aaliya.KryAn- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
awesome update!!
love u for giving updates so fastHug

viren fighting for jeevika...

the way jeevika bossed himLOL
love her!

update soon

Edited by krystu05 - 04 March 2013 at 10:56pm
Sameeha.Tacker Senior Member

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Loved the update dear and thanks for the pm. It was so nice to read like how they both care for each other and the hug. Hayeee tune to mar dala and really mujhe ye princess aur lockstal ki stoly  bahut pashand hain. hehehehe and continue soon and pm me.

Edited by Sameeha456 - 05 March 2013 at 12:02am
sushmakryan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 12:08am | IP Logged
loved it continue soon

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