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VIRIKA FF-LOVE STORY part27-pg90 (Page 26)

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kkprincess

I LOVE UR UPDATE ...Tongue
CONTINUE SOON...Cry
V R STARVING FOR THE NEXT PLZ UPDATE SOON
Big smile
M sorry but i think u didnt read my note
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
NOW ITS PG 26...
POST THE UPDATE PLZ...
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZZ...
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Hey Sweety!

First of, I'm so so so so so so so Sorry for late commenting!
Kill me for this!! Yeah... really!!

You know, this story is just suuuperb! How cute, Virika!!

So adorable, their fight, their love, really cute!! 
Princess, and rockstar... awwie...!!

The time when Viren misunderstood and was sad, it felt so bad! Jeevs was trying to pacify him but he was hurt!

the time when Jeevs saved him from the gunshot, that was so touching!! 
I kinda cried tht time... 
you portrayed the feelings so well..!!

when they got together, i was like so so so happy!!
Awwie... my Virika!!

It was too good! i mean it is your first attempt and you rocked sweety!!

Please do continue soon!! and PM me!!

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 5:28am | IP Logged
hey its page 26 now
you need to continue as soon as possible..
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Heegra v r on pg 26
Oye cmon yar update soon u r such a good writer
and i can truely sense d feeling of urs having likes and comment
that is fair enough but d ppl who r commenting they r also sufferrin
dear just relax
chill karo




update ur story soon ur frndz and specially me r waiting
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 8:15am | IP Logged
pg 26...hehehehehe...now update
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
UR UPDATE IS AWSOME...U R WRITTEN VERY GUD STORY...WAITING FOR THE NXT PART...UPDATE SOON[B][/B][I][/I][U][/U]
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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
part 16
a week passed, jeevika was now discharged from d hospital and for now was living wid viren.
viren and jeevika's love for eachoder was becoming strong day by day.whatever deir souls are made of,his and her were d same.each day dey loved each oder more,today more dan yesterday and less dan tomorrow.dey were each oder's heartbeat.viren and jeevika could not live widout each oder.
it was a brite sunday morning.sunrays entered d room through french window and fell on beautiful face of jeevika.jeevika slowly opened her eyes and saw her life sleeping peacefully wid his arms around her.she smiled to herself and caresed his face.she gave a cute kiss on his cheek.
jeevika-viren really u r my life.i never knew how to live,until i knew how to love...you.love is what happened when i met you.life is what happened when u loved me.
jeevika's eyes were welled up wid tears.she couldnt stop staring at him but she didnt know dat viren was awake and listening to her.viren smiled keeping his eyes closed and tightened his grip around jeevika's waist.
viren-kya baat h mere jagte hue to kabhi itni pyaari bate nhi ki.
jeevika hit him on his shoulder.
jeevika-shut up viren
viren-are kahti raho na acha lagta h.
jeevika hugged him tighter.
jeevika-never ever go away from me.i will not say dat i will die widout u.but i will surely say dat i would never again live widout u. 
viren tightened d hug
viren-i dont promise u d stars but i will surely promise you dat i will b dere for u always and forever.i love you
jeevika-i love you too.
dey broke d hug after five minutes.viren wiped jeevika's tears
viren-chalo ab bhot rona dhona ho gya.ab mujhe meri morning kiss do.
jeevika-no.jaldi utho college k liye late ho rha h. 
viren-acha.madam thode bahane na  kam banaya karo, aj na sunday h.
jeevika-ha..han to mujhe fir b ready hona h.chodo mujhe. while trying to lose d grip.
viren-plz ek to dedo. While making a puppy face
jeevika gave him a  sweet peck on his cheek
jeevika-happy now?
viren-"um not really"he said while pointing towards his lips
jeevika blushed
jeevika-someones growing naughtier day by day
she was about to go when viren pulled her towards him
viren-not so fast princess
jeevika-viren leave me 
viren-first my kiss
jeevika approached viren's lip and started kissing him.deir kiss was so long and passionate,dey felt heaven while kissing each oder.
dey broke d kiss after a while to catch breaths.jeevika blushed and hid her face in viren's chest
viren-someone's blushing huh
jeevika blushed even more and rushed to take shower,viren also got up and went downstairs.
viren was going in d kitchen when he got a call from d cook dat he was not coming today.
viren-are yaar aj cook to aa nhi rha.ab khana kaun banayega. jeevika to bilkul nhi babayegi coz vo 2din pehle hi discharge hui h and she cant do so much work.lagta h beta viren tujhe hi khana banana padega.
he started thinking what should he make
viren-doctor ne jeevika ko healthy food khane k liye bola tha.i think mujhe usk liye aloo prantha banana hoga
he started making d dough.after a while jeevika came down stairs and saw viren fighting with d flour.
she went to him and started laghing.
jeevika-"ye kya kar rhe ho viren" while laughing
viren-has kyun rhi ho,khana bana rha hu aur kya
jeevika"aise" she said while showing him d mess and removing floor from viren's face
viren-ha...han to hota h, first time h mera
jeevika-to kissi ne kaha h tumhe khana banane ko.tumhe jo khana tha vo cook se kah dete ya mujhse
viren-cook aj chuti pe h aur tum khana nhu banaogi.tum ja kar rest karo
jeevika-"rest tum karo.ab hato mujhe karne do"she said while moving viren aside
viren-jeevika tumhe zyaada exert nhi karna h.hato mujhe karne do
jeevika-plz viren main bed pe baithe baithe bor ho chuki hu.aur agar main khana banaungi to mujhe acha lagega
viren-ok but i will help u
jeevika-hm
viren gave jeevika a back hug and started helping her in making d dough
jeevika-mr.vadhera dont b over smart.mujhe apk intensions samajh a rhe h
viren-"are main to tumhari help kar rha hu.galat to tumhi soch rhi ho"he smirked
jeevika-acha
viren-"yup"he said while giving her a kiss on her cheeks
jeevika smiled and gave him a sweet kiss in return
viren-are mrs vadhera ap to romantic mood mein h
jeevika-"main koi romantic mood mein nhi hu aur main abhi mrs.vadhera b nhi hu"saying dis jeevika applied some flower on viren's face
viren applied some flour on her in return.
viren-acha ji viren vadhera k saath panga
jeevika ran from d kitchen and viren followed her
viren-not so fast miss choudhary
jeevika-acha acha sorry 
dey were playing cat and mouse when jeevika fell on d sofa wid viren on his top
viren-ab kaha jaogi
jeevika-viren hato mujhe bhot kaam h
viren didnt listen to her and kissed her forehead,eyes,nose and he was about to kiss her lips when his phone stared to ring.
viren-are yaar koi romance b nhi karne deta
jeevika giggled 
viren-koi baat nhi ab to cut ho gya h,to hum kaha the
viren again approached jeevikas lips when his phone started ringing again.
jeevika-jao viren
viren irritated-jata hu
he went to pick up d phone and jeevika went to d kitchen


Edited by mgera3024 - 19 March 2013 at 12:08am

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