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Destiny an AsYa FF (part26,page 84)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi everyone this is my first ever FF of AsYa called Destiny, I hope you like it๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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In the middle of nowhere-
 
In the middle of nowhere Zoya was crying with her suitcases next to her
Zoya,upset:Why? why did abbu lie to me? Why did he betray my ammi and leave her? Allah please help me I dont know where to go and appi and jiju are in New York. I know some people will be looking for me but I don't want to go back
 
In Asad's car
Asad,Najma,and Dilshad were in the car coming back from a resturant
Najma: Bhaijaan do you think that I should diet?
Asad: Tamater you can do what you want,but I dont think you will stick to it
Najma: Ammi! dekho bhaijaan is making fun of me!
Dilshad; Asad
Asad: no I am serious Ammi
Just then Dilshad saw Zoya on the sidewalk crying
Dilshad: Asad rukho
Asad stopped the car
Asad: ammi kya hua?
Dilshad: dekho vo lardki is crying
Before Asad could say anything Dilshad got out of the car
Asad: Ammi!
but dilshad didnt stop she went to the girl with Asad and Najma behind them
Dilshad slowly went to Zoya
Dilshad:beta kya hua?
Zoya slowly looked up at Dilshad with red blood shot eyes
Zoya: kuch nahi
Dilshad: beta aup ki Ammi abhu kaha hai?
Zoya started crying
Zoya: I am alone
Dilshad sat next to Zoya
Dilshad: beta do you have a place to go?
Zoya slowly shook her head
Najma then came along with Asad
Najma: ammi kya hua?
Then she saw Zoya and understood
Dilshad: why dont you come with us
Asad: but ammi
Dilshad looked at him and Asad imediently knew that he should be quiet
Zoya: no its ok I dont want to be a burden to you
Dilshad: but beta it is not right for a girl to stay alone at night
Zoya: its ok I will find a hotel
Dilshad: dekho beta the hotel is miles away from here and you have a lot of bags
Asad: ammi its ok if she doesn't want to come she doesn't have to
Dilshad: Asad you know that its wrong to leave a girl alone in the middle of nowhere
Zoya: its ok I will manage
Dilshad looked at Zoya and then sighed
Dilshad: Ok but still..
Zoya: no its ok
Dilshad: Ok
She put her hand on Zoya's. Zoya smiled,the warmth of Dilshad's hands comforted her
Dilshad smiled back
Dilshad: are you sure
Zoya: yes I am
Dilshad: ok allah hafiz
Zoya: allah hafiz
When Dilshad.Asad and Najma slowly left Zoya smiled
Zoya: allah jaane agar humare mulakat fir ho jaygi
Precap: Zoya in the same place and a gunda almost touches her but someones hand grabs the gunda's hand
 
I hope you guys like this,I thought about this last night and if you want me to continue please reply and like. Oh and sorry about my poor hindi I am very poor at it so please excuse the mistakes๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
 
Index:
part 1-above
part 2-page 2
part3-page 4
Part 4-page 5
Part 5-pg 8
Promo page 9
Part 6-page 11
Part 7 -page 13
Part 8-page 15
Part 9-page 17
Part 10-page 18
Part 11-page 21
Part 12-page 24
Part 13-page 27
Part 14-page 30
Part 15-page 33
Part 16-page 37
Part 17-page 43
Part 18-page 47
Part 19-page 50
Part 20-page 54
Part 21-page 58
Part 22-page 63
Part 23-page 68
Part 24-page 73
Part 25- page 78
Part 26- page 84
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love d title...d bprecap is so interesting cant wait to c who grabs d gundas hand...apne asad babu๐Ÿ˜†

congo on ur first os..its so good.keep it going๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

i love d title...d bprecap is so interesting cant wait to c who grabs d gundas hand...apne asad babu๐Ÿ˜†

congo on ur first os..its so good.keep it going๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
it's beautiful..
do cont soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice OS!
Loved the beginning!
Please continue soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
It's nice :) I like it!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: DeadDevil

it's beautiful..

do cont soon.

Thank you!!! I will probably continue either today or tomorrow๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sophie420

Nice OS!

Loved the beginning!
Please continue soon!

Thanks you so much!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisbahx

Beautiful

Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

outstanding os...please continue soon and plz pm me thanks

great work