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beebutterfly

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Don't know what to say to it...it's just too well written not to make the one reading it feel weighted down by the sadness in it. And it's just painfully true...not much else can hurt you as much as feeling worthless and being made to realize that constantly by someone you seek approval from. You can never really forget the harsh words or get used to them, they just stay and gnaw at you...and you described that feeling as it would be lived.
The little support that she used to give even that was missing.

This little bit just stands out, for me it's the line which makes me saddest...as long as that one person is there for you, you can bear it all but when they themselves believe you are wrong, it's shattering..

You managed to move me beyond words with this one which is why you are brilliant and I hope you know this...unmatchable! :)))


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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
You have etched the down the feelings of despair and loss to perfection. The truth you bore through your words was resignedly worth the read. Words often leave an imprinting upon others. People forget to be careful when using them.

Brilliant piece.

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Posted: 17 October 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
this is a beautiful piece of writing yaar...
the disappointment, the feelings u have when ur hopes are gone away...described with perfectionBig smile

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 2:57am | IP Logged
awsm buddy...!!

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Posted: 21 October 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
U wrote so well.

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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 11:44am | IP Logged
It just makes me to connect with it
Superb OS 
Really loved it

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