Weekend Treat: VIRIKA SS:Unsought Love (End Pg 34) - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
Yayyy!!!! Another awesome update!!!!!
Loved the update!!!❤️
Viren and jeevika's growing friendship!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Its was perfect!
The way your portraying their bond!
Her inner feelings!
Awesome!
Do continue soon!
Posted: 11 years ago
Ammmiii!!!! 

Thank you Thank You Thank You So Muchhh!! 🤗

Loved The Updatee!! 😳

And Sorry For Bugging you so Muchh.. But DOnt Worry I won't Stop Thatt 😆

Thankk youuu!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Whoa mate...The writing skills !!!!
  I mean One could easily assume that it's an excerpt from a novel of some award winning author ...minute details so wonderfully inscribed in words...just beautiful :) 

Will be back later when I read it whole...& sorry for the delay :(
Posted: 11 years ago
Another amazing chapter! I love how they are slowly becoming nice friends, or how you are taking ahead their relationship. Brilliant amii! Their conversations are a treat to read. While reading it i was actually imagining kryan playing the roles :) a dreamm!!
Thank you so much for this quick update. Wishing/hoping for a quicker one next time ;)
Love
Sarah
Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing update...
loved every bit of it...
the way you described sunset was beautiful...
parallels between waves n relationships are amazingly written...
their relationship is starting off at a cute way...
awesome...
continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing
loved it
continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Cant believe that I read a weekend treat by you..Its been a long time...
Beautiful writing as always...😊
I am loving this story...
Continue soon..
Posted: 11 years ago
If there is anything worth praising here,that is deffo the way you write.
I mean woah,so nicely expressed,i could actually imagine it in a pictorial way infront of me.
Well done Amiii, read something by you after so long.
I liked the way you kept the talks a bit formal,not spilling the beans in the first few updates,that is exactly what glues the reader till the end.
I am eagerly waiting for you to go further with this story.
 
Posted: 11 years ago
that was awsome and beautifully described!
Continue soon!

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