Weekend Treat: VIRIKA SS:Unsought Love (End Pg 34) - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
WAOOO...

WHAT ABEAUTIFULSTORY...

I JUST READ THE ENTIRE STORY...

It WASFABULOUSLY WRITTEN...

SUCH AN AWESOME DISPLAY and FANTASTIC PRESENTATION  OF HUMAN FEELINGS CALLED DISAPPOINTMENT, DISBELIEVE, LOVE, CARE, GUILT and EXPECTATIONS...


LOVED IT !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amiii ❤️
You have no idea how happy I was to see your PM first thing in the morning!!!
Yes that's exactly what I did sitting in my bed on my iphone checking if you updated
you made my Wednesday the best ❤️ 
The update was seriously sooo awesome!
Like each update gets better than before ❤️
First the way Viren and Manvi give her self-confidence, just adorable!
Then Lamaze classes 😆 God I love this side of Viren!
He's so sensitive yet to caring to everything 
and then him knowing Jeevika was having a craving, just beautiful!
I can definitely see the Starbucks influences in your story... and as a matter of fact I was craving a Mocha Cookie Crumble just two days ago 🤣

The ending was definitely picture perfect though ❤️
The beach, and their conversation was just beautifully written!
God I want to start nagging you more
You should definitely go to Starbucks again today, a treat for you and maybe a treat for your readers

Thank You sooo much!!! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dayem girl,
you just keep getting better at this😳
HOW?Lol,because everytime i think this was your best update but then when i read ur next update,i m like no this was EPIC
lol



VERY WELL WRITTEN
👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is very nice
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awee such a heart touching update...viren should tell he wants to be the father... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
I didn't even get to unres the other part. But what can I say. I really like this Jeevuka with her inner turmoils. Those questions you give her to ponder are not only telling and poignant for her character but for any women that is pregrant. Wil I make a good mother? Is there some sort of checklist for this so I can't screw this up.

Loved her craving, I did just think it would be a delivery boy but the countdown of mins was nice. Viren truly is enduring in every sense if the word. There no not a person like him but he is still well written that it doesn't seen fake. Why an I waiting for the other shoe to drop now that everything is out in the open?
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome
viren is always there for jeevs n he doesn't expect anything in return
finally jeevs let her past out 
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Posted: 10 years ago
absolutely beautiful too good
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update..loved it so much
Very well written
Loved hw viren was there with jeevika during classes
N their beach convo was just amazing
Jeevika's fears abt becoming a good mother n her past.. Beautifully described
Can't wait to read the next part
Thanx for pm..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
As tears roll down my eyes... This was amazing.