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Weekend Treat: VIRIKA SS:Unsought Love (End Pg 34) (Page 17)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Amazing updates superb part is that viren proposed jeevi
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 2:37am | IP Logged
In guessing if Maanvi is related to her past, they either went to the same school but where not friends but one can hear rumours. Or she's linked to her ex.

Viren knowing? Well no sure if he knows yet, guess is from the ultrasound image in her bedroom. But Ami great update and fab story so far. It's slowly unravelling, with Viren and Jeevika's relationship, to her personal feeling towards him but also the fears of being a parent. And not just that a single parent, all with all her parental issues that adds weight to.

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
what an update!!
truly amazing!!
loved it top the core
hate u for stopping at such a moment...how can you do this to your readers?
better update the next part very soon
loving the new twist about jeevika and manvi..

continue soon

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:48am | IP Logged
just read the entire thing right now and seriously i am out of words!!!
Such a different concept described so simply yet beautifully!
You have totally carved a picture of the two in my mind and I cannot get enough of this!
And the worst is the cliffhanger you have left us on!!!
Man I feel like spamming you to continue your stories right now!
Just amazing! Clap
Please PM me if possible! I am dying to read more of this
                                        


Edited by Kays94 - 08 April 2013 at 3:49am

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 7:01am | IP Logged
lovely part!! I had a feeeling Viren would already know the truth and be the one to take their relationship forward. Can manvi be working in the same hospital as jeevika's gynecologist? Since virat mention her crazy work hours! 

i love the detail you put into the work..i can clearly picture every little scene in my head! 

can't wait for the next part! hopefully a really long one! and thank you for the PM! :) 


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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Loving the storyline...its been ages since i have been eagerly following any OS...pls PM me when u update next

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Plz plzcontinue soon
i really dont want this to be a weekend treat
i qant help im living this..
Plz pm me next time..
I want u to uodate atleast two times in a week

Edited by mehwish123 - 08 April 2013 at 7:35am

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 9:37am | IP Logged
SUPERB UPDATE!!
 
OMG VIREN KNEW SHE WAS  PREGNANT!!!
And he still wants her! That is true love!
 
I love how you show their emotions!
 
You are an amazing writer!
 
UPDATE SOON!

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