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hello frndz,thx for a very huge response on my very first ff intezar.it means a lot to a beginer like me.i want to share it that each and every day i wrote this ff i felt the old pkyek days are back!!i just started to write ff for that feeling and if u felt it along with me then my all effort has got it's fruit.as u all know that my first abhaiya ff intezar was going to end soon so i thought to write another one.for just few days two stories are bugging in my mind.which i wanted to share with all of u!so i'm posting one of these two.i don't know this story has something apeealing or not.i'm posting just prolouge.if u think the storyline is good and appealing then pls give ur responses and replys.if u want then i'll cont the story after finishing of my first ff 'intezar(the awating)'so get ready for this new dark love story.
(an abhiya ff)
the workers were busy in digging at the old ruin situated at the dense forrest of dehradun!the old historical ruin was just discovered few days ago and still the ruin was not recovered totally.the leader of the group of archiological sarvey,mr akhilesh mehta was confident that that the ruin was non other than the old lost palace of pandher state.the mystorious state of pandher,situated at the late 18th century in north india was a very prospourous and also mysterious state on it's own way.at last the all mystories were about to come out of the ground.mr mehta was at his tent discussing about their future plan.they were pointing some imp place at the map of the whole ruin area.the workers were busy and from the dark shade of dence forrest two restless eyes were watching over them."no!!!"the stalker growled in low voice,"they are violating her belongings.i c'nt let it happen!but what can i do?i c'nt come into their notice like this!!"his voice became sad.suddenly there was a huge sound of rockfalling at a portion of ruin.the workers rushed inside the tent."mehta sir..."one worker said."yes nandu what happened."mr mehta asked"mehta sir,the jammed door is opened at last.pls come!!"nandu said."ok i'm comin!!"he promped.
the hall was really beautiful.decorated with old rare furnitures and aqurnts.beautiful sculptures at the wall.the oil paintings were hanging from wall.mr mehta was walking along the wall and looking everywhere.suddenly his feet stopped near an oil painting.he was a lil bit confused.all paintings were toaly covered with dust and faded.but this one was so clear!like someone took care of it everyday.the name containing at the lower frame caught her eyes first.
"piyashree rajnandini jaiswal singh
new crown princess of pandher and crown prince abhayendra pratap singh's wife
so he was r8!this was the pandher's residence.the lost palace which cldn't be found for so many years.akhilesh felt satisfied.then his eyes lifted to c the face of the girl at the oilpaint.he was suddenly dumbstuck.how on the earth cld it be possible?he cldn't believe his eyes!!he was so stunned that he didn't noticed that stalker in earlier was watching from the dark with his redgefull eyes.he scratched on the coloumn he was holdinng to controle his temper leaving a deep nail print on the cements!!!
2.#new abhiya ff:sajni(my beloved)#:book 2(ongoing)link:
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