Vignettes- 18. Hai re Nandkishore! Thread 1 - Page 87

Loved it dear..!!😊

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Hi Aparna... Thank you for the extra update this week. Been missing you so much 😭😭

So... the update was nice. I will be lying if i say the pace feels ok. Actually its slow. Don't MU me, the way you are telling the story is GREAT, but i feel the speed isn't enough. Even though the story is about NK-Pooja, only today that they got some quality time together. And the real love story seems to be so far away. I mean, even Pooja isn't aware of NK's feelings yet...

But the concept is good. Standing by the one you love through good and bad times both...

Waiting eagerly for the Saturday update

Love Ya!

Loved the SS

to be frank i was so excited for NK that i didnt miss arshi in this chapter...

poor pooja's parents have no idea abt NK's plans...waiting to see how will he express his feelings to  pooja nd her family...

I was particularly in love with the description of Akaash's response at the point when they leave the hospital to Delhi... and now coming to the note... The third point is something that anyone who writes from the heart does... and when it is written that way, it shows in the story...

 

Apsy girl, as writers we can't please every one of them, for everyone have their own imagination and priorities in what they want... The best we can do is trying to please ourselves first... for most of the times, I find it the most difficult thing to do... but once we do that, everything else will fall in place... including your readers!

 

Cheers girl for another wonderful update!