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What if you were the writer of the show?
C'mon guys put the best of ideas in your mind.
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This is what I was fantasizing.

The Beginning

The story begins in a dark room where a guy is sitting and crying. It is Rohan Mishra, a 27 year old guy who is blind and had lost all his eyesight in an accident. Previously a painter, who due to his misfortune had to retire.

From the door enters  a lady with a tray(Preeti Mishra, Rohan's bhabhi). She goes to him and tries to console him that everything will be fine.He asks her to take him to "her". She takes him to a painting of a girl which he starts carsing. He then starts telling his story and all are taken back to the past.

Back to The Past

The story is now rewinded to 5 years before the original plot. Rohan is a handsom fine arts student and one of the best in his college. The Teacher's favourite and also the dream guy for many of the girls in the premises. His best friend is Anushka, a pretty drama student.She aspires at becoming one of the top heroines in bollywood. She has feelings for Rohan but doesn't let it out.

On a function in his college Rohan is made the stage designer for a play. Here is where he meets Muskaan. Muskaan is a 20 year old young interior designing student. A very beautiful lady with wooed by many. She is daughter to a wealthy businessman Avi Duggal. Although being from a wealthy family, she is a very laid back and down to earth person. Rhan does not make a very good first impression on Muskaan, as at their first meeting he is seen practising with Anu for her p;ay and she misinterprets him to be a goon who is harassing Anu. She slaps him but after knowing the truth apologizes to him. Soon the two become really good friends. After becoming friends their friendship grows day by day and Rohan soon ralizes he has fallen in love with Muskaan and he soon proposes to her. He is out of the world when Muskaan says that she too loves him. But a problem erupts when Muskaan's mother Mrs. Tara Duggal comes to know about Muskaan dating Rohan. Tara wants Muskaan to marry anirudh, Muskaan's best friend and the son of Mr. Sharma, Avi's business partner.  On the other hand Anu becomes jealous of Rohan and Muskaan and starts bringing misunderstandings between the two, although this all goes in vain. Soon it is revealed that Anirudh also loves Muskaan and as Muskaan does not want to break his heart she agrees to marry him. But Anirudh understanding that Muskaan loves Rohan denies to marry her and convinces Tara to let Muskaan marry the man of her choice. Tara finally agrees to marry Rohan and Muskaan.

All is well in the two's life but as happiness doesn't stay always it was same for the two. After the news of marriage comes to Anu, she's all distraught and she blames Muskaan for stealing Rohan from her. She swears to make Muskaan's life hell and goes so far to hire a man to kill her. She gets the breaks of Muskaan's car fail. But she gets all hyper when she comes to know that Rohan is also with Muskaan. She tries to contact and tell Rohan all about it but till she is able to warn him the two already meet with an accident.

The two are taken to the hospital and are operated. The Doc announces both to be in really critical condition. Tara starts accusing Rohan for all while Preeti retorts . The police come and tell all that the breaks were purposely made to fail by someone.

The doc comes out tells both the families that although the operation was successful the two were still not out of danger.

Preeti is in Rohan's room. She's crying near him when she suddenly see his eyes opening slowly. She calls in the doctor who checks Rohan upand breaks the good news and tells that he is out of danger now. However suddenly Rohan starts complaining of headache and that he cannot see things properly. The Doc tells that it might be the effect of his head injury which might have caused him to lose his eyesight. Rohan starts remembering that Muskaan too was their in the car and asks about her from Preeti. He tells that it was Anu after all this as she had informed him on phone not to go with Muskaan as the breaks in her car would fail. The police gets hold of Anu who reveals that it is true that she did it all. She is taken away. 

Rohan demands to take him to her. Preeti is numb. Rohan asks her why isn't she taking him to Muskaan. She still stays mum. The doc tells him that Muskaan is no more and that she died this morning. Rohan is broken and leaves the room. Suddenly everything is blank before his eyes and he is unable to see anything. He has lost his complete eyesight.

Continuation-

The Shocking Revelation

Rohan complains to his  bhabhi that he couldn't even say a goodbye to her. He says that although she had promised not to leave  him ever, she left. He asks his bhabhi "Why she left?" He also complains that Tara even didn't let him be with Muskaan while departing her. Her bhabhi goes to him and tries to console him. But he doesn't want to listen to her.

The next day Rohan is out with his Bhai going to meet the Doc. On their way back Rajiv gets a phone call from Preeti who asks her to bring some stuff from the shop. Rohan says that he would wait for him in the car while Rajiv leaves. Rohan is waiting in the car when hears a very familiar voice. He leaves the car to find out the person speaking but is caught in the traffic and a car almost hits him. He is although saved by a lady. The lady's voice is familiar although her face is not revealed. The lady leaves while Rajiv comes there. Rohan is not able to forget the voice and remains disturbed.

After some days Rohan has another appointment with the Doc when the Doc tells him that his eyesight can still be revived if he gets an operation done. Rohan denies from getting the operation done as he doesn't want to see a world where there is no Muskaan.

After leaving the hosp Rohan asks Rajiv to leave him somewhere. He then stands before an orphanage. He remembers the place as he used to go there with Muskaan. Muskaan was fond of children so she often visited there. She also took Rohan there one or two times.

Rohan meets the caretaker. He asks her if she is new. She replies with a yes and tells she joined six months ago. Rohan is talking to her about the children when he suddenly hears the same familiar voice. He goes after her but isn't able to catch her. The caretaker comes after him and he asks her who it was. The caretaker replies that it was Muskaan Duggal. Rohan is shocked.

The Search

Rohan is happy to hear that Muskaan is alive but is also perplexed why Muskaan didn't come to him. He decides to search for her at any cost. He breaks this news in his family and says that now he wants to get the operation done to get back his eyesight.

Rohan gets his operation done and finally his eyesight is restored.

He now starts his quest for Muskaan. He goes to her previous house tries to track her phone no. and does all that he can but in vain.

After a lot of efforts he is able to find one of Muskan's relatives. But the person says he dosnt know much about the whereabouts of the Duggal family but he knows that they shifted to Darjeeling a few years back and that they used to go to Mumbai sometimes and had recently come but had left the day before.

Rohan decides to travel to Darjeeling(throughout his journey there are many flashbacks of RM scenes). When he reaches there he starts looking for Muskaan. They almost miss each other at several places.

Finally Rohan gets the address of the Duggal household. When he reaches there it is Muskaan who opens the door while leaving  Rohan in shock.

Rest of it-

Rohan's resolution

Rohan comes down to his knees when he sees Muskaan. His eyes are all filled with tears. Muskaan is unable to understand the matter. Tara comes there then who is in a shock to see Rohan there. She sends Muskaan off while scolds Rohan why he has come there. Rohan replies thathe went there to meet Muskaan and asks her why she lied that Muskaan was dead. She says that whatever she did was for Muskaan to which Rohan protests by saying that Muskaan loves him. Tara laughs while Rohan is perplexed. Tara tells him that Muskaan doesn't remember him, infact she remembers nothing about her past  as she suffered from anmesia after the accident. She accuses him to be responsible for such a state of Muskaan. She tells him that if he hadn't come to her lie neither would have Anu and nor there would have been any accident. She scolds saying that it was Rohan because of whom Muskaan lost her smile, because of him she lost the pages of her whole life, and because him she couldn't recognize her own mother. She breaks down while Rohan is feeling guilty. Tara warns Rohan not to come back in her daughter's life and if he dare come back she won't hold back and may even kill him. Rohan leaves.

Next he is seen sitting near a lake. He remembers Tara's words. He thinks to himself if he is really responsible for this. He starts feeling guilty. He gets flashback of Muskaan promising him she won't leave him ever and then Tara's words.

He is not able to understand what to do. He closes his eyes and starts thinking about Muskaan. He decides on staying away from her for her own benefits although he knows he won't be able to do so. He decides go back but before he wants to meet Muskaan one last time. At night he breaks into the Duggal bungalow and sneeks into Muskaan's room who is sleeping at that time. He goes to her and sits besides her while thinking if he'll really be able to go away from her. He is thinking about this when suddenly a voice says in his mind not to run away. He now remembers it was the main proverb of Muskaan of Muskaan who used to say this very often. This makes him realize that he was running away right now which Muskaan would never had. He decides to stay so that he is able to remind Muskaan everything and also to make her fall for him once again.

Regain

Rohan is all determined to get his Muskaan back.

The next day Tara is not at home and so Rohan decides to talk to Muskaan. He again stealthily enters the house, somehow again fooling the watchman. He goes to Muskaan's room. Muskaan is shocked to see him but she recognizes him as the guy from the other day. She asks him how he entered and is almost about to shout when Rohan corners her and silences her by putting his hand on her mouth. He tries to explain that he s Rohan and that she knew him before. He tries to make her remember the things about their past but she says that she doesn't remember anything. Rohan asks her to try hard. Muskaan's head starts aching a lot. She pleads him to stop but he keeps on reminding her. In the nick of time Tara returns. Hearing the commotion she goes to Muskaan's room. She is shocked to find Rohan there. She immidiately calls the guards who take Rohan away while Tara tries to calm Muskaan. Muskaan is unable to take so much pressure and she faints.

Tara tries to bring her back to senses but in vain. She calls the Doc who tells her that Muskaan got an attack when Rohan tried to make her remember things as she started too much focussing on the matter.

Tara is now enraged like anything. She goes to Rohan and starts warning him of his deeds.He tries to explain but Tara doesn't listen. Tara is scolding him for ruining Muskaan's life. He tells her that he was just trying to remind of her past. Tara is not ready  to listen but then she gets a phone call from the Doc who tells her maybe Rohan can actually bring back Muskaan's memory. She is not able to trust but Avi asks her to give him chance. She finally agrees.

Rohan goes back to Muskaan's room and tries to talk to her but she is not able to remember anything.

He then gets an idea. He goes to Tara and asks for something.

Next scene again in Muskaan's room. Rohan comes there holding a guitar in his hand and starts to play it. Muskaan recognizes the tune. He starts singing Honge Juda Na Hum. Muskaan's head starts aching and she starts gets some blurred flasbacks. She finally recognizes the tune as the one composed by her for Rohan and finally utters Rohan's name before getting unconcious again. Rohan gets worried and calls for the Doc. The Doc checks her up and says she's fine; only that due to stress she fainted. Rohan tells him that she called his name before fainting. The doc says it is good sign as it means her memory  is back. All are extremely happy to hear the news. Tara finally apologises to Rohan for her previous behavior and she decides to marry Muskaan and Rohan finally.

The next day Muskaan wakes up and she finally recognizes Rohan. Rohan once again proposes Muskaan for marriage and she says yes.

Finally the two get married and that's the end to the story with Rohan and Muskaan living together happily ever after.

The END



Edited by Remsi - 03 March 2013 at 5:36am

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Common guys...at least one reply

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Well I m pretty good
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Hey, really nice. Very good story :D But Muskaan dies? :O :O And please continue the other half :)

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
great job, please continue this. This would have been a great plot for the show.

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g8 man...cont sooon :))

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Thnq for liking guys...I'll soon update the rest but I would like if u give ur ideas as well

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Added the next two parts

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