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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #2 Chapter 13 in thread 3 (Page 4)

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:13am | IP Logged
I'm one of those late bloomers urf readers, who is discovering some brilliant writers quite late. But as they say better late than never. 

Hey! 

Read Valley of Flowers this morning and fell in love with it. Really enjoy your style of writing. There is suspense, drama, romance, intense passion and the characters whom we love and miss badly. 

Arnav's mum played him badly and the poor guy is going to be shattered when he comes to know the truth. But I have no doubt that Khushi will be his pillar of support then. LOve the way you develop the secondary story whilst dealing with the primary. I can see Shaym the villain has made a grand entry in this chapter. 

Will look forward to VoF eagerly henceforth :)

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread! Will read & post comments in a bit. 


EDIT:

Hai Devi Maya!!!

Just when I was starting to think Shaym might be normal in this one, you pulled the rug from under my feet!

Now its official, I hate everyone in this sttory except Khushi.

It kinda cracked me up the amount of times Arnav said F**K!

Great update as usual, your making it very hard to wait until Wednesdays.




Edited by Nidsubh007 - 27 February 2013 at 8:45am

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
hello
we've met before during 'Desert Rose'. i was hooked to that story so much so that when i got a PM that u had started another FF, i kept re-reading desert rose so that i dont get hooked on ur story
but i could only wait till 7 chapters and now what i feared has come true. IM HOOKED.
brilliant story and how could we forget the shyam angle. the way u have woven the past and the present together is amazing. its good that NK doesnt live in the same house else he would have been burnt by the smoldering heat between arshi
please update soon and thanks for the PM

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
hey lady...what a lovely update. You have some way of writing a simple scene so sensual ...each arnav khushi scene sets the whole update on fire...

Shyam is a love sick puppy every time...jerk...to top it he rejected khushi in this series...made me laugh...irony of life.

what is the mystery of arnav's parents ...other than being divorced...

thanks for the update...well there was something else I wanted to write but my little one spoke in between...I've forgotten...happens always...:-)

sri.

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:51am | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:51am | IP Logged
Oh!! So now Shyam is also in the list...
After Arnav & NK,,Shyam also like khushi...her life is totally gonna be a mess now if Shyam ever tries his advances towards her...
Congrats on new thread...!

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 4:08am | IP Logged
New thread!! Godd another enemy in Khushi's list...how much she take...and Anjali seems like she is dejected by her mother...

Edited by shijinareneesh - 27 February 2013 at 9:18am

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Oh no...poor Khushi...was the troubles in past not enough...was Arnavs mother, lavanya not enough that even Shyam is behind her...and to top it all...ARNAV N HIS STUPID STUPID EGO..N NOT BELIEVING KHUSHI...Is there no one to help KHUSHI from LEECH SHYAM n MU'S clearing out...
IT'S SO DIFFICULT TO SEE KHUSHI IN SO MUCH PAIN...

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