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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #2 Chapter 13 in thread 3 (Page 3)

rdforfun Senior Member
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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 2:04am | IP Logged
lovely update
so the ff is filled with all negative characters
wen our hero is going to realise things
i didn't wonder abt shyam
poor soul Khushi

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged
 And btw, Anjali seems to be sane here in this ff. 

Shyam Manohar Jha...LOL,Keep pinning. I am glad that he was unable to see Khushi at that time, I am glad that his greed didn't allow him to think of marrying in poor Gupta house.

Arnav Khushi passion, one word defines it HOT.


Edited by lovelyangel - 27 February 2013 at 2:51am

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Superb update.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
I love how Arnav and Khushi still have the same passion and concern for each other as five years ago.
OMG now Shyam is after Khushi as well.AngryAngryAngry
Why can't the poor girl get a break?CryCryCry
She has Mami, Arnav, NK, Lavanya, Ria and now Shyam making her life difficult.AngryAngryAngry
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.Big smile


Edited by zafi - 27 February 2013 at 3:45am

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Wow.

So Shyam likes Khushi in his creepy way and Khushi's marrriage is fixed with
NK.But Khushi has been in love with Arnav since forever...It gets more complicated
and more interesting.

The Arnav and Khushi part at the end was intense.

Thoroughly enjoyed the update :D

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 2:50am | IP Logged
awesome udpate kavi, the way you narrate is what makes each chapter so beautiful
romance, passion, intensity and pain all put together in one was Chapter 7

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Congrats on new thread.
loved the update.

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Was waiting for update...nice update.

Shayamu the main -ve character!!!' Waiting for next chapter..Smile

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 3:11am | IP Logged

Congrats on new thread!Beautiful Update.Embarrassed

I loved the Mandir scene.And the Sindoor part was lovely,,so true!these two are Made for each other.I also loved the flashback.Arnav reaching the mandir at right time to save Khushi from those beasts!

I loved Nani's dialogue regarding how its high time someone did something for Khushi.And Arnav's concern for her peeks out of hs t shield every nw and then.

And the bedroom scene was HOTBlushing

:O,Shyam's twist was shocking!He Lusts after her..:/

Cant wait for Next Update!

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