MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15 - Page 7

Originally posted by: lovesia

nice update

is geet is suffering from some diseases ????????

nd past 

maan without any thought insulted geet with a big humiliation

nd leena

i hate her 

if she was not perfect she tried to insult geet

nd in such a bad manner

poor geet where she is gone

nd poem was awesome

love each line

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

simply a wonderful story..poor geet..pls make is as SS..hope nothing wrong with geet.😕..pls cont soon..

Originally posted by: spvd

congrats dear...

part 1
nice start...
oh ho its gonna be a painful story...
poor Geet...
and Maan that was so rude of him...
he should pay for it and think thats what hes doing now...
1st Anni?
what wrong with Geet or is it Maan?
cont soon dear...

PS - well if its a happy waala one then make it as an SS or FF but if its a sad one OS would be fine...i cant take sad ones that easily...u know that too...

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

That was an amazing update..
geet has a disease.. kya hua geet ko?
ye maan bhi na.. uske wajah se meri geet ki career barbaad ho gayi na..
but i loved her confidence!!

Originally posted by: snehadingoe

sobia... frstly congo... u are back vd a bang.. i surely need an ss... if possible ff... loved each n every bit of ths part... yaar the poems were vry b'fully written... frst part se hi irthni curiosity create kardi... kounsa disease..?? geet kaha gayi... ? ab maan kya karega..? kaise milenge... nd hw vl ds mst romantic couple fall in luv... plz yaar iss baar jaldi j😛aldi update karde... nd min 15 parts likh... plz ... 

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Mind blowinggg start Sobi...
Very well written update...
The poem is really mesmerisinggg...
Aghhh..i am feeling like banging Maan's head somewhere...
Duffer..hamesha apni feelings chupaane ke chakkar me mwri Geet ko hurt karta hai..
& Leena Thaapar..kamini..uske toh mai tukde tukde kar ke kutto ko khila doon..
But loved the way Geet replied tht bloody b****..
Maan has realized his mistake..
Lekin Geet ne Maan ko aasani se maaf nahi karna chahiye..

& Sobi it's my humble request plzzz make it a ff..
I want to experience all the thick & thin moments of Maaneet's journey..plzzz..

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

ha ha Geet ne Thaapar ko thappar mara...very good Geet...so she is not damsel in distress type of girl...she can give slap to a person who mess with her...

after so much humiliation geet is gone...Maan is repenting after knowing truth...lekin AB PACHTAAYE HOT KYA JAB CHIDIYA CHUG GAYI KHET...

anyway jab Maan Geet se ulta-seedha behave karega then only he will repent and keep on remembering her in his guilt...and this will become foundation for their love...

what is Geet's illness...why she is so weak...

see what ever u make this story FF, SS, OS but please it should be happy ending...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: angelic_cute

please continue with SS

its was awesome 

loved it

maan did a wrong thing while not listen to geet 

hoping he will do something which can bring geet to the college 

thanks for pm 

Originally posted by: Ru_21

Congo for new story
awesome start...loved it
waiting for next..continue soon
thank u for pm

Originally posted by: moni6262

good going geet..

msk deserves this for being an oversmart idiot🤔

ohh..so its an ss..love uuu sobiii🤗

waiting for update