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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
absoltely heartwrenching man y ou made me cry ...glad to see kushi showing some of her pain...continue soon...

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Khushi finally talked a little about her problem. I felt she was too closed off.

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
i loved the interlude the glimpse of who and what they were and meant. the notes couldnt have explained it any better. and the update with payal and khushi. sigh. i have no words. you have this uncanny ability to bring out the most dormant emotions with this story. as for the peace within chaos. oh if i could only say.

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
made me wish why i don't have a sister 

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Khushi is allowing them enter her world even though she feels guilty if ruining their world with her decision.. I like the flow of story.. But still I wish to take away everyone's pain even Garima's.

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
finally Payal can tell Khushi what she had bottled up inside

cant wait to read more


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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
Wow an amazing and beautiful update, it was so emotional and heart breaking, honestly I actually cried for khushi and Payal. I'm glad Payal has told khushi everything about her past and hopefully she can get some sort of closure now. Poor khushi just needed her sister and a shoulder to cry on, i don't know what caused khushi to leave but she was brave to cope for 7 years alone. Awww the kitchen scene was funny and beautiful, the whole family laughing at khushi. Continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
Hey!
 
Came across this FF and have read all the parts till date.
 
Wow! This is absolutely amazing. The way you have written this ... the concept ... the progression of the story along with characters ... pretty much everything here is fabulous! Big smileBig smileBig smile
 
Payal ... I feel for her. She lost Dev. Her love. That's hard. Only she knows what she went through ... I'm glad that she had a strong support system ... her parents, Lavanya and Arnav. Bless.
 
Khushi. She went through hell ... and that too alone. Ouch
 
Arnav. He too went through hell. I mean Khushi left him on their wedding day ... if I'm correct. That must've really hit him real bad. CryCry
 
Anjali ... to be honest the qualities she posesses I do not like. She really didn't have to rub salt on Arnav's wounds in regards with Khushi in any case ... and ESPECIALLY when he is really down!
What kind of a person does that make her ... AngryAngryAngry
 
I look forward to the next part!!!

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