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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 6:50am | IP Logged

Wow Khushi was the runaway bride, am intrigued to learn more... she is well educated and her parents seem to be supportive of her... Arnav is still a mystery, was it something he did that made her leave him on their wedding day.. Suman knows, Lavanya knows, so it cannot be some harsh secret and they are all not happy that upon learning Khushi has returned.. so far Arnav seems to have all the sympathy but there has to be more this than meets the eye right ? Love that you update frequently



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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Gandhi had once said, "The volunteer has the potential to be the change they wish to see in the world and with this potential comes a responsibility."

Khushi is very impressive, especially with her awareness and responsibility towards the world around her.  Her passion to make a difference not only in other parts of the world but also her own country;  truly very commendable. And yet it always amazes me that three-forth of the world consist of water and yet we can't get water to the people in need...

Though leaving someone at the altar for a greater cause, can not always be forgotten or forgiven! It's too early pass a judgement on any character, let's see how the story unfolds!

Ps. It took me a while to figure out that most of the time your update titles have nothing to do with the content of the update, and I have always wondered why is that...



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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Thank you Kalyaani for pointing me to this story! This is intriguing to say the least.

Stories with shared histories are a favorite with me and this one seems to be right up there. I am already beginning to like the protagonists...all of them...the angry sister who (i think) still cares, the mother who understands just the way mothers do, and the two in the midst of all this who are entangled in a complex web

Waiting for the story to unfold!

PS: Small suggestion. Could you please include the link of the next chapter at the end of each chapter when you update - since you are just starting, it will be easy and it is hugely helpful for readers who start reading :)?

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
The past and present is intriguing.
Too many questions to be answered.But that makes me want to read more.
Lovely chapter!

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera30

PS: Small suggestion. Could you please include the link of the next chapter at the end of each chapter when you update - since you are just starting, it will be easy and it is hugely helpful for readers who start reading :)?


True - pretty neat idea. Updated last two chapters. Though the other FF might take a while :-)


Edited by RockBarbie - 28 February 2013 at 10:07am

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RockBarbie

Originally posted by meera30

PS: Small suggestion. Could you please include the link of the next chapter at the end of each chapter when you update - since you are just starting, it will be easy and it is hugely helpful for readers who start reading :)?


True - pretty neat idea. Updated last two chapters. Though the other FF might take a while :-)

You rock! Wait...pun totally intended :D

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 10:32am | IP Logged
^^ Thanks Meera... :-)
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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Such a intriguing, powerful and captivating start. The concept itself is very interesting, and hooks you to find out what must have happened in the past for them to separate and then, now cross roads again...

Deserting your groom at the mandap is obviously something that no one wants...and I get Arnav for holding that against her...but the question really lies in WHY she left him? Cant wait to find that out because Im sure youve got something up your sleeves...

I also really enjoyed the conversation between Khushi and her parents...it was soothing in a way and then, Suman mentioning that Khushi may have also come back for peace...

Intriguing for sure!

On the other hand, we have Payal who doesnt seem too happy with Khushis return, but she is also the 1st one to inform Arnav that Khushi is back...wonder what he is going to do and how they will meet...

Will be bookmarking this :) Keep it up!!




Edited by nyxx - 28 February 2013 at 4:10pm

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