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Summary:

The familial bond that ties them all loosens and lingers in vacuum. They hang by the strands of bloodlines while the strands of affection and trust lay broken. Arnav and Khushi met and parted. Years later their paths cross again but only this time, they realize they are nothing but mere trainspotters.

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Index:

01. Chapter 01 - Like a Rolling Stone -  Page 01
02. Chapter 02 - Only You - Page 03
03. Chapter 03 - Heartbreak Hotel - Page 05
04. Chapter 04 - Peggy Sue - Page 08
05. Chapter 05 - Three coins in the fountain - Page 10
06. Chapter 06 - Don't be cruel - Page 13
07. Chapter 07 - Mona Lisa - Page 16
08. Chapter 08 - Contraband of Relationships - Page 20
09. Chapter 09 - Kaleidoscope of memories - Page 26
10. Chapter 10 - Paradigm of Waiting - Page 33
11. Chapter 11 - Men with Masks - Page 40
12. Chapter 12 - Demons in Closet - Page 46
13. Chapter 13 - Sheep in wolf's clothing - Page 54
14. Chapter 14 - Bad traffic and warm hands - Page 62
15. Chapter 15 - Weight of reality - Page 71
16. Interlude[I] - Arnav and Khushi - Page 82
17. Chapter 16 - Mayhem in our hearts - Page 89
18. Chapter 17 - Evidence of things not seen - Page 98
19. Chapter 18 - Little bit of Frost and lone spark - Page 105
20. Chapter 19 - Moisturizers and death of a dream - Page 114
21. Interlude [II] - Meet the parents - Page 123
22. Chapter 20 - Blazing hearts and calming arms - Page 130
23. Chapter 21 - Old friend and dark truth - Page 141

Thanks H for this awesome art!




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Chapter 1: Like a rolling stone

"Chote!"  Her voice stopped him at the threshold. He closed his eyes in a feeble effort to calm down his grated nerves and stood there without moving a muscle. He was already late to a meeting but he wasn't in a mood to face the disembowelment of his sister's emotions all over patio.

"Here, eat this," she said walking up to him. Her bangles made enough noise to let him know that she was standing only two feet behind him. But he couldn't bring himself to turn around and look at her in the eye.

"What is it, di?" He asked mechanically. The fight the siblings had had the previous night had left a bitter taste in his mouth and he was still pissed at her. He didn't want the residual anger roar back to rage and have yet another row early in the morning.

"I had gone to temple and-"

"I have told you many times that I don't believe in God or such things. Don't force me into something that I have no regard for," he said forcefully and stepped out.

"But it's your birthday today," she said with quivering voice.

He closed his eyes again and took a deep breath. He finally turned around and glared at his sister. "Anjali, I haven't celebrated my birthday in last two decades and you know it very well. If asking me to do things I don't wish to be bothered with is your way of initiating a conversation after last night, then you are way past wrong," he snarled at her.

Without waiting for a response, he turned and slid to his car. Anjali stood at the patio in muted agony of hurt and disappointment as her brother continued to ignore her. The frequency of the arguments between them was getting smaller and smaller and now a day didn't get past them without caustic words being exchanged between the two.

She refused to believe that her husband was the root cause of it all. Arnav called her a doormat and a pushover in heat of argument. She had stood up straight, slapped her younger brother and defended her husband's virtuosity with all her strength and smartness. In the end, he had only smirked at her in mockery.

She wiped stray tears from her cheek and walked back inside Raizada mansion.

*****

"Thanks Payal," fifty four year old Pankaj Gupta took the hot tea cup gratefully from his older daughter. Payal smiled bemused at her father's morning ritual of drinking tea, eating namkeen bashfully escaping his wife's ever scrutinizing eyes and reading newspaper cover to cover. When she walked back to kitchen, she could hear her mother grumbling about her husband namkeen smuggling habits and a daughter who pampers her father.

"Relax ma," she said hugging her mother from back. She rested her chin on her mother's shoulder and smelled the sugary aroma of vermicelli kheer waffling from the open container. "What's the occasion?" She asked stealing a ghee-fried cashew nut.

Garima Gupta sighed deeply. "It's Khushi's birthday today," she said softly. Payal stiffened and let her mother go. Garima turned around at the loss of contact. "It's been seven years..." Tears pooled in her eyes and she snatched a kitchen tissue and dabbed her eyes.

"She made that decision mom and didn't care for what anyone thought of her or us for that matter." Payal's voice was hard. "I am sick and tired of this," she said with venom.

"Payal..." Garima cried out.

"Khushi decided to leave us ma and apart from the occasional emails and phone calls, she hasn't bothered to come here and find out how we are coping after the mess she left for us to clean," Payal bit out.

"She didn't have a choice Payal..." Garima tried to rationalize.

"We all have a choice ma. She just chose not to include us in hers." Payal said turning around. "We have never been her priority ma."

"Khushi isn't like the rest of us Payal," Garima said softly. "She is more attracted to abstraction of humanity than the people who represent it."  The mother's voice was filled with sadness and a melancholy of several years.

Payal walked out of the kitchen wordlessly.


Next chapter: Chapter 2, Only You



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I am now firmly committed to be a part of this story and may I bring others along?

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Wow!! Very impactful part 1. I am sure this story is going to be as rocking as 'lonely under the sheets'!! All the very best!

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Posted: 26 February 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Mark!

If Kushi had gatherd no moss over the last seven years, I wonder what has become of Arnav in that same period? Has he been standing still or rolled off in a manner characteristic of him.

Let the writing happen. It goes without saying that relaxed writing or not, your words are just as always captivating.
-H


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I read your lonely under the sheets and absolutely loved it. I know this going equally good. Awaiting eagerly for your update

Tx..Rakhee

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Just read chapter one. Seems very interesting. Anything coming from you has to be good. Waiting for more.

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lovely story ...would love to know more about khuhsi please do pm me

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