AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08) - Page 6

Originally posted by: niyoti

Hey! 😃

I absolutely loved it from start to finish. I think this is my favourite so far on this site. I'm surprised that this doesn't have as many reviews as it deserves. 

All the while when i was reading this little fic, i couldn't help but think, ok i'm going to quote such and such a part, since it's my favourite and now when i've come to the end of the 2nd chap, I find that I cannot decide. I absolutely loved every bit of it.  Especially all of Zoyas insights into Asads character. Her understanding of his need to be the best. How his losses shaped him to be who he is now. Your depiction of him being emotionally complex is spot on!  

You fleshed out the characters so well. Sometimes the written word has a distinct advantage over something visual and this is a lovely example. We don't get to see what is going on inside a characters head when it's visually portrayed, apart form those little monologues they have for the audience sake and that is where a writer has an advantage. You've done a terrific job!!😊

Keep writing and drop me a line for any future work. G'luck with uni.

Niti

PS: 2 days back (I think) Laila2009 posted a thread which turned out to be a little interaction between fanfic authors: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3452277. Authors who have written on this site were making a list of the works they've loved so far. I think it's really helpful for others to discover previously published work.  You're going on my list😊

Marvellous writing...out of words to describe it... publish worthy :)👍🏼

You should publish, girl! :) you've got MAD skills! :D

And you were on my favorite authors list list in Laila's post. :) 

Awesome. Loved this FF. update soon and add me to ur pm list please. Thanks

wow! im absolutely speechless!
its BEAUTIFUL 👏

Wow, another great update!!im just amazed at their level of understanding with each other. One question though, Zoya mentioned that she wanted to get married so she can stay in India - did Asad understand that that was am excuse? I hope they both are under the same understanding - that their wedding is real.

love the story...pls do continue soon and also pls accept my buddy request...

Originally posted by: havokhotline

And you were on my favorite authors list list in Laila's post. :) 

Just wanted to tell you that i admire you. A lot. 

:)

Originally posted by: poojdc87

Wow, another great update!!im just amazed at their level of understanding with each other. One question though, Zoya mentioned that she wanted to get married so she can stay in India - did Asad understand that that was am excuse? I hope they both are under the same understanding - that their wedding is real.

Please keep writing. Your POV on the characters is so good, you've really gotten in their heads!