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SS: Realisations and Retaliations-chapter-11 (pg11 (Page 7)

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swethasyam08

Merging all chapters into one as requested Embarrassed

Thanks a lot swetha Hug

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Here is chapter 6
Hope you enjoy!! Smile.
Guys, you are going get introduced to your fav character now, LakhuSmile Smile Smile
Read on...

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Chapter-6


He had been alone all his life. Fighting, struggling for anything and everything. He had been brought up in an environment filled with guns and fights. They would be everywhere. It had been difficult at first, but he grew accustomed to such scenario. Unknown to him, he was automatcally drawn in. As he grew up, he realised his situation.Village people were no less insolent, calling him a najayaz, an orphan. It pained him that his own village people called him names.
But then, with a caring countenance, Datta accepted the supposed alienated child in Barahgaon.

Prithvi understood it now. Datta married him to his daughter as children, so that he would not be called an orphan anymore. But, life was holding something else for him. Datta's wife, Sudha ran away with miu, leaving behind innocent little Prithvi yet again alone. He was once again an orphan. Datta wouldn't have been able to do anything.

Datta had been caring. He cared for Prithvi like his own son. 

Comprhending his own situation was getting difficult. He was in intense turmoil. Datta, which he now wished to call as father, He was supposed to kill him! Otherwise the love of his life would be gone. He had reached a dead-end. Nothing seemed right to him. 

He badly needed to talk to someone. But who?
 Kiran's face flashed over.
Maybe, maybe she can help me. Understand me. he thought.

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Hours elapsed before Meera regained consciousness. Getting her senses back, she realised she couldn't move. Her whole body felt numb. It took her her a good number of minutes to realise she had been kidnapped, tied and gagged. She had been lying on the floor like a dumped sack. 

With a much needed effort, she shifted to her side, pressuring her elbow, she got up to a sitting position making the least posssible noise. Looking around made her realise the situation she was in, the truth finally sinking in. She found herself in a dimly lit, gloomy place, probably a warehouse, with huge rows of gunny bags stacked over and loads of hay scattered.

She had to crane her neck to look over the gunnybag she had used as a pillow. She could see no one. 

Prithvi's and Akash's image flashed before her. Tears fell. 

'Prithvi, where are you? Save me from this hell ,  she thought.

She heard faint voices. They grew louder. Acting on her instincts, she quickly lay her head on one of the gunnybag and closed her eyes, pretending to sleep.

Two men came in and sat on chairs some distance away from Meera. She dared not open her eyes, but her ears made every effort to pick up the conversation. She heard one of them speak to other. By the athority in his voice, Miu deduced he must be some important guy, while the other, an amateur, she thought. A certain word in their conversation made Miu alert and she decided to listen whatever they were talking about Barahgaon.

"...in Barahgaon. You must have heard about Lakhan. Ramdhari's younger brother. Quite fond he was of that woman."
" Really? What happened?"
"She got killed in a skirmish. Oh well, lets just say she got killed trying to save Ramdhari" 
Meera heard a chuckle.
"You seem to know everything, saab"
"Yes , I do." Another laugh. "That brute doesn't know  that she got murdered.Lakhan still thinks she died due to childbirth. Sudha Ran away with her daughter. And Ramdhari's older brother was supposedly insane."
"Ohhh"
"That whole family..."
"What ,saab?"
"That whole family I want to see in ruins. And that day is quite near. Lets just say, tomorrow."
Miu heard a long evil laugh.

She was shocked. She needed to tell everything to Prithvi, but how? 


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Dressed in a white dhoti and beige colored kurta, Ramdhari was standing at the door, ready to leave for Delhi. He was supposed to meet some officers regarding some matters concerning Barahgaon. Sudha came in with a small bowl.
"Here, dahi-cheeni"
Ramdhari smiled.
"Don't worrry, I will be back by night"
"Datta, I can accompany you. If you want , that is." Lakhan interjected with his usual evil smirk plastered on his face.
"Lakhan, there is no need.The trucks containing grains will be here anytime. After all, you have to look after the accounts here ,since Prithvi is gone now"
Sadness gripped over Datta. He missed Prithvi so much. Sudha sensing the awkward silence between Lakhan and Datta, qiuckly changed the topic.
"Ram, you must be getting late. You have to reach Delhi on time. The officers would be waiting for you"
"Yes- yes," saying Datta sat in the car. Even after the car couldnot be seen, Lakhan kept looking.

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How was it?? SmileSmileSmile



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very interesting.. sorry could not comment on part 5  but this is getting better with every chapter, well done.
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interesting and nice,
sorry couldn't comment before but i do read it Thumbs Up

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wow its getting damn exciting!!! please update soon.. you write brilliantly!!! Big smileThumbs Up thanks for the PM! Smile

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Ohh, waiting to know abt the kidnappers- seems interesting!! Cont sooon!!!

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i found this ss now and read all the part,
loved how kiran and all the family members accept prithvi...

ptithvi will definitly find a way to save both of them

please pm me when you update...

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Hello ji !! LOL
I am back!!! 
Since I took a lot of time to update( Kya karoon, too busy and very less free timeTongue)
My dear readers,
here is chapter 7 and bonus chapter 8. Big smile 


Realisations and Retaliations
Chapter 7

Sudha walked back to the living room of haveli, Prabha with her. Keeping the bowl containing curd on a nearby charpoy, sudha engaged in a conversation with Prabha.
Kalki walked iin.

"Ah, Look who's here!," kalki sneered.
Prabha turned and Sudha stood up. Walking past Prabha, she stopped in front of Kalki.

"You wanted to say something to me?" asked Sudha with a stern face.

"Ohhh, why are you back? After so many years? You are not needed here. Live your life alone. Go"

"Kalki, you have no right to question my decisions and the reasons behind my decisions," Sudha said in a domineering tone.

"How dare you! First you leave your husband for God knows so many years and then suddenly return and ask for your rights!?" Kalki said,  her voice rising.

Sudha could no longer control her anger. Her rising anger took over her mind and she blurted out something which caused much problem.

"First take care of your husband and then talk about others!" Sudha blurted out loudly.

Prabha's eyes grew wide as she heard what Sudha had said, realising the complexity of the situation. She qiuckly rushed to Kalki and held her. Kalki was shaking uncontrollably.
"No, Sudhaji, you should not have said that" said Prabha.

Sudha knew Kalki's husband was deranged, but she didn't know the real fact, for she was back in barahgaon after so many years. That he was no more.

Kalki was over ridden by emotions and anger. Her eyes were wet and tears threatened to flow anytime.

"DON'T YOU SAY ANYTHING ABOUT MY HUSBAND. HE IS ALIVE. HE IS!"
Kalki shouted, being hysterical and angry. 

Tears flowing uncontrollably, she stormed out of the room, muttering.
Sudha's eyes were wide with shock.

"WHAT DOES SHE THINK SHE IS?!"
"Jiji, please calm down. You don't know some facts," said Prabha who was doing her every bit to calm down Sudha.

After sometime, Prabha explained to her jiji that Kalki's husband was no more. He had been deranged, no doubt, doing all sorts of dangerous things. And that insanity had drowned him in the river. He was now no more.  But, Kalki was still adamant and was not ready to accept the fact. She still thought he was alive.

Sudha was now very much shockd about these happenings. She was back in Barahgaon nearly after twenty years. There was no way she could know this. 

Now she felt bad at Kalki's condition. She must have endured a lot.

xXx

Meera was now fully aware of the impending danger her family was facing. She had just realised and known the biggest truth.

Lakhan.

She had no clue that lskhan was so close to prithvi's mother. She needed to tell Prithvi everything, But how? She had no answer.

Just then, she remembered something. Something very important. She still had her mobile phone. A feeling of fear and excitment surged through her.

She was wearing a yellow kurti paired with blue jeans. She had the habit of keeping her mobile in her pocket. It was on silent mode. 

Kidnapped she was, no doubt, but these amateur kidnappers had just taken 

away her purse. She still had a chance. A flickering hope.

xXx

(Flashback)

Over scenic verdant trees, the birds chirped happily. In the idyllic village named Barahgaon, a girl, probably in her early twenties, was busy putting up wet clothes to dry in the courtyard of her small yet cosy house.

She had been living alone for the past seven years as she had lost her parents to an  disease unidentifiable at that time. She was now accustomed to living to living alone and earning her living by working as a house help in the haveli.

Pramila was still bust putting up clothes when she heard a familiar voice called out to her.
She turned to see a boy, barely twelve years old, grinning at her. She smiled.
"Good morning , didi," the boy said, with a big smile.
She walked over to him and ruffled his hair.
"Ah, Lakhu. Don't you have school today?"

"Ofcourse I do, didi. I came to meet you before going to school!"
Pramila smiled.
"You know what didi, we are going to attack chintu's shop today," said lakhan, a mischievious grin forming.
"Not again!"

He laughed. She smiled. She really like this boy.He was the kind of brother she never had. She had someone to talk to, have fun with, share talks. He felt the same.

"Chalo Lakhu, you are getting late for school"
"Yeah didi. I'll have to run. I will be here after school. Keep some parathas ready," saying he grinned.

(flashback ends)



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