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rani_rani Senior Member
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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Oh my gosh...love it. god hoew do u write so good? lol  keep up the gud work. 

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this chapter worth our wait...
they confessed...
a very important chapter for this FF...
so it happened what i wanted...
they confessed before marriage...!!!!!!!!!
loved it...!!!!!!
now i just want them to be happy always...!!!!!
w8ng for the wedding!!!!!

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
wow they confessed ...superb

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Awww this is a beautiful chapter...The most purest and amzzzing confession ever...Hats off for writing such emotions brilliantly

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Wow both confessed in their own way that too before marriage sometimes verbal confession will help us to disappear all types of insecurities..
One with nervous and flower and let it in a breath I love you other in a way very slowly inhaling but the lines so apt...
Like it

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
dat was awesome yaar...Clap
btw thanx 4 de pm. i'v been checkin my inbox lik every few mins frm yest coz u said u'l update durin de weekend. and u did.
de chapter surpassed al my expectations. his reaction when she said hi. LOL. ROFL she proposed and he told her too... and de confession was so beautiful. i'v always wondered how he was gonna tel her dat he loved her al this while but u'v done it in an amazing way... hats off... cant think f a bter way in which u cud'v done it.Thumbs Up
so wen r u gonna update next..??? Wink

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
An update!!! First and foremost congratulations on the new threadPartyit's like first drop of rain after a long drought,seriously was so happy to see the updateSmile

The update was long but yet at the end felt like its not so longSmile that addictive your writing is! This was such a fantabulous update, I never expected either of them to confess before the marriage I thought it will happen after the marriage. So this was par excellent and beyond amazing. Khushi finally gathered all the courage and took the initiative of expressing herself, so cute the way she has sent Prakash to get a rose for her to make her confession more romantic and of course to convince Arnav that her feelings are real. The sense of humour you have added through Arnav's sarcasm prior to the confession was sweet, you have written the whole scene very well even the smallest actions like how he was rubbing his eyes to get rid of the sleepiness has added a sense of realisticness and of course could imagine everything as if watching a movie. 

In return Arnav asking Khushi to sleep with him, he actually couldn't find any coherent words to express his feelings but eventually did and I'm sure the confession was far more better than what he had expected it to beBig smile  the most prominent thing in the whole update was both of them have fallen for each other for what they are, you have shown it in this update through Khushi's monologue in the beginning about Arnav and then Khushi confessing her love not knowing he is already in love with him and accepting the fact he doesn't believe in love but still gong a head with the confession simply because she has accepted his flaws just the way she embraced his good qualities.

Again a fantastic update and impatient is not the word to describe the eagerness to read the next updateWink waiting for the weddingBig smile

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shr3291 Groupbie
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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Wooowww!!!!!!! Khushi's thought proces was very nycly described.
Midnight confessionThumbs Up
Entire update was cute,mindblowing in all PERFECT:-)

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