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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Finally posting my Nivren SS which I had planned a long time ago, it's a 2 Part SS, hope you all like it Embarrassed
 
 
 
Nivren SS: Tum Jo Aaye

Nivedita was busy planning a clients wedding when she got a call from Siddharth, Siddharth is her childhood friend, they're friends for the past 20 Years and they were the best of buddies. Nivedita was busy with the decoration when Siddharth called, she picked up the call and said "Siddharth, I'll call you back later, I'm a little bit busy" and before she could cut the call Siddharth quickly said "Nivedita, I'm finally getting married" in a really excited voice, Nivedita was surprised she replied to Siddharth "What? You're getting married? To who? When?" Nivedita was going on and on with endless questions when Siddharth interrupted her and said "Why don't you come to Shimla and see for yourself". Nivedita smiled and said "Siddharth, is this something to ask, of course I'm coming and I'M planning your wedding ok" in a stern, happy way. Siddharth replied to her "Of course you will, just come over to Shimla soon". Nivedita was happy, her childhood friend was finally getting married, she had to plan everything and get ready.

At the Airport, a very handsome and stylish man was walking out of the airport with his luggage, he had black sunglasses on and was wearing a black jacket with black trousers that matched, he was Viren, Viren just came back from London, he was waiting for a cab, and finally had found one, he approached it and opened the door, he was going to sit in when he sees someone else also entering from the other side, she also spots him and they both say "Excuse me, I saw this car first" together, and they start a small argument. The driver was getting frustrated and asks them both where they want to go, they both said "Shimla" together, so the driver says "That's good, you both are going to the same destination, so why not both travel with this car together", they both had no choice as they had to reach Shimla in time and agreed. On the way the driver was going on and on talking about his Village and all, Viren was really irritated, he was already in a bad mood and the driver was getting on his nerve, he finally had enough and shouted "Can't you keep your mouth shut for some time" to the driver, the girl witnesses this and says to him "Excuse me, how dare you shout at him, he is kind enough to drive you to Shimla and you are shouting at him, what is your problem?". Viren was surprised to see the girl shouting at him and replied "You want to know my problem? My problem is that firstly my sisters getting married and to the wrong guy as well and secondly, I have to share a Cab with you and this driver is going on and on about God knows what" in full attitude and anger. Then the girl said "Excuse me, your sisters marrying the wrong person then what can we (her and the driver) do?" Viren was about to reply to her when the driver interrupted and said "If you two don't stop arguing then you will have to look for a another cab, and we are close to Shimla anyway, so its best if you look away from each other and ignore each other or one of you can leave the cab and walk to your destination instead" They both stayed quiet and looked away from each other, suddenly the car goes over a crack in the streets and jerks making Viren and the girl bump into each other and they both look into each others eyes, they were in that position for sometime, the driver sees this and says "What a Pair, first they argue and fight and now they can't even look away from each other" and he carries on driving. Viren and the girl finally come out of the trance and see that they have already reached Shimla. They both get out of the car and unknowingly stand next to each other.

Siddharth and Divya were waiting for Viren and Nivedita to come and suddenly they see a cab drive up to the house and two people come out, they quickly rushed over to them next to the car, Divya was the first to talk, she was soo happy that her Brother Viren had finally arrived, she introduced him to Siddharth, Viren was happy to see his sister again but was not really happy to see Siddharth, but for his sisters happiness he got on with Siddharth, then Siddharth saw the girl that came with Viren, she was none other than Nivedita, he saw a confused Nivedita and looking at Viren and Divya, he goes up to Nivedita and introduces her to Divya and vice versa, Divya was finally happy to see Nivedita, She says to Nivedita "I'm really glad to see you, Siddharth always talks about you and how your a really good friend and a fantastic wedding planner". Nivedita smiled and said "I've heard a lot about you from Siddharth as well and let's get one thing clear, since you now know what a fantastic wedding planner I am then I will plan your wedding, do you agree" and she puts out her hand for Divya to shake, Divya was really happy and said "Nivedita, there is no doubt about it, Of course I agree" and they both shook hands.

After that SidYa introduced Viren and Nivedita to each other, they felt awkward as know they are going to see each other a lot in the wedding. It was time for lunch so everyone went to have lunch, Nivedita met the rest of the family, Siddharth and Divya were sitting next to each other and eating Nivedita and Viren were opposite each other in the dining table and were giving each other glares after what happened in the car.

After lunch was finished Divya took Nivedita around to show her the place so she can plan the wedding, Viren went to his room and unpacked everything and after he was done he was walking around the house as he was clueless on what to do. He then saw Nivedita and Divya walking around, he looked at Nivedita closely, she looked very pretty to him, she was wearing a red dress blue and purple border which was decorated with golden embroidery work on it, her smile made him smile, her hair was flowing with the gentle breeze, in simple words she was beautiful for Viren, he was still smiling and had his arms crossed and was casually leaning on the nearest wall still staring at her.

 


(^^Nivedita's dress is something like this)

Nivedita felt someone looking at her, she looks up to see Viren leaning on the wall watching her, Viren saw that she caught him looking at her and quickly looked away and walked off, Nivedita was confused, she brushed the thought off and carried on working. Just then Siddharth came and he hugged Divya, he told Nivedita and Divya that they have to go shopping to get the outfits and both Nivedita and Divya were happy and were going to go and get ready to go and Divya quickly suggested that they take Viren too she says "Let's take Viren Bhaiyya with us, he will get to know you more Siddharth" and Siddharth also agrees with her.

 
 

To be Continued...



Edited by FizaluvsKinshuk - 16 May 2013 at 2:18pm

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Just can't get enough... Nivren once again hayeee ... continu soon babe <3

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Finally u posted it Fiza :D u know the first thing i did in my boring sunday is reading ur ss and it cheered me up :D it was like watching TMLS again but with NivRen as lead ;-) continue soon sweety. It was wonderful :-)

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged
i wanna read the next part!!!!!!
by the way i love it u made ma day

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very nice update.

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Awesome fizu,waiting for the next update

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Awesome Update fizuBig smile

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awesome update FizuBig smilewating for next partWink

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