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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
i really like ur os its v different frm others. i hope riya apni past arjun ko patha dhe. plx continue soon n plx pm me

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
so far the story is going really interesting 

thanks alot for writing 

hope arjun fills riya's emptiness with lots of love

please update soon 

eagerly waiting for next parts

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
I'm absolutely hooked to this ff and love the storyline...also loved d name. Radish for rathore.    Pls update soon n pm me too.   Thanks.  

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhaktikapasi

I'm absolutely hooked to this ff and love the storyline...also loved d name. Radish for rathore. Pls update soon n pm me too. Thanks.



thnx 4 lyking it dear.
um cn u pls add me to ur buddy list so i cn pm u?
n um i hav probz regarding sending PMs toh kabhi kabhi milega aur baqi din adjust karna parhega dear...

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaff


i really like ur os its v different frm others. i hope riya apni past arjun ko patha dhe. plx continue soon n plx pm me



ha dear i wil pm u. Pls add me 2 ur buddy 4 it.
n riya batayegi zarur...
pehle do char chamatt to mar ley..
aage aage dekho karti hu mai kya?
n trac difrnt hai, payal di ki badolat...
parte rehna,
comnt karti rehna.

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
Poem update 4 pt 8a.
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YE KAISI KHALISH, NA MALUM HAME...
YE VEERANIYA, KYU DIL ME JAGE.
HO MORA PIYA BASANTI TO RUTHE RE,
AB BOLO KAISE MANAU USE...
WOH KYA JAANE
ALBELI SANAM MORA...
DIL KI KYA MAJBOORI,
USE TO LAGE HAI, HAME BHAATI HAI YE DOORI...
UNKI LEELA NA MAI SAMAJH PAU,
CHAL KAPATI MORE PIYA,
RAJ KARE HAI DIL PE MOREY,
CHURAYE HAI MORE JIYA..
BANJAR BASTI ME WO RANG LEKE AAYE THEY,
ANDHERI RAATO K SAPNE.
KISKI NAZAR LAGI THI HAME,
BICHRE SARE APNE..
KHAFA NA HU MAI UNSE..
DUKHO KI BAHE HAI NADIYA
SAALO KARI HAI INTEJAR MAINE.
TARPI HU KAYI SADIYA...
JAB ZARURAT THI KISI APNE KI,
KOI NA THA RE MORE PAAS...
BHAYE AB CHAEN MOHE,
AAYE NA KHUSHIYA RAAS.
JAB CHAHE WO DIL LAGAYE JAB CHAHE MUH MORHE,
KYU BEDARDI PIYA MORE DIL KO TORHE?
YE NA KEHTI K UNKE DIL ME DARD NHI,
PAR MORA AB KYA?
MAI TO TANHA BAITHI RAHI,
SANAM TOH AAWE NA...
KHATA KYA HAI,
NA JAAN PAYE ABTAK,
KYU HAI WOH KHAFA,
KOI TOH BATAO KYA HAI WAJAH,
KYU MILI YE SAJA
AAP MEI TO HAI KASHISH.
TOH KARDO POORI DIL KI YE KHALISH.
__ <3 !

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Loved the poem

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