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SEQUEL OS: EMPTINESS... Last part. PLS READ PG11 (Page 6)

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Nice concept dear . Loved the story . Please continue soon

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Posted: 28 February 2013 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
awsum update... and lovely poem...
loved arjun's concern for riya...
sam and arjun convo was lovely...
hope arjun gets to know about ria's past soon...
continue soon...
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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Nice story read all parts at one go. Poor riya dont know why every time she does up in tears coz of arjun. Make him the reason for her smile also continue soon
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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by beatrice_89

Nice story read all parts at one go. Poor riya dont know why every time she does up in tears coz of arjun. Make him the reason for her smile also continue soon

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jo tumhe rula sake,
wo sacha yaar hai.
aur jo rula k khud bhi aansu baha ley,
wo sacha pyaar hai...
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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Pt. 8a
She feels his heavenly touch on her cheeks and felt.. Kash unke ehsaas me mai fana ho jau...
BUT his words...
MUJHE TUMHARI SHAKAL TAK DEKHNA MUNASIB NAHI RIYA...
ye shabd wo kabi na bhula payegi.
She jerks out of his touch...
*very cold tone*
Ri: Sir! Aap yaha kya karraehai?
Ar: tum ghar ni gai thi to mai...
Ri: Oh to aap ye dekhne aaye the k mai zinda hu ya marh gayi...
chinta na karey sir
*stresng on sir*
itni kamzor dil nahi mai k aap k baato se dum torh du...
Ar: riya...
aisi baatey kyu kar rahi ho, Im very sorry...
Ri: oh! No, no, aap, Arjun Rawte the great kyu sorry honge...
sorry toh mujh jaisi idiot ko hona chahiye na...
jo ye jante hue bhi k aap us k kabhi ni honge, aapse itna pyaar kar baithi k ab na aage barh sakti hai na peeche murh sakti hai,
aapko pehli baar jab dekha tha na,
aap me mujhe apne taqdeer ki jhalkiya dikhai di,
socha tha k aapka dard kam karne ki koshish karungi, to shayad mera dard thora kam ho jaye,
par afsos
He hugs her tight...
She pushes him away,
SLAP..
!!!!

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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Sory!
bohot chota tha nxt part coming up nxt...
do comnt n hit the lyk buttn...
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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 9:51am | IP Logged
awsum update...!!
love the way riya replies to arjun...!!!
awww arjun feeling guilty for scolding her...!!! hope he knows her past soon...!!
ooo itna chotu updateShocked
continue soon...!!

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I cnt say anything.
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