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SEQUEL OS: EMPTINESS... Last part. PLS READ PG11 (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Gud job dear..
@kunchu di..wow di such a grt compliment..congo lol
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Yyuckk i dnt lyk it
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Part 2.
Chotu n rathor com to her..
Ri: sir...woh arjun sir...?
Ra: bohot gusse mei hai, hum policwale hai riya, aksar aisa hota k kayi case hume beeti purani baate yaad dila dey...
par hume apna farz to nibhana parhega na... Khair chorho...
wo shant ho jayega, get bac 2 work.
Ri: yes sir!

par riya ka man kam pe kaha lage, she kept glancing at his cabin door, 1.5 ghante guzar gaye par arjun ne darwaza ni khola.. Dupeher k do bajne ko the, they wer 2 go 4 lunch break..
Shree n chotu came to her cabin
C: yaar ri chal, bohot bhuk lagi hai..
Sh: ha yar, aj tujhe chingri malaikari khilaunga chal..
Ri: ha tum dono jao, mai abhi ayi,
C, Sh: Par... Oh ok.
they turn to leav...
Ri: acha chotu, ek ad marathi dishes k nam bologe?
C: ri! Wat r u up 2?
kahi tu un k liye khana lejane ki nah soch Rahi na?
Ri: um...
unhone subhe se kuchni khaya aur jab kaka se chai bhij wayee tab bhi inkar kar diya..
C: ri, tu mere samajh k bahr hai,
saying so he leavs..
Sh: ar koto din? Ri...akhir kab tak?
Ri: joto din beche achi..

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
Chotu tels her the nam of few dishes..
she goes 2 cafe n ordr Kanda poha, n raita,
She takes it 2 his cabin n knocks..
no reply..
she turns the knob n enters..
the scn shocks her...
the whole cabin is in a bad state n arjun siting on the floor in a disheveld state his head resting on the couch, eyes closed, tear stains on his cheeks..
clutching a CD n the wedng photo of him n roshing...
Riya puts the food tray on the table n locs the door...
She looks at his form n is spchls...
unse kuch kehna to door ki baat wo khud kuch samajh ni paa ri thi,
woh arjun rawte jo itna tough lagta tha k patthar bhi un k saamne harh maan jaaye, ab itni vulnerable tha k ek hawa jhoka hi use torh dega,
riya ka dimaag kehraha tha k she shud leav bt her heart said, k ab jab unhe kisi ki zarurat hai, she has to b wid him bhale hi unhe manjur ho na ho,
_____
AE SANAM YAAD RAKHIYO UMAR BHAR DENGE TERA SAATH,
MANJUR HO NA HO AB NA CHORENGE TERA HATH..
ASHQ YE BEHJANE DEY
SARE RAZ KHUL JANE DEY
HU JAB YAHA MAI TO DARNE KI KYA BAAT!

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
part 3
Riya gently places her hand on his shouldr n cals.
Ri:Arjun... Aankhe kholiye..
Ar: nhi..
he grips her hand... Meanwhyl she jst realizes she dnt say SIR.
Ar: nahi, tumhe phirse mat jao mujhe chor k mai kitna akela par gaya pls na jao roshni, maine agr aankhe khol di, i knw, tum chali jaogi...
riya feels a pain in hr heart wen he cals out 4 roshni, yet.
Ri: arjun, arjun sir..
She sits beside him..
Hearng the word sir he coms out of his tranc n seeing riya he pushes her away n gets up.
Ar: Riya!!!!
how dare, you..
himmat kaise hui mere cabin mei bina ijazat k ghus ne ki,
knock karna nhi seekha kabhi?.
he pins her to the wall..
Ri: sir woh mai...
Ar: shut up! I warn u ms. Mukherjee aainda kabhi mere cabin me na ghusna..
mujhe tumhari shakal tak dekhna munasib nhi,
dur raho mujhse,
leav me alone samjhi,
Now get out..
She leavs crying..
she bumps into rathor
Ra: kya hua riya?
Ri: kuchni sir,
pls sir can i take leav today..
Ra: ha, ok bt agr koi bhi problm ho, jst let me knw.
She leavs wid tears in hr eyes.

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
nice..
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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
awsum update...!!!
loved it...!!
awww lovd riya's care for arjun...!!!
arjun se usse scold kia...!!!Cry
continue soon...!!
cant wait for the next part...!!!

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
hii dr thnxx 4 da pm...widout it main ye pad nahi pati thnx agnn...
yaappp payal n kunchu ki stryy to thi hi awsm...bt u strtd it as ur style n i like it too...gd job dr...ek aur chij tumahari mujhe bahota achhi lagti hay ke u alwas use nm of my fav food's (chingri malaikariTongue)tumhari ek ss ko rd kiyatha waha vi kuch aur food 's ke name theSilly...
ne way bahot paka liya...now da main thing...u intrduc sm new chrctr r well...riya alsop lost hr bro...poor girl...n he s arjun n rathor mentr ..intrstng...
lv da caring riya...bt arjun as all ws usko rula diaa ...bt usse pahele usne riya ko roshni samjha tha..Embarrassed...
bt arjun ki pain vi bahot bura lagta hay...n ye cd...god ab us cd ko dekhke bechara hayse thik rahegaCry
wtng 4 da next prt

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