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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 12:34am | IP Logged
nice start..
continue soon

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 12:38am | IP Logged
WOW... go for it dear... all d best,,,,
its great to know someone is planning for a sequel for Emptiness... 
thank you soo much..
and yes, my Payal writes beautiful verses..
but dont worry dear...
koi bhi the best nahi hothe...its just the love to write that pushes us ahead.. and that makes it perfect...
never underestimate your work... its special for you.. and will be always the best...
ab kaafi boring dialogs hogayi.. sorry... aaj kal Payal aka meri choti ki Di jo bani hu... tho asar tho hoga hi...
all the best...
waiting for ur update...

@Choti: ithni bhi thareef math do yaar!! aadat hojayegi!!!lol...

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
thank u ppl. So much 4 ur support and motivation i am seriously mesmerizd & overwhelmed, socha na tha aaplog itne eagr honge...
update coming very soon...

aise hi sath rehna n ill try 2 giv great updates...

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:18am | IP Logged
KOI APNA JAB BICHAR JAYE,
KOI GHAR JAB UJAR JAYE...
NA MALUM MERE HAATHO KI LAKEERO MEI KYA HAI,
JAB BHI HIMMAT KARU DEKHNE KI HAR SAPNA TOOT JAYE...
MERE TAN K YE GHAV BHAR JAYENGE, TOOTE HUE SHEESHE JUR JAYENGE..
US PE NA KARTI HU AFSOS MAI AB,
KYU DARD DENE K LIYE DAAG REH JAYENGE...
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Paisa, property yehi kya sab kuch hoti hai, log kyu ye bhul jaate hai k agr ye chale gaye to ek phir se loataye jaa sakte hai magar agar koi apna ruth jaye, bichar jaye to kabhi wapis nahi aata, koi itna lalachi kaise ho sakta hai k paise k liye khud ki patni ki jaan ley le...
us patni k jis k sath 7 phere lekar hamesha use mehfooz rakhne ki, uski raksha karne ki kasam khaithi...
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her chain of thoughts were broken as she saw arjun storming out of the interogaton room,
she lookd at rathor n chotu who wer coming out...
she tried to signal chotu 2 ask wat happnd.
he got it n replied isharo mei, a pressur cooker seeti something.
riya samajh gayi k arjun ka para char gaya..
zarur unhe roshni ki yaad agyi...
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SCROL

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal_156

Dear meri itni tareef haw..
thank u..
well its a combined effort of me n my kunchu di..
dnt wry u justice to it..
grt cs..
waitin to read more
all d best dear.!



di, tareef to unhi ki kiyi jaati hai, jo tareef k haqdar ho, n u sach me deserv it..!
n kunchu di ki to bat na kariyo, unki tareef karne gayi to Dictnary k chakkar katne parhenge...
she makes me speechless...

larka hota to unke hath chum leta... LOL!!!

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 5:09am | IP Logged
nice start...!!!
continue soon...!!

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumuZAMAN

Originally posted by Payal_156

Dear meri itni tareef haw..
thank u..
well its a combined effort of me n my kunchu di..
dnt wry u justice to it..
grt cs..
waitin to read more
all d best dear.!



di, tareef to unhi ki kiyi jaati hai, jo tareef k haqdar ho, n u sach me deserv it..!
n kunchu di ki to bat na kariyo, unki tareef karne gayi to Dictnary k chakkar katne parhenge...
she makes me speechless...

larka hota to unke hath chum leta... LOL!!!

thabks again dear!!
well ladki hu.. fir bhi agar chaho tho... i dont mind...lol...
just kidding yaar!!!

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