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SEQUEL OS: EMPTINESS... Last part. PLS READ PG11

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
hi evry1. This OS wil hav the same concept as by payal di, thorhe bohot changes honge... Har moments k sath mai kuch poetic lines dalna chahungi...
i hope ill do justic to it...
ha payal di ki tarha utna khubsurat bhale na kar pau... Ill try my best...
P.S payal di ko kabiliyat tareef,
PLEASE COMMENT.
i want to knw if i did justic to it...
Joote, tamatar, ande yaha tak GOBAR(cow dung) bhi chalega.
pleas ek chota sa comnt kar dena..
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here's the link to the original story.
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www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=345065650
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INDEX:- <3.

INTRO - Pg 1
pg 1 - pt 1
Pg 3 - pt 2(a,b); pt 3
Pg4 - pt4; pg5
pg5 - pt5b;pt6;pt7
pg6 - poem update.

pg7 - pt.8a
pg8 - pt.8b
pg9 - V.Imp.NOTE
pg11 - LAST PT.


Guyz DO U LYK THE TRACK PLEASE LET ME KNW. DO COMNT N HIT THE LYK BUTTON.

Edited by Sumu4JayD - 03 March 2013 at 8:51pm

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
go on dear
waiting 4 it
Sumu4JayD Goldie
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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
INTRO:

ACP Sameer Rathor: ETF chief,
arjun's long lost best friend.
ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte: ETF officer second in command.
Hot temprd cop..
has a tragic past.
Roshni's husband.. Riya's love..
Ms. Riya Mukherjee: ETF research specialist..
sweet n smiling but has a tragic past.
Mrs. Roshni Rawte(dead): Arjun's wife. Murdered by Sikandar.
Sikandar: very high profile criminal. Killed arjun's wife and riya's brother Avinash.
ACP Avinash Mujherjee(dead): Riya's brother, EX Chief of NCB.
(arjun n rathor's mentor. They dnt knw he is riya's brother)
Shrikanto Sen (Shree): technical expert of ETF. Riya's best friend.
Chandrakant patil(chotu): Commando ETF. Riya's friend.
Roshan: a criminal. (UNimprtnt)

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
nyc!!
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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
Dear meri itni tareef haw..
thank u..
well its a combined effort of me n my kunchu di..
dnt wry u justice to it..
grt cs..
waitin to read more
all d best dear.!

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:28pm | IP Logged

interesting cs...
continue soon...
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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
waiting 4 it
...anika... IF-Sizzlerz
...anika...
...anika...

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Interesting CS.
Got me hooked up to the story.
Meri pyari behna,jaldi jaldi story update karna.

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