I was super tired after my kid's bday party and had logged off...was all set to go to bed too..but a glance at the forum through my phone made me realize that you have given your chapter 2..i logged in again to read and comment.
1. Thank you for the timely update. You have made a promise and you have kept it up..I really appreciate that. I know its becomes tough some times but still..you didn't let your readers down..wonderful
2. chapter 2 was good. another peak at both Ashutosh and Nidhi. Both the characters are still in the formation stage so its tough for me to visualize their complete personality...esp Nidhi's..for me, so far, Nidhi is still a closed book. I like that.
3. Ashutosh on the other hand, is open. his thoughts have come out..some through his own reflections and some through Mallika and Ranganath.
4. aahh..another nice touch..Ranga and Anji are already married!! Anji is a fashion designer here too? or have you changed her profession?
5. Mallika is a grey one i guess..tough to say at this stage. but i read that you have already replied to Anjani's question that she is not going to be negative. hhmmm..interesting...i think i like this too...will be waiting to see how you will handle this situation...
all in all, well done Pansy. Really a great job!! it doesn't look like your first FF at all..