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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
I just need to find words to write here and not let my clogging throat and trembling fingers take over!

Right now, I just want to let myself cry but I have to hold the tears back. I got this strange feeling in the pit of my stomach after reading the title and I knew instinctively that it's something that's going to get the better of my emotions. I was right.

In the promising and colourful life as youth, we often forget what we leave behind, what time we waste on trivial things, the things which will attract us with their glittering glory while hiding the people who will be the most needed and who will be remembered when we see the real dullness of what we were running after. We seldom realise the missed hugs, the unreturned calls and the never-spoken feelings towards our mother. Only when the one person who can take any hurt and insult by us on herself and still return love and peace, is gone, do we crave for her. We crave for her loving caresses and the beneficial scoldings, we crave to hear her voice and to see her smile... We wish for time to turn back and rectify every juvenile stupidity we did when we had her presence with us in abundance.

I know this one piece has come out from your heart and it means too much to you, a lot more than I can imagine. But trust me Avi, I cannot express in words how much this one has touched me deep within and has me wanting to make the best use of the time that I have my mother around.

And now I'm crying! Thank you Avi, for sharing one part of your heart here!

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This was SO heart touching!

and i believe every teenager can relate to this 

Amazingly written, loved loved loveddd it
totally!

loved the flow, the smoothness the genuineness, brilliant choice of words!

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I Love my mom!

The way you written it gave the feeling of Guilt from a Kid to mother. With Simple words, you told so much mature things, that The Moments of Kid with a Mother are Priceless. Keep Writing.Hug Regards.



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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by had2bu

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

I Love my mom!

The way you written it gave the feeling of Guilt from a Kid to mother. With Simple words, you told so much mature things, that The Moments of Kid with a Mother are Priceless. Keep Writing.Hug Regards.




Thanks Hug
my pleasure. Btw, I'm Dev:)

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